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RECAP : MANAN AND CAVYA BONDING. MANIK PLANNING TO PROPOSE NANDHINI ON FIRST ANNIVERSARY

CHAPTER 4

Manik planned everything perfect. From complete beachside candle light dinner to his not-so-dreamy proposal. But suddenly Manik got a call. The caller informed him of a girl who met accident near xyz. It was Manik's number on speed dial. Manik felt scared because it could be Nandhini, Mukti, Alya...even Navya... he was not ready to loose any of them. With lots of self control Manik drove to hospital. Once reached, his world come crushing down on his feet. It was Nandhini. Manik saw her from outside ICU ward... keep looking... No tears... no emotions on his face...but the pain in his heart was unbearable.

He answered Cabir's call like a robot n told him abt his whereabouts n Nanhini's condition. Fab 5 with Navya reached there. Navya was crying historically in Cabir's arms. But Cabir's concern was Manik. Whole Fab 5 tried to console him but he was expressionless. Finally the doctor announced Nandhini to be stable. Next scond Manik slumped on the chair next to him.

Few hours later, doctor allowed visitors. Navya eventhough wanted to run to Nandhini, she pushed Manik inside her ward. Manik walked lifelessly inside n Cabir hugged Navya for understanding Manik's needs.

Nandhini was laying pale n weak with few machines attached to her body. She opened her eyes when felt something wet on the eyes. Manik stood there, bending his face right infront of hers. She smiled weakly at him. But manik was still expressionless. He looked at her intently n whispered

Manik : I LOVE YOU NANDHINI ...n he fainted on her kissing on her forehead. Due to his body weight he almost slip from bed and fell when Druv and Cabir catched him.

Fab 5 and Navya who entered the second the heared Nandhini's scream when she felt Manik unconscious, admitted Manik in room next to Nandhini's when they failed to make him conscious.

Nandhini Pov

Manik... manik love me? He loved me all this time and I thought he was not interested in me. I love him... oh god ... how stupid I was... I failed to see his love. Aur aaj... aaj usko behosh thekar mere dil rukhgayi. Main uske bina nehi jeesakti. I cant loose him. Please Ayyappa Manik ko kuch nehi hone chahi hai. Please.. se shed silent tears praying for her love's life.

Pov ends

Doctor announced that Manik faint due to physical and mental exhaustion. Nandhini's accident shook him to core that he almost WANTED to loose his sanity and 2 days of non balance meals just weakened his health. He was given anesthesia to calm his mental pressure. Cabir went to meet with Nandini.

Nandhini : how is Manik?

Cabir smiled n say : vo teek hai u don't worry. Nandhini I want to tell you something. I know ki iye sayi waqt aur jaga nehi hai but I want u to know this so that when manik wake up, u know how to handle him.

Nandhini look at Cabir curiously. Cabir hesist but eventually stated

Cabir : Nandhini... Manik used to be in mental asylum for 2 months after his father's disappearing.

He was talking, playing, singing and all but he imagined his fater with him all the time. Some other student even thought ki Manik was talking to his father's ghost. It took to him months to belive that his father is not with him. Fab 5 become his strength. He just trusted our words. Uske baad his business and music kept him busy but till now we know ki he miss him father. When u come in his life he never miss uncle. He remembered him for sure but only the good memories which kept him happy. Yesterday he planned to propose u but this... he didn't show a single emotion till he met u. he needs assurance that u wont leave him like his dad. He needs you nandhini n for that u have to get fine.

Nandhini closed her mouth with her palm to control her sobs. Her manik experienced all this. She cursed Ayyappa for sending her this late in his life. But somehow she knew Fab 5 was there. She promised on Manik that she will never ever leave him. She gives a teary smile to Cabir nodding her head

Starting from that day Manan were insepareable. She wanted to stay with Manik in his house but Manik assured that he was fine with their few hour separation. Navya balanced her love for her bhai and boyfriend. Cabir also gets equal love from Nandhini. both girls didn't miss any occasion to make both guys feel special. Aliya and mukti were partner in crime when NanNav play prank on guys. Finally it was Manik';s graduation when he finally proposed Nandhini in a perfect candle light dinner.

Manik took care of both Malhotra industries and also Fab 5 was getting more and more famous. Nandhini and Navya played Cupid between Druv and Aliya and three pairs were set in Fab 5. It was the day before nandhini's graduation

Manik : nandhini?????? tum iss waqt???? Kal teri graduation hai na??? koi problem hai kya??? Tum akele aayi ho???? Navya kahan hai ????

Nandhini : manik saas to lo... main iyehi tumhe surprise thene aayi.. that's it...

Manik glare at her showing the time to her.. 3am... She grinned like child earing Manik's chuckle. He took her in a warm hug. Suddenly it started to rain. Since they both were in backyard, infront of swimming pool. When they started to run, Nandhini slipped taking Manik with her inside the pool.

They both stood taking each other's help. The water was upto their chest . nandhini's white top looked like second layer of skin. Manik lost in her. He traced his finger from her waist to her cheek through her arm. Nandhini shudder in his touch and move closer, fisting his shirt collar.

Manik cherished her each and every reaction. She looked like an innocent angel from heaven in her white top. Manik lifted her and take her out of pool and let her stand on floor but not even a inch of distance between both. Nandhini's lips shiver in cold and passion. Manik cupped her face and traced his lips from her forehead to her eyes, cheeks, nose and finally stop at her lips. Even if he die out of passion no way he gonna kiss her without her will.

Nandhini who was lost in his lip's movement on her skin, opened her eyes when felt the lost of warmth. She looked into Manik's eyes and understood his desire and his wait for her permission. Her respect for him increased. She closed her eyes n pull him closer. That's it. He kissed her like never before. This is their first kiss but it seems like their last because Manik was eating Nandhini's lips. Nandhini's response fired his desire. The cold night add to their passion. Manik pull her closer till not even air can pass.

Nandhini felt weak in her knees. Manik raised her thighs and wrapped around his waist and banged her back to the nearestwall. Their kiss continued till their lungs screamed out for air. Manik left her lips in joined their foreheads. Manik's hands still continued their job of roaming around Nandhini's waist inside her top.

30 minutes later, they both straightened theirself and nandhini blush to the darkest shade of pink. Manik drived her to hostel. Both cherished their memories together, their first kiss, their first act of desire.

Next day

Nandhini and Navya entered Space Auditorium but something was weird

Navya : Nandu...hamare kapde mein koi prob hai kya? Innlog hame aisi kyu dekrai hai (every girl look at them with disgust while boys smirked)

Nandhini : idk Navyu, but something is wrong. Aur yeh Manik aur Cabir kaha? Keheraha tha ki humse pehle iyeha hoga... Aur saathme Cabir ko bhi late hone diya... aane do donoko

Navya : sahi keherai hai tu... aaj hamare last day hai iyeha... atleast we wont be meeting until we search for a good reason to be in Mumbai. Varna Aunty aur babuji hamari jaan lelenge...

nanNav had a heartly laugh when soundly there was an announcement " Nandhini Murty report youself in Principal's room right now" everyone realized that the announcement itself made by principal in a very stern voice. NanNav shrug their shoulder and reach principal's room.

Prnci : I didn't expect this from you Nandhini. you was a bright student but this is totally disgusting n he throw his phone infront of Nandhini.

Prici : just because today is your last day over here. I couldn't do anything. Now get out u both.

Navya dragged Nandhini who was in tears. Navya hardly could control herself from blasting. It was an MMS. MMS of manan passionate kiss. But the thing is, manik's face was morfed. It was only Nandhini kissing a guy wildly. The thought of everyone in Space watching it make Nandhini ashamed of herself. She needed manik right now. To tell her that everything was ok. Nothing changed. To help her find the culprit. She run away from Space to Malhotra Mansion. Before she an knock Manik opened the door. Nandhini hugged him telling him everything. But Manik was cold. Nandhini aske him not to worry his face was not there.

Manik : jab mene hi iye kaam kiya hai tho obviously I know right n he chuckled

Nadini look at him. He was smirking but his eyes...his eyes were saying something else. But Nandhini choose to ignore it. She was in pain...great pain

Nandhini : manik y r u lying. Kaho na sach kya hai. I know tum aisa kuch nehi karsakti. Mere Manik aisa nehi hai

Manik : shut up miss Nandhini Murty.. sach iyehi hai... just accept it... I just had fun with u.. ab tum jaarai hai to socha ki tujhe unforgettable memory thu.. that's it

Nandhini tried one last time : swear on me... swear on our love kit um sach boldrai ho

Manik stopped breathing for a second but regained his composure : oh come on Nadini...ab mein keherai hu ki pyaar hi nehi hai to promise kis baath ki. But just to make u believe I swear on myself kyunki I love only myself so I swear ki hamara rishta ek joot tha... n right after that Nandhini gave at tight slap on his face n ran way

The MMS went viral tat within 1 hour Nadhini's mom send her driver to pick up Nandhini. nandhini was about to enter the car when Manik held her hand. Se didn't need to turn to know who it was. Manik plead her to listen to him but Nandhini could not stand his presence also.

Nandhini : Manik Malhotra agar tumharo moo se ek aur shabd bhi aayi to I will kill myself right here... manik;s grip loosend n she left

In car her heart wonder why did he care if she die but her mind consoled that he just didn't wanted himself to get into trouble. Nandhini's mom send her to London but never utter a single word. Her face showed Nandhini how disappointed she is. Nandhini hate herself for doing this but she hate Manik more that she hate herself. She wished to never see him again n left to London to take care of her business. She lost her passion, her mom and her love all in one day.

Present

Nandhini come out of her past with Cabir stopping the car a jerk.


NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi its superb story dear loved it a lot really feeling bad for manik and excited to know how is he what had happened please update fast can't wait
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Originally posted by: amu0611

Hi its superb story dear loved it a lot really feeling bad for manik and excited to know how is he what had happened please update fast can't wait


Thanks alot for supporting me... hope i can always write upto your expectation...
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RECAP : Manan first kiss became viral in MMS. Manik confessed his intention about Nandhini and Nandhini going to London

So ab no more flashback... all in present n yea still Manik's side of story is here but not too long...

CHAPTER 5

Nandhini, Navya and Cabir having lunch in a restaurant in their way. Less eating more of playing with their food since no one have desire to fill their growling stomach. Navya holds Nandini's hand which was on her lap and Cabir turn to her.

Cabir : Nandhini... whatever we three know is just a part of the truth. Manik ki koi galti nehi hai. U know I treat u as a sister. Obviously agar Manik ki galti hoti to I will be the first one to block his path towards you. Itna to vishwas karthi ho na tum ?

Nandhini nods her head because her culprit was only Manik and her own heart not anyone else and definetly not Cabir and Navya or Fab5.

Navya assured Cabir thatshe will continue ...

Flashback of doom day.

Manik was the first one to get the MMS from an unknown number. When he called back the number it was unreachable. He tried calling Nandhini but couldn't reach. Before he can call cabir he receieved call from ame num. when he answered what he heard shook im to the core.

It was his father's voice. Jiski awaaz sunnekeliye vo tadapraha tha unki awaaz... he could only hold the phone tightly by his ears n let his tears flow freely.

Manik Father (Rajeev Malhotra) was weak n Manik recognize it by his voice. Before he can ask anything the pone was snatched and some unknown voice started to speak to him. The demand in return of his father was HIS LOVE. He has to admit himself being the one who created the MMS to get his father back. But can he do that? No...never ever he can hurt his Star. But something that he craze for years can be reached by his sacrifice. ( now don't ask me why didn't he check.. because I potrayed Manik as someone emotionally weak from the beginning of story so this was bound to happen...this is not devil Manik,... Just a child Manik who craved for someone to be his..only his)

When the person realize Manik not gonna accept the demand, he made Manik hear RM scream. Manik don't know what he did but he can understand that his father in great pain. But to reduce his pain how can he give pain to Nandhini. then he thought, Nandhini always understood him without his word. He knew Nandhini will never believe even he by himself say anything against their love.

His trust on Nandhini

His trust on their love

His trust on their understanding

His trust on their khamoshi

Made him took this decision. He agreed. He agreed to give this pain to Nandhini because he believed it will be temporary as Nandhini will never believe his words. Will never leave him. Will listen to his justification no matter what happen. Because it was her... His Nandhini. Just then he felt Nandini hug him. He realized the caller on line. He acted but his eyes reflected his truth. When Nandhini ask him to swear on their love he couldn't so he did it on himself. Once Nandhini ran away the caller him an evil laugh n end the call. Nandhini called his private inverstigators n gave them the news and drive to Nandhini's ostel. He knew she will believe him and he will beg her for the pain he gave her.

Once reached, he saw Nandhini going inside a car. He was hurt that she couldn't ubderstand his unsaid words.but how can he lat his love go. When he tried to sop her her request made him numb n he left er.he couldn't believe that Nandhini didn't believe him. She didn't wait for him. Was their love so weak that fall apart just by his word. Why didn't she fight for him like he thought. He was walking backwards until he realize he cant live without her. Hedrove in his car to reach her. He need to clarify himself. If she cant fight for them. Then let him fight. He will...till his last breath

Flashback ends

Cabir hugged Nandhini seeing her crying like a kid. They never saw her crying out loud. Not even Navya because Nandhini always controlled herself not to show her vulnerable side to world. But now...

He trusted her to the extent that he believed she will be his side no matter wat. She will fight for the... he trusted... But wasn't it was her who made him believe so... that day when he fainted in hospital afater Nandhini's accident. When Manik got conscious he was greeted with Nandhini'slong lecture of not taking care of himself even though she by herself was very weak. Then when Manik said he was afraid everyoneleaving him. Nandhini assure h]im

Nandhini : no matter what happens... tum kuth hi mujhe door kyu na jaane de.. I will always stand by yourside... Hamesha... jab tak mein hu...tumhari saath hongi... aiyappa promise...

Nandhini remembered what she said. She understood his insecurities. She thought he will take time to trust her. But he did it the minute she said it... hamesha but it was she wo break her promise.

Cabir : Nandhini samalo apne aapko... u need to be strong... for u...for him...for your love

Then suddenly it strike Nandhini... if he come behind her why didn't he reach her. She was in Mangalore for 5 days before depart to London. Sheswitched off her phone but once she opened it there was no message or call from anyone.. not even Navya.. but she shrug it off n throw her phone in her room n went to airport. Never did once she looked back in these five years.

Navya continued understanding Nandhini's unsaid word. : who aaya tha tumhe samjane...but...but...(even she start to cry but Cabir assured her)... hemet an accident..with a fast truck...he didn't notice it and it just throw him in a nearby lake. Vahaki log unhe lake se bahar leaayi but that impart was so strong ki unhe bohot sara chod laggaya... and we admitted him... uss accident ki vajese vo 4 days unconscious thi...on the 5th day..he start to sink...bohot koshisho ke baad unhe hosh aaya...after that he was not the Manik we knew... He was aloof from all of us... shimla aagayi...we succeed in avoiding media and made it look like he disappeared.

Cabir : iss 5 years he stayed like this.. jiss ghar mein vo rehethi hai vaha kisisko bhi aane nehi deta...except Navya... Apna behen maana hai na... she is the only connection e has with outer world.

Nandhini : but u said...his...voice

Cabir and Navya look at each other...

Navya : he lost it in the accident Nadhini

So for now that's it...

Precap : manan meeting... Manik's reaction shocked Nandhini..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very emotional update. At least Nandini could gave him a chance to explain. He trust her so much. Will manik get angry or what on seeing Nandini. Thanks for the update. Keep smiling and be positive. Waiting for next update. Forgot to tell you happy raksha bandhan😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing part
please continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful update dear no words to say I really wait for ur updates it's very emotional and I think manik voice was not gone bcoz of accident
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I read it in a go it's awesome I loved it pls pls pls continue soon pls
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Awesome update...
really want to know ...how manik will react after seeing nandini...
plz do update next chapter soon..
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