Ishra OS : Tujhme Hi Rahoon Main

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Note- Hi all...I am not satisfied with the response i am getting after sending almost 280 + pms.I am going to cut down my buddy list so if you want to continue receiving them,do like this update or comment below...

And now for the update 

So am back to torture you all with another OS of mine.
This time on the request of my buddy Nishani (Niii) who suggested me the characters of Ishra

Hope you all like it
 
                  Tujhme Hi Rahoon Main

It was a regular day for Ishita Rai as she served up an espresso for her customer.
Yes she was the head waitress at a coffee shop in one of the silent areas of the city.

Their customers normally people who would stop on their way out of town and not the regular businessmen.

She was one of the sweetest person around in the shop and the customers used to even chat off their time with her.

One evening,there came a man.
Ishita's eyes were immediately drawn towards him.
He was not the type of a regular customer to come here.
He was a handsome man with dark deep eyes,chiseled body and gelled hair and with a guitar in his hand and a stylish hat that gave his look an edge.

The coffee shop owner went over and had a talk with him and they shook hands then.

Ishita wondered who was he and what was that thing that attracted her towards him like a magnet.

Ishita continued serving the customers and when finally she could handle the eagerness anymore she went upto the coffee shop owner,Krishnan Pai

I-Umm...sir who is that man over there?
Your old friend?

K-No no...He is Sameer...Sameer Raichand
An aspiring musician.
He will be playing guitar in our shop.

I-Oh okk...

K-So what say...an Ishita special for him maybe considering you clearly look smitten by him.

I-Sir...anyways I will surely serve him something soon.

K-Ok

Ishita to herself
I-Hmm...Sameer
You surely must be something that I am already feeling something for you even when I have not talked to you.

She prepped up a espresso and went upto him.
He looked up and he was lost.
Lost in her angelic face,her cute nose and her beautiful almond shaped eyes and rose petal lips.

I-Uhh...here is an espresso.
Welcome to Pai's.
Hope we have a great time working together.

And she went.He was still in a trance and lost in her words.
S-We will surely do.
I am very sure about it.

As the evening passed..Sameer was about to present his 1st song in the shop.

S-Ladies and Gentlemen,A very good evening to one and all.
I am performing for the very first time here and on a special song dedicated to the special someone in your life.

As he strum his guitar to the tunes of the song and sang,

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..


As the song ended,the customers present burst into a round of applause.

Their eyes locked and time stood still.
As the shop closed for the night,Ishra bumped into each other just outside the entrance.

S-Oh...sorry... sorry

I-No worries...
BTW the song you sang was beautiful.
I loved it

S-Thank you...thank you so much.
Should I drop you back home ?

I-No no...it's ok
I live just around.i will manage.

S-Ok if you say so.
Mind if I accompany you because even i rented a house by the corner.

I-Sure sure no problem.

I (in mind)-How am I so comfortable with him when I have hardly known him for such hours.

S (in mind)- This girl has entrapped me in her.
I cannot seem to get enough of her.

As they walked down to their homes,she was about to take his leave
S-You live here?

I-Yup...

S-Thats great cause I live just 2 bldgs away from you...see that's my home

I-Wow...now that's nice.
So I will see you then...Tomorrow

S-Sure...byee

And that's how their friendship flourished.

Everyday she would serve her customers and he would liven up the atmosphere by his songs.

There were times when she would just admire him and be lost in his dreamy voice.

While on the other hand it was no different for him.
He used to sing songs all thinking about her.

Both knew there was something they both felt for each other but were scared to acknowledge  or profess it.

It became a routine for them to go together after the shop closed wherever he used to drop her.

One evening
S-Ishita why don't we go somewhere...I mean it would be a great change from all this and I have already asked Sir

I-Ok...if you insist

Ishita was hesitant but didn't have the heart to tell no to him.

S-Ok then be ready at 7 tomorrow evening and I will pick you up from your home.

I-Ok...done

Though Ishita had a calm face on...inside she was like a teenager who was jumping with joy on going with her date.

Next day in the evening,
Ishita was ready in a simple white top with blue jeans.

He was there near her home by 7 looking smart in a black tshirt and blue jeans and his trademark hat.

He took her on a car which shocked her.
I (in mind) -Wow...such a big car
Aspiring musician but has a car...hmm interesting.

He felt elated seeing her reactions,he could  just stare at her face all life long and never be bored.
She surely had him under her control and he didn't seem to mind.

They reached a place when he took her to the rooftop.
There she was awestruck with the beautiful ambience.
Flowers,Candles,light music and everything.

She was admiring it all when he put forward his hand and she instantly held his without hesitation as he took her along and made her sit.

He sat across her.
He held her hand across the table and said
S-Ishita...I have been wanting to say something since long but kept silent not wanting to disturb anything between us but not anymore.

Ishita felt a chill run down her spine and shivered.

He held her hand and placed a soft kiss.
Her eyes immediately closed feeling in the kiss.

S-And before that I want to tell you something.
He removed his hat and his fake moustache.

Ishita was shocked seeing this.
I-Raman Bhalla,the ace guitarist.
Are you seriously him.
Omg

R-Yes,Sameer aka Raman Bhalla

I-But why would you pretend to be an aspiring musician and work in a small coffee shop when you are rocking the whole nation with your lovely tunes.

Ishita said with astonishment in her voice.

R-For you

I-Me?
But I have never met you before

R-You don't remember but you were the emcee of one of my shows.

I-Ohh

R-Yes and the moment I saw you and heard your voice I knew that you are my life partner and the soul of my life.

Ishita was awestruck and couldn't say anything.

Flashback

I-Hello and Welcome to the nation's heartthrob and ace guitarist Raman Bhalla's rocking concert.
Before we begin and call the man himself on stage let's have a glimpse of his songs.

After the glimpse,
Now can we have some noise for RB.

And she continued...

Raman was in a trance seeing her.
She was dressed in a yellow crop top and a blue skirt.

Her voice...the right zing...sweet yet powerful with the way she interacted with the crowd.

I-And now for the man himself...presenting The Raman Bhalla Live nowww...

And the crowd erupted in an applause and lots of hooting.

He wanted to go upto her and talk but he had to go for the concert now.

Flashback ends.

R-I wanted to talk to you after the concert also but then you were not there.

Ishita was blushing and lowered her eyes and said
I-How did you find me here

R-Love...your love made me find you here and I don't want to lose you again.So...

He went upto her and went down on his knees.

R-Miss.Ishita Rai,we may not know each other since long but the day i saw you 1st I knew no one else other than you can be my companion and soul mate forever and these days which I spend you have only strengthened my belief.
I Love You Ishita,will you marry me and be Mrs.Ishita Raman Bhalla

Ishita was shocked and tears fell from her eyes.
R-Sh...these are precious and don't deserve to fall like this.
If you don't like me then...

Ishita silenced him by placing her finger on his lips.
I-The RB is proposing to me and I will tell no.
Have I gone mad.
I also feel in love with you and your voice Mr.Sameer Raichand urf Raman Bhalla.

Raman pulled her closer as her inhibitions were also shedding and she wound her hands around his neck.
I-One more thing.

R-What

I-I Love You too...

R-Haaye

He tucked away the strand which blocked his view of her face and caressed her cheeks.

R-One more surprise for you.

He went ahead and sat on a high raised chair and took his guitar.

R-A special song for the Love of My Life

He began to strum the tunes and sang

Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana

Mujhko alfaaz bana lo
Dil ki aawaaz bana lo
Gehra sa raaz bana lo jaana

Nasha hoon main behakne do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do

Ishita was in a trance hearing him and every word he sang ignited deeper passion for him.

She could not believe that the Raman Bhalla was her would be now.

Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana

Mujhe apne sirhaane pe
Thodi si jagah de do
Mujhe neend na aane ki
Koi toh wajah de do

Hawa hoon main lipatne do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do

Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana


She went to him and hugged him from behind gently kissing him on his cheeks.

Tere sang guzar jaaye
Yeh umar jo baaki hai
Hass do na zara khul ke
Kaahe ki udaasi hai

Subah hoon main aane do
Mere kaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do

Mujhko barsaat bana lo
Ek lambi raat bana lo
Apne jazbaat bana lo jaana...


As the song ended,he kept his guitar aside and pulled her into his lap shocking her initially.

R-Ishita...this song just makes me feel and want you all the more and your actions ,I...

He leant in and pulled her more closer and kissed her.

The kiss...an outpour of their emotions starting as a slow and gentle but turning into a deep and passionate one soon and both seeking to dominate each other.

They parted to catch their breath.

R-You are made only for me...I Love You Ishita...I love you so much.

Ishita just blushed under his gaze as he held her in his embrace.

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Cute  os Hetvi Edited by mayasundar - 7 years ago
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Very beautiful OS hetvi😛
Beautifully written   👏
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Hetuuu🤗
Thank you😳
Fabulous,loved it...
So sameer raichand n RKB are same,main starting main hogayi after learning that he's sameer...but I knew ki tum koi twist laaogi...
He worked at that coffee shop just for her❤️...
Love at first sight😳
The confession...perfect,Raman😳...I love him...ishita toh was flabbergasted, she was an emcee for one his concerts, cool...
Ishita couldn't even recognize him😆
The kiss☺️
I love both the songs...

❤️
Edited by -Nii- - 7 years ago
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Superb stry Hetvi Raman babu in disguise for his lady love huh and it was sooo cute of him yaar and d way he proposed her Itz soo cute and even ishita fell for him in first sight and their gradual frndship Itz really awesome yaar atlast they both are one now loved it
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Res 😳
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Unres...

Omg this was just 😳 ...i tjought he will be raman but didnt expected him to be aspiring singer...i thought some other problem thats why he is hiding...but him being singer and then searched her did freeindship and proposal ❤️ ❤️ ...i just loved it... 😳

Superb...do write more like this...

It was fun... 😳 Edited by --abha-- - 7 years ago
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Beautiful hetvi
Loved it
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Very nice os
Very different and interesting
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Lovely story..
Raman worked as sameer at coffee house for her
He fell in love with her at first sight..
Ishita too fell in love with him
Both confessed
Loved it!
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Nice OS Hetvi..
She felt attracted to a stranger..
He liked her at instant..
They were friends..
Then they started their feeling mutual...
His revelation was shocking & surprising to her..
His confession was sweet,,
They r happy at the end..
Nicely written..