MANAN FF LIFE-PARTNER by DESTINY IMP note for continuing in wattpad141 - Page 81

Awesome update ...& super long ... how do u do it ... every time !!! Hats off to you !!!

Thank u for an awesome chapter!!

Hey dear the update was among ...

finally I'm reading this story...

chapter 58A

I just loved it...

Nandini framed her hands around his neck.
"Woh Kya hai na...Jaisa beta... Waise dad...when they are angry than they don't understand simplest thing..." she tippy toes her feet and touches her noses with his...aaa love it so much the way she touches her nose with his...they would be looking so cute..
"I just explained him the difference between the importance
of your wishes and his worries... and he understands...
that's it..." she smiled.
"That's it..." he was surprised.pyaar se aaram se samjhao toh samjh jaatein hai...gussa kar ne se problem aur badh jati h

Manik was really happy that she n his dad r gelling up well...generally FIL N DIL don't get much tym for interaction n all...


It's when he noticed that she is wearing a backless blouse.
"Oh ho ho... what's going on... yeh peeche ka kahan hai..."
he asked covering her back with his broad palm. heheee liked it the way he said peeche ka kahan hai..

nandu cares for him so much that she dressed up like that way which covered her up fully ... MIL n hubby dono ki baat rakh li ussne...bravo


Nyonika and Nandini 's part was very nice, cute and lovely...The way she showed her concerned towards nandu...i just loved it...

Then Manbir part was superb and adorable also... it was first time to see cabira like this...behaving, cribbing n whinnying like a baby.. He wants to put haldi on Navya first...but was feeling shy and all...how cute this was...!


Manik and Mukti's part was kinda emotional...
Mukti shared her worries with her brother... n Manik assured her...
When u hv brother like manik in ur life u dont need to get worried...

Then Nandini and Navya's part was soo good...I really liked their bond...
Navya asked her about pullu thing...but on behalf of Nandini Mukti answered because she Knows her brother very well that how possessive he becomes...but nandu handled the situation...


Haldi cremony was Superb...
I really enjoyed haldi rasam of all the couples specially MaNanz...and I really liked the decoration pics... good choice...


Navya wanted her jiju at her rasam... sooo cute...in small time span navya n manik had also bonded very well...it's good when ur best friends gelled up well with ur spouse as well... so now these four shares good bond..manan n cavya...

Naughty Manik ...he wants to apply haldi on his beloved wife ...
everyone was teasing her but Manik being Manik didn't care about this at all...kare bhi kyun majnu ko teasing se koi farak nahi padta hai bas romance ka chance milna chahiye...That part was sooo cute and amazing...

But Nandini got upset with him doing it in front of everyone...hawww... majnu ji jaldi jaao or manalo usse...

Mukti's haldi ritual...Nyo mom become emotional...maa ka dil jo hai..Then Manik and mukti 's part was lovely...

Opppsss... Boys in one room ... and girls in one rooms...
How will they stay away from each other...?? agar door rahenge toh ladai kaise finish karenge???ufff

Then Manbir Part...Manik isnt less than a baby...really loved it when he cribs like babies to be close to nandu...

Then last part was blissful and beautiful too. When he saw his life is sleeping so peacefully he felt so content ...Loved the way he kissed her.
Then he apologised to her...ending on such a cute note...hayeee

now running to read it part B...*running*

before I give my reviews on update... i wanna answer your note...

Now coming to the important point
I'm trying to end this story...whattt??? seriously?? no yaar u shouldn't...

Because I'm loosing interest. as people already left the forum and they joined wattpad... if we hv joined wattpad then we haven't left IF also...

And I'm not getting enough time to continue writing
It's not that I don't want to write, I love writing but and
this story has still so much to offer.

But,
The response has become so low
And I think we writers take lots of efforts to write but
the lack of response is very discouraging.
when the story has lots in it to offer then don't end it soon...yaar...please.. please...

I'm not complaining, I know it's been more than a year
since ky2 ends and people do not want to stay here
anymore. They moved on
I tried to work on wattpad but I couldn't get it.
So in future if I write anything then I will try to write on
wattpad
But taking so much of time to update the stories is not
worth anymore
I think...
So what you guys say.
I can understand ur point also low response disheartened everyone... in this I can't do anything... but for silent readers u can do something... u can PM update the chapter to only those who comments...

n rahi baat writers moving on wattpad... it is may be because they aren't getting good response here but over there they r getting good response...
I'm not writer so can't say much about their swapping of sites...

but as a reader I can tell u commenting on wattpad is way more easier...

when u will start using wattpad u will get used to it...
in the starting it becomes little difficult to work with any new site but slowly-2 u learn it...

what I think is...
u shouldn't end it...I wanna read it...
n u hv to go to their future also where u showed us surprise peak in...

so what I was thinking ...if u like u can apply it...
u can end the story over here n can continue on wattpad with its season2 like its sequel..
season 1 is already posted by ur friend so there won't be any problem with its continuation over there...

if u get any problem with working on wattpad I'm there to help u out n many more people r there...
but please don't stop writing
pleaseee..

finally now I can give my reviews...

chapter was so big so sooo big that now I'm unable to understand from where should I start commenting.

I fell in love with this story more by this chapter... nandini n manik r making me fall in love...making me dream fairytale... ohh goddd what should i do now???

starting hi chapter itni cute thi kya bataon...

manik couldn't sleep even a second without nandu...awww
n nandu slept because she was very tired but when she woke up she was guilty... omg can anyone be more innocent than her...?

Yeh Kya...no good morning, no morning kiss... subah
subah Rone lag gayi..."trying to tease her he lift her face to
him. ...awww she toh started crying... awww her heart is like of baby only...
yes yes nandu he is saying right...aise koi wish karta h kya??
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"Naraaz bhi tum he thi, sorry bhi tum hi bol rahi ho aur
ab ro bhi tum hi rahi ho..." he said and pecked her
forehead again...[/color] yup he is right...khud hi sorry bol rahi ho...

he pressed his lips together and continued. "but Kya karun I don't want to waste any chance to be with you always..you
know.. I want to be with you in my every life.. I want
you to be my LIFE PARTNER, that's why I did that..". He
said... just loved this dialogue n nanduz reply too...

He rest his head
on her chest grabbing her waist with his left hand and
resting his right hand under her head.
"I missed your smell..". I JUST LOVED IT THE WAY U WROTE THIS... I SO LOVE HIS SLEEPING STYLE... HIS HEAD ON HER CHEST N SHE RUFFLING HIS HAIR...
SO TRUE FOR MANIK SHE IS HIS HUMAN STUFF TOY, TEDDY BEAR, BARBIE DOLL...


"Tu kyun jal raha hai... Teri shaadi ho jaayegi tou tu
bhi everyday honeymoon manana..."ALWAYS HAS LOVED THEIR RANTING N TEASING SESSION OF MANBIR... BUT INN DONO KE CHAKAR MEIN INKI GIRLS KO SAB SE ZYADA EMBARRASS HONA PADTA HAI...LOL

HARSHAD IS DEFINITELY UPTO SOMETHING BIG...
HIS GRIN WAS SAYING IT ALL...



"Oh my se*y mom... where are you going..." he
grabbed her by holding her shoulders from the back.
"You have to put the mehndi too... and before you do
that you are not moving from here...after all aapki
gudiya ki shaadi hai and dad wants to see your hands
with mehndi on it... no way you are moving from here
without that..." he made her sit on the couch and
asked the girl to start applying. ... I SO LOVE THIS CONVERSATION, N BOND...AFTER MARRIAGE ALSO MANIKZ LOVE FOR HIS MOM HASN'T BECAME LESS WHICH I'M GLAD TO SEE... HEHEE he called her sexy...lol...but yeah she had maintained herself very well...of course maa ko lgani hi h mehendi...

Sweetheart... you have to eat double right now.." he
whispers going closer to her ear.
"Why.." she asked innocently. SHE IS LITTERALY VERY NAIVE... SHE IS ASKING WHY??? OHH BABY DID U FORGOT HIS MORNING TALKS...?


n then comes the perfect family fun...
"Arey waah..., meri biwi ko khana kaun khilaayega..."[l]

loved the way vikram asked this...n then their children comes n sit beside her along with their LIFE PARTNERS...awww i sooo loveddd it...
n mukti cribbing to eat from her dad's hand...that was very cute scene...but BUT BUT...picture abhi khatam ni hui...
their photo session was left...pics hi toh reh jati h memories k liye...so its must to capture these moments in camera for FOREVER...

loved the sangeet decoration n idea...

manan dance was spectacular... oh zalima...oh zaalimaa...
I didn't liked the song that much when i saw its video but I'm liking after reading it... moreover yeh meri zubaan pe chad chuka hai...ahhh I'm loving it...

all the songs were chosen appropriately according to the situation...

shava shava was again one of the highlight of sangeet...perfect dance by perfect family... i so loved it...

n yes yes...n then comes the performance by nandu...ahaan...i enjoyed it so much..
deewani deewani is one of tge my favourite song sang by my favourite singer...shreya ghoshal...i so love this song..ahaaa...

manbir convo cum teasing was best...

is this Nandini..."Cabir asked and seeing Manik's mouth fell open he said "aur close your mouth warna bugs will fill your mouth.." Cabir teased him.
"Haan..." Manik was still lost in her.. her beauty her
innocence and her song.
"You are a gone case now..." Cabir said again.
Manik still didn't reply. AFTER SEEING HIS LOVE LIKE THIS PERFORMING N CONFESSING HER LOVE FOR HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYONE DO U THINK HE IS IN A CONDITION TO REPLY TO YOUR QUESTIONS... HE IS TOH LOST IN HER BEAUTY...

navya became so emotional after seeing cabirz love for herself...

N AFTER THAT THEIR NIGHT AS USUAL WAS ROMANTIC, INTENSE. PASSIONATE, N BLISSFUL FOR THE LIFE PARTNERS..

I SO ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER...
I HOPE IM ABLE TO WRITE ABOUT EVERYTHING... I'M SIRRY IF I FORGOT ABOUT SOMETHING...

i think I haven't told u about harshad n abhi interaction...
ahhh how can i even forget about this...
just loved it the way abhi handled Harshad...didn't give any chance to him to speak only... i so love it the way he introduced his profession to him...

N DON'T THINK OF ENDING THIS STORY SOONISH...

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it took me almost an hour to write my review...after typing the answer to ur note...

now please don't discontinue your story...

Coming to the update ...

i really love ur story a lot plz dont end it so quickly...

Beautiful update as usual...
Manik couldn't sleep without Nandini..
& She was so guilty about it...
Harshad is invited now..
Let's see what he does...
Little family time during mehendi rasam...
Sangeet function was like a fairy tale..
Chariot was the good idea...
Nandini and manik's performance for each other...
Loved the way abhi tackled Harshad..
Manan is goal...
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read the further parts...

Hey dear it's a long time that u didn't update...