DANCING DREAMS New MANAN FF part 12 page 101 updated - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71


Wow... fir se a story which is getting close to me...
I am just loving this too much...


Update was fantastic ...Awesome... Superb... honey...

Manik doesn't want to hire her...
He tested her background... And He gave her so many tasks...
He thought ki wo give kr degi... but naah... she was so determined to get this job...

Nandini 's self talk was hilarious... Eiffel tower... seriously 😆
Its something new... good one...

Nanu and Manno part was amazing...
Their convo's part was superb... ...
Nanu is such a sweetheart... really grandmoms bahut cute hoti hai...

caretaker ki job ke liye aayi thi... but manik ne kitna kaam krwaya...
Now he was feeling guilty...

Manik got angry.. I really liked nandini's down to earth nature...

Awww... Nani tou impressed ho gyi nandini se...
Manik is getting jealous...

He is already falling for her.. but itni jaldi thodi accept krega...
Manik ab nani bhi impress ho gyi... ab nandini ka jana impossible...manik Kya kroge..😉😉

Loved it alot...
Very very amazingly describe... too good...
U did a fab job. ...

Looking forward to read more...
Thanks for Pm.
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed..
Lots of love...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Amazing update...
Manik's so rude wid nandini...
But at d same tym he's feeling bad 4 her...
Y is he so confused???
Nandini's so determined 2 get d job...
Manik & nanu's bond is adorable...
Wow!!!nanu lykd nandini...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Sorry could not comment on previous couple of posts

comming to the new ff
its is very intresting
manik as nandani boss
nice idea.
I know you will make it more interesing by u fantabouls writing skills
Thank u for pms
keep writing
stay blessed 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Amazing story.
.loved the concept...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Amazing update
Loved it alot
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Hii
New story

Wow

Congratulations

I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story

Prologue is very nice

And the update is good too

Manik is going to be the boss of Nandini

And he's already having feelings for her

Aan nevertheless Nandini also feeling something for him.

Why is Nandini so desperate for this job

And Manik looking ways for not hiring her

But to his bad luck Nanu already started liking Nandini

Waiting to read more

Update the next part soon

Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
I really loved the concept and the idea..
This is hell cute..
Manik is adament to down nandini and nandini to prove manik wrong...
Loved it..
Cont soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Vow vow vow ...it's damn awesome...I really really loved the concept...looking forward of further chapters...loved the way nandu was cursing manik and manik and nanu bonding...but ters lot in nandu life mysteries to unfold...waiting desperately
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Promo

Part 2


She hang up the phone and looked at the sky.
Water is swimming in her eyes ready to spill.
"Why does he have to be rude to me... Maine inka Kya bigada hai... I just came here to work... He can be nice also... " she murmured to herself.
Little did she know that he was already standing behind her in a distance and listening to her blabbering , though he couldn't understand clearly what she was saying.
"But I won't give up... I will never give up... Amms taught me that I should never give up... Specially in the difficult situations..." She looked at the sky again.
"Aiyyappa... Why do you have to make my life this complicated... Thodi easy nahi bana sakte thei... But why am I blaming you... It's me who wants to fulfill my dreams... Not anyone else..." She was saying to her Aiyyappa.
"I know I will have hurdles in my way... But I will fight it... Whether anybody supports me or not... However it's going to be I have to struggle on my own... But I will definitely fulfill my dreams..," she said.
"Than why do I get effected by his rude behavior... His arrogance... Bad attitude... Why... Ab tak tou aise Kuch nahi hua mere saath... Why... Why is he effecting so much..." She felt a twinge in her heart remembering his rude words and his insulting words...l And the pool of tears that was stopped by her self confidence came running down.
All this while Manik was just hearing her murmurs but now he heard her sobs and he got worried.

First of all who she was talking to on the phone that caught his attention and now her sobs and sniffs.
The girl that shows so much of confidence in proving herself is now so down... It seems like she is broken somewhere inside.
And to his surprise he couldn't see her in this state. He liked her in her previous avatar.
The solid and confident person she was.
He moved forward taking slow steps towards her. She didn't hear him approaching her.
With lot of struggle whether to do or not he gave up and puts his hand on her shoulder.
She got startled by the touch and immediately turned to see who it was.
Her eyes was red due to the crying and lines were formed on her cheeks due to the tears.
"Are you alright... Tum theek ho na..." He asked in a very polite way... opposite of what he actually be on a regular bases.
She looked at him in his eyes and tried to see what was written there.
All of a sudden she hugged him tight holding by his waist resting her head on his heart as her height allowed her to assemble herself perfectly in his arms.
He was taken aback by her act... Didn't know what to do , how to react.
The walls that he had built around himself since that incident...is falling apart.
It already started melting since she first step onto his drive way and bumped into the flower pot by her car.
He couldn't help himself but to reciprocate back to the hug.
He hugged her slowly yet wrapping her in his arms taking her in a warm embrace


Hello my dear friends

Here is the promo of my new story
It's gonna be an interesting one
Guess who Nandini was talking to
And both of them are fighting with their emotions
So enjoy
I'll be back with a long update

Thank you so much for everything
Take care and stay blessed
And keep smiling



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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Wow nice promo. ..

nandu manik ke behaviour de affected ho rhi h..

aur manik apne aap par cantrol nhi kar pa rha h..

waiting for update. ..
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