MaNan SS-A Delicate Love Story POSTED TILL P31,REMAINING PARTS DELETED - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Awesome update.u nailed it. Hats off Manan's convo was superb. Nandini shocked manik rocked. Manik gave all info about nandini. Nandini's words of perfume lipstick was lol mindblowing. Manik's reply was superb. Awesome update. Loved it to core. Eagerly waiting to read further.Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Awesome update loved so manik said I love you wow awesome cabir is going to kill manik loves manan conversation awesome update loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Manik is in full majnu mode...haha
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Amazinggg update
Wowwws manik ne dirct bol dala...propose kr diya nandu ko...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Awesome update...
The story is very Intresting.. Will be eagerly waiting for further updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
It's awesome update dear..
Manik confessed directly...
Everything was so perfect that nandini was in shock..
She was like how could he know about her that much!
Manik is behaving like a love struck teenager!!
I m sure cabir will be coma after hearing all that..
Haha.. Waiting for his reaction..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Part-6

Manik sat in his car beside Cabir as if nothing has happened.

Ma-Chale..??

He saw Cabir resting his head on steering.He tapped him to wake up by which Cabir opened his eyes like he got consciousness just then.

Ma-Kya hua..??

C-kya hua..??

Ma-wahi toh mein tumse pooch raha hu...

C- wahi toh mein tumse pooch raha hu...

Ma-yar..thu meri baath ko repeat kyun kar raha hai...

Cabir gave a confused look still lost somewhere.Manik hit on his head hardly to bring him into his senses.He came out to reality with a jerk.He shook his head in disbelief and then held Manik's neck.

C-Saale...baath karne bhejaa tha..thu seedha propose kar baita...

Ma-Aaahh Cabir...chod na...

He freed himself from his grip and settled for a while.

C-yaar thu ek baath bathaa...baath karne se bhi dar gaya tha..how did u propose her..??

Manik smiled and said "Wo...Cabir...patha nahi kaise bhol diya...Once I registered what I have said,then I thought I shouldn't back out..and so..."

C-uska daily routine by-heart karke bhol dhiya..!!!

Manik smiled sheepishly by which Cabir tapped his head.

Ma-waise Cabir...ek aur help chahiye..

C-ab kya bachaa hai..??

Ma-uski perfume aur lipstick brands patha lagao na...usne poocha...

C-koi itna gadha kaise ho saktha hai..

Ma-gadha..??koun gadhaa..??

C-thu..aur koun...

Ma-mein ne kya kiya..?? He asked like an innocent child.

C-yaar wo toh sarcastically bhola..thu wo bhi serious le liya...

Ma-Oh...she was testing me..Now,I understood..

C-hmmm...aage kya plan hai..??

Manik grinned at Cabir without answering.

...

In class room,

Muk-what...??Seedha propose kar liya..??And he knows every single detail about u...about us...

She exclaimed.

A-How cute na...!!! Acha Nandu...ladka kaisa hai..???Is he handsome...??

Nandini smiled a little and remembered him.Unknowingly she said "Hot"

Muk,A,Nav-what..???

Nan-wo...garmi hai yaar...

Muk-Seriously...??January mein garmi..???

Nandini bent her head down and smiled.

A-Oh my god...Look at her...she is blushing...

Mukthi pulled her cheeks and asked "Kya hua..??Do u like him..??"

Nandini don't know what to say and then Navya interrupted.

Nav-yeh kya keh rahe ho thum log..??Nandu...tum meri baath dhyan se suno...aise random guys pe na,hum trust nahi kar sakthe...usko hamare baare mein sab kuch patha hai..aur humhe toh uska naam bhi nahi patha..

Nan-Manik..Manik Malhotra...She said immediately.Everyone exchanged looks and giggled.

Nav-Jo koi bhi ho...aur kuch nahi jaanthe hai hum...so soch ke decide karna...

Muk-Yaar Navya...bas itni si baath...wo mujhpe chod dhe...Agar Mr.Hot itna hoshiyaar hai toh,hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai...Nandu..thu tension na le...I'll get his details...

...

At night,Nandini was pacing in her room and all she could hear was his voice echoing in her ears.She closed her ears and eyes tightly and said to herself "yeh ladka mere dhimaag se hutthe kyun nahi...!!"

Just then Harshad entered and saw Nandini like that.

Har-Chutki...is everything ok..??

She opened her eyes and saw his brother.

Nan-Ha..haa Bhai...ok...

Har-kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho...??

Nan-Nahi..nahi toh...

Har-Sach bathaa Chutki...kisi ne kuch kaha kya...??bathao...I'll see their end...

Nan-Bhai...aisa kuch nahi hai...I'm fine...It's just neendh nahi aa rahi thi...

Har-Acha...

He was about to say something but stopped when he got a call from Mukthi.He came out silently as Nandini too didn't have the hint of her best friend and her bhai's relation(Even they aren't sure about their relation).

Har-Kya hua Mukthi..??iss waqt..??

Muk-wo..kuch nahi...Nandini ka phone nahi lag raha tha...wo so gayi kya..??

She stopped herself saying about Manik thinking that this may give rise to problems .Harshad came back to Nandini's room and saw her sleeping.

Har-Ha..wo so gayi hai...kuch urgent kaam hai..??uthaoo..??

Muk-No..no...nothing important...

Har-ok..

Muk-ok..

Silence from either sides and they both smiled listening their breaths.

Har-bahut dher ho gayi hai..so jao..gud nyt...

Muk-Gud nyt...

After hanging up,they both smiled seeing each others pictures in their phones.


Done...Guys plzz whoever want me to stop this,I'll stop it as soon as possible without dragging...because ur response is making me think like that...

Thank u all the supporters and commenters...keep supporting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
awesome update
cabir is right
manik lost his brain somewhere😆
poor manik😆
nandu was also thinking about him wow
and she finds him hot😊
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
plzz don't stop
continue this story
plzzz
btw nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Plsss don't stop it

Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm

it's my favvv i love it sooo much


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