MaNan SS-A Delicate Love Story POSTED TILL P31,REMAINING PARTS DELETED - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update loved it so dhruv is here I hope he help out manik n end let the together
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Dhruv is cute and and manan convo in phone is also nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update..
dhruv rocked manan shocked..
loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing story

mindblowing

I jst read all d parts in 1 go...amazing they are

I m fan of ur story the revenge love story..bt now I m fan of delicate love story...

loved all d parts...

manik is out of d world lover...nandini is too innocent...

eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
hilarious update

dhruv to manik se bhi ek kadam Aage nikla

loved it..bhabhi maa...too good

so dhruv and alya ...ok

loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
loved dhruv
bhabi maa & beta
they gave poor nandu a heart attack😆
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part-15

In the evening,after college

At college bus stop again...

Navya was waiting for bus and then came Cabir again.

C-Excuse me..

Nav-Yes

C-I'm Cabir...Cabir Dhawan..

He extended his hand expecting hers but no.She gave a cold look and asked "What do u want..??Subah se dhekh rahi hu...peecha kar rahe ho mera...??"

C-Peecha...?? Excuse me...I'm a decent guy...u know...I'm the only heir to Dhawan group of companies..

Nav-So what..??

C-So what mathlab...!!! Excuse me Miss Navya...agar tum jaanthe nahi toh let me tell u...Dhawan group of companies is one of the reputed companies for fashion designers...and by god's grace,if u finish ur degree in fashion designing,u'll eventually come to me for a job...

Nav-job gayi pahad mein...pehle tum yeh batao ki how do u know my name..??

C-Wo..wo toh mujhe patha hai...and I know everything about u...because...I Love U...

Navya's jaw opened widely listening this because it's something for the first time to her.

C-aisa shock math ho...ok let me tell u about me...Mein Manik ka friend hu...jab se mein Nandini ko dhekha tha,tab se I was thinking that if I could find someone like Nandini...and then I found u...the way u protect Nandini and the way u give importance to ur family...I just love them...and I love u...Listen I'm not joking...Take ur time...I'll wait..

Saying this,he bid bye and left while Navya was still in state of shock.

"Aakhir yeh hai koun...!! Seedha I love u...!!! Shayad Nandini ko bhi aise hi jatka lagi hogi...!!!"She thought and her thoughts wandered around Cabir's words.

Obviously,every girl's ears echoes her first proposal for a lifetime.

At Coffee Shop,

Har-Hai Mukthi...

Muk-Hi Harshad...

Har-Sorry for keeping u wait...

Muk-No no..that's ok...

Har-Yeah tell me...kuch baath karni thi na tumhe...

Muk-Ha...wo...

She looked down here and there and drank a glass of water.

Har-Mukthi...koi pareshaani hai kya..??plz tension math lo..u can talk to me freely...

Muk-Harshad...tell me one thing straightly...what am I to u...??

Harshad doesn't know what to answer.

Har-What do u mean..??

Muk-Harshad...tumhe achi tarah se patha hai ki mein kya pooch rahi hu...now plz tell me...what's our relation...??Are we just friends...??or else am I just ur sister's friend...??

Har-Mukthi...u r more than that..

Muk-mathlab..??

Har-we are more than friends...but I don't know what to name it...

Muk-exactly...that's what I wanted to say...we are more than friends..but we neither can name it as love nor as infatuation...am I right..??

Har-ha...but tum kehna kya chahthi ho..??

Muk-I think we should take this seriously...don't u think we should give it a try...??

Har-what should we do..??

Muk-Well...I think we should spend some proper time...to know each other...what say...??

Har-sounds good...but kaise...??

Mukthi smiled and said "Wo sab tum mujh pe chod dho...Harshad...ek serious baath kahu...I like ur family...and ur respect towards them...and ur intense love for them..And I would feel that I'll be lucky if I become a part of that family..."

Harshad too smiled and said "tum nahi...I would be really lucky if a girl like u enter into my life...because..the only thing I want is a girl who will mingle with my family...not the one who separates me from them..."

He assured her by tapping her hand and she was really relieved listening him.They both shared a general conversation about her college routine and his music album.

At night,

Nandini smiled when her ears echoed Bhabhi maa while doing her assignment.Just then,her phone rang flashing the name MANIK jii.

Nan-hello

Ma-Hey Nandu...what are u doing..??

Nan-mein...I am completing my assignments...

Ma-Oh...Did I disturb u...??

Nan-nahi...It's ok..boliye...aap kya kar rahe ho..??

Ma-mein...I just completed my office work...Dhruv was insisting me to play caroms...So,I have to...

Nan-Oh...Dhruv aap ke saath hai...??

Ma-Nahi...carom board la ne gaya hai...and ha Nandu..I just called to ask ki usne kuch aisa waisa nahi kaha na morning...??

Nan-No...nothing like that...

Just then Dhruv entered Manik's room with a carom board and sat beside Manik.

D-koun...??Bhabhi maa..??

He asked Manik and Manik nodded and immediately Dhruv took his phone to talk to Nandini.

D-Hello Bhabhi maa...what are u doing..??

Nan-I'm doing my assignments Dhruv..

D-acha...koi help chahiye...??

Nan-No...I can do it myself...

D-Great...toh aap mere jaise nahi ho...u know what...I used to hand over my assignments to my juniors..hehe...

He smiled at his own act while Manik and Nandini smiled a little seeing a child in him.Manik stood and went down.

D-acha Bhabhi maa...had ur dinner...??

Nan-Haa...I just had...tum..??

D-mein...nahi...aap ke Manik jii ne ab tak nahi khilaya mujhe...

He complained.

Nan-Nahi khilaya mathlab...??

D-mathlab...bachpan se bhai hi khilathe hai mujhe...

Just then Manik entered and snatched the phone and handed over the plate to him.

Ma-Ab tum yeh pakado...(He said to Dhruv and then talked to Nandini)..acha Nandu..kya keh raha tha Dhruv...??

Nan-wo...Manik jii..aap ab bhi Dhruv ko khaana khilathe ho??

Ma-(Smiled a little)Ab bhi mathlab...??Nandu...wo chahe jitna bhi bada ho jaye...mere liye he is just a kid...and it's been a long time that I have fed him with my hands..

Nandini too smiled and couldn't stop herself from admiring their relation.

Nan-Manik jii...I just love ur bonding with Dhruv...

Manik was very happy listening this as for the first time Nandini reacted positive about him.

Ma-Thank u...

She sensed that and then immediately said "Good night Manik jii..."

Ma-Good night Nandu...

He said and went to feed Dhruv.

Edited by keerthupranu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyyy... I know that have missed the last part.. But Sachi that wasn't my fault .. I typed the comment but when pressed post reply.. I realised that my data (net) was over,. Heheh.. So yes before reading the next update comment for the previous one

Loved the update.. N Bhabhi maa was like my fav part... I actually don't like dhruv that much but after this part I was like so so so cute...
Just loved the update

Thank u so much for this beautiful chp and also for the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

N off to rest the nesxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So I'm the first one to comment

Yaar etna Acha update.. How do u always write sooo amazingly...
Dhruv ka Bhabhi maa I'm sure is going to be the usp of this story...
N baki sab ka love story is also nice to read so don't be sry ABT it plz...

Thank u for this amazing update

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Edited by mehak_ahuja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent update...
Cabir proposed navya directly...
Mukshad's convo was much needed...
Manan's convo was awesome...
Manruv's bond is adorable...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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