MANAN "ISHQ...EK ANOKHA EHSAAS...!!!!" PART 11 ON PG 40 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kyy_manan

Wow wat a surprise

Awesm prologue
Aryaman & nandu dancinv
N navya and harshad

M sure sumthn has happnd btwn manan & cavya
But wat??
Navni are ignoring them :(

Will love ti read it
Tysm fr pm
Lots of love




Ohh yess something happend between manan and cavya...but what...that is me to know and you to find out 😛 you will get to know everything soon dear so dont worry...will continue soon...thsnk u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sun07

Hi

Thanks for pm
actually i am confused but i know you are going to rock in this story too
so best of luck and god bless you
keep smiling and writing



You will know everything with time dear...thank u so muchhh...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

firstly it was confusing i thought handsome boy is gonna be our hero manik n cute girl to be nandu... but its good to be different...

nice starting of the story...

rose, abhi, harshad, aryaman r also here...

n nandu n navya r with harshad n aryaman... n manik n kabir must hv done something which had hurt both of them...

this story sounds good... n yeah u should continue with it...




Hehehe yeaaa...will continue soon...thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: reet0143

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">hey anu...how r u doll??</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">now that's call a big surprise...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i was missing agar tum saath ho...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and tumne ek nayi story start kar di,,,,,,,,,that's why i love u so much,,,,,,,,,,,,,,u r the best baby...u r always concerned for us,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">thanku thanku thanku so much,,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">story title is superb...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and tum na continue karne ke baare mein mat pucha karo yaar,,,,,,,,,,,of'course we want you to continue...ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai...am to always ready for reading your work</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i am like your jabra fan u know...😆😆...but don't worry i won't trouble you that much,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and trailer(prologue) hi itna dhamakedaar tha to puri picture(story) kitni dhamakedaar hogi...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">jab 7 people bola i thought k fab5 and frnds hionge</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">but phir jab song start hua tab laga k cabir manik navya and nandu hai,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">navya and nandu to thik tha but aaryaman and harshad ,,,,,,,,,,,harshad to bikul hi unexpected tha...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i hope harshad is a positive character and agar positive hoga to aur maja ayega ,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">kyunki mosly stories mein vo negative character hi hai</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">is baar thoda different ho jayega...rest it's upto u.,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">so manan and cavya has some differences ,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">but why,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">there is lots to catch up...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">it's going to be very interesting</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i loved it</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">and one more thing maine tumhari dusri story padni start ki hai love is my life...but abhi 3rd thread read kr rahi hoon...complete nhi hua...uske baare mein yahan kuch nahi bolungi ..jad uri pad lungi tab vahi comment karungi...abhi main vaha comment nahi kar pa rahi hoon...but i promise ek baar sare chapters pad loon i will give u a long long comment,,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">enough of my blabbering,,,,,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">i loved it</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">so just wanna say pls jaldi continue karo and keep showering your love baby,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">keep smiling doll...love u...</font>




Heyyy dear am absolutely good...awww thats so sweet thank u so muchhh...hehehe...tum trouble karogi tho bi main kuch nahi kahungi...hope so dear...am writing this to make you all happy so lets see how it goes...ohhh yess harshad is definetly a positive character...i know lot of mystery but am sure u will like it...will continue soon...no prb dear comment it once u finish all parts...will wait for your comment...will definitely shower u with my love...thank u...luv u too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

RES...!

exams k bad read karon gi.. ;)

and PM wali link ghalat thi...😔




Okkk dear...shayad galthi se hogaya am sry for that...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

OMG

Anu is back with p amazing n dhamaka wala banG

manan n cabvya know each other par nandu n navya is angry on them I conclude that from this part let see what is the reason of angry of the girls towards their boys continue soon I hope manik n cabir manages to manofy their girls n according to order the seven people names were called tells that aliya n dhruv, Abbi n mukti n cabir n rose are together n manik is single waiting for nandu to come back n kabir is stuck with Rose something is there which broke nandu n navya n that is why they angry with their boys

*keep writing

Love you a lot babes

Vidhu



Hehehe yaaa...couplesss ke bare who are together and who are not wo tho tumhe next update main patha chelega...kya hua aur kyu wo bi tumhe aage patha chelega so wait till that...will continue soon...thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: manandeeplove

Mishtee...
Finally u updated d prologue of new story...
Loved d surprise...
I thot u will take some more time to upload it bt u r toh superfast...😉😛

Prologue was absolutely intriguing...😛
D way u revealed everything was exact opposite of one wud think...
Coz harshad aryamaan n navni...like seriously...😕
It is most unexpected group of frnds...
Some relations that r out of d box of usual ky2 characters...
Bt liked it a lottt...😃😉

Fab 5 with abhi n rose...
Even this was new combo...😆

So story started with navya wish to take vodka shots with her jaan...😛
N harshad n aryamaan r trying to convince them nt to do that...
Hmmm...seems fascinating...😉
M liking this mishtee...

Fab 5 ke proper intro ke liye i guess i need to wait...
except for d fact ke navni r hell angry with manbir...
Lets c how u unfold this story...

Love u...

PS..i m sure u will have to convert this story into SS😆





Jaaannn 😊 oh yes i updated 😃 glad that u loved it and even i thought that you will think the same 😛 hehehe i know kya karu iss kurafathi dimak ka patha nahi kyu ajeeb ajeeb sochthe rehtha hain jo koyi nahi sochtha 😕 ummm unexpected hain lekin out of the box kyu kyy main bi harshad and navya were a couple for whatever reason it was and aryaman too had feelings for nandu...like tho tujhe karna padega hi rey dusra option nahi hain tere paas...oo yess will unfold the mystery soon...luv u too...der saaraaa...!!!!!

PS your guesses were never wrong so lets see for this 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sizzler92

Nice start... Little confussion but as the story will progress i guess everything will be sorted out...

I think the boys( manbir) must hv hurted their girls (nanVYA) that's why they didn't turned..




A very big yess...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Thank you so so sooo much for your lovely response...loved each and every comment of yours...here is the first part for you all...will talk again at end...

PART 1 :

1...2...3...

Heyyy dinka chika dinka chika dinka chika reyyy

he he he heyyy

hahahaha hahahaahaa

NANDINI : okk okkk control control

NAVYA : haan haan control control

1...2...3...

ye dinka chika ye dinka chika ye dinka chika chika chika chika

NANDINI : hahahah hahah navuuu

NAVYA : hehehe nandu ham itne kush hain itne kush hain ki ham batha nahi sakthe hain

NANDINI : janthi hoon

NAVYA : akhir main matlab itne dino baad hamari itni mehanath ke baad ham jaane maane fashion designers banne vale hain

NANDINI : haan navu aur ye sab teri vajah se

NAVYA : jo bi hua us main hamara dono ka adha adha credit hain kyuki mehanath ham dono ne bi ki hain

NANDINI : haan lekin ye fashion designers bane ka idea tera hi tho hain

NAVYA : sirf idea mera tha lekin fashion designers bane ke liye jo bi kuch karna tha wo sab sirf teri vajah se hi hua

NANDINI : acha baba maan liya ye kushi ham dono ki hain aur dono ki vajah se hi hain

NAVYA : righttt

NANDINI : acha chelo ab jaldi se ye bath hamare do idiots ko batha the hain

NAVYA : haan haan chel call kar

NANDINI : haaa...nahiii...

NAVYA : kyaa hua

NANDINI : agar gar jake ye bath share kare thooo

are phir ruki kya hain chelll and navya drags nandu while she laughing loud runs along with her taking their bags...

BLUE BELLS VILLA :

NAVYA : kaka kaka kaka...

NANDINI : navya sambal ke kaka ko chekkar ajayega

NAVYA : haa haaa

KAKA : tho meri betiyan fashion designers ban gaye

NAVYA : haa kaka haaa

NANDINI : navu...abi bane nahi kaka...lekin ek badi company ka contract hame mil gaya hain...

NAVYA : are uss contract ke baad ham tho bade fashion designers ban jayenge naa

KAKA : haannn

NANDINI : arey haan baba lekin thab thak thoda vakth hain tho isliye abi se ham khud ko fashion designers nahi batha sakthe

NAVYA : huhhh tu bi na kair acha kaka ye do saab zyade kar kya rahe hain

KAKA : meeting main hain beta kaafi der ho gaya hain

NANDINI : gar pe meeting

KAKA : haan beta wo kehre the ki koyi bade company ke log hain aur agar ye deal ho gayi tho hamare liye kaafi acha hain

NAVYA : ohhh

NANDINI : teek hain kaka aap jayiye ham bi upar jathe hain

KAKA : teek hain beta

NAVYA : tata

NANDINI : eyy chel

NAVYA : ummm chel chel

NANDINI : vaise i hope ki unki meeting success ho

NAVYA : arey ho jayegi dont worry

NANDINI : hmmm

NAVYA : vaise ek baar jake dekhe

NANDINI : important discussion main honge shayad

NAVYA : haa tho ham konsa sara time vahi kade rahenge unse milenge hamari contract ki bath share karenge aur vapas ajayenge

NANDINI : par navya thodi der baad bi tho keh sakthe hain na

NAVYA : arey kuch nahi hoga chel

ARYAMAN : sooo

sooo...!!!!! and a guy utters with full attitude

HARSHAD : so the deal is on?????

yesss ofcourse...!!!!! and the guy utters smiling with his signature smirk...

ARYAMAN : great man congrats then

HARSHAD : ohh yeaaa congrats

Hearing a sound aryaman and harshad exchange looks and then hide their smiles the very next second...

ARYAMAN : ummm just a second guys

HARSHAD : we will be back in a moment

guy nods his head slightly with a straight face while aryaman and harshad walk out...

ARYAMAN & HARSHAD : deal done

NANDINI & NAVYA : contract done

uttering in unison they look each other and hug each other ever so tightly the very next second smiling ever so hugely...
(Ie arya and nandu...harshad and navya)

NAVYA : mujhe patha tha...mujhe patha tha...

NANDINI : congratulations...

"congratulations to you too..." and arya and harshad whisper in navni ears tickling them wantedly making them giggle loud...

cough cough...

seeing the people standing infront of them navni get frozed while arya and harshad break the hug and stand beside them...

ARYAMAN : srryyy guys wo actually we were lost in our talks and

HARSHAD : any ways...acha hua aap bahar aa gaye...

ARYAMAN : nandu...navya...tum log tho sune hi honge THE FAB 5 ke bare main

HARSHAD : so here they go... hamari agli album FAB 5 ke sath hain which am sure will be a great hit...

ARYAMAN : ohhh yeaaa

HARSHAD : so ye hain

MANIK...MANIK MALHOTRA...and the guy utters smiling and smirking all the time looking into nandu eyes...

ARYAMAN : aur ye

MANIK : ALIA... MUKTHI... ROSE... DHRUV... ABHI... anddd KABIR... KABIR DHAVAN...

alia surrounds her hand around manik's while harshad smiling continues alia...manik ki gf... rose... kabir ki gf and mukthi...abhi ki gf...

ARYAMAN : dhruv single hain

HARSHAD : aur shayad happy bi

ARYAMAN : and guys this is nandini...nandini moorthy...

HARSHAD : and this is navya... navya naveli...

MANIK : anddd?????

ARYAMAN : and

HARSHAD : what

relationship... and kabir utters placing his hands inside his pockets...

GF... and navni utters in unison looking manbir while arya and harshad smile looking them...

NANDINI MOORTHY...GF OF ARYAMAN KHURANA...

NAVYA NAVELI...GF OF HARSHAD SAXENA...

and navni utter completely shocking the seven people standing infront of them while arya and harshad wrap their hands around them...

DHRUV : so i hope everthing in our deal is clear

ARYAMAN : yaaa...coompletely...

ALIA : manikkk

MANIK : can you just show our rooms...we are completely tired...

HARSHAD : ohhh yess definetely

NAVYA : rooms????

HARSHAD : navya wo actually

NAVYA : ye log yaha pe rukenge

HARSHAD : navya

KABIR : kyu...koyi problem hain apko...hamare yaha ruk ne se...

without wasting a second nandu walks away holding navya while manbir stand looking them walk away...

ARYAMAN : just a second

HARSHAD : navyaaa...navyaaa...

ARYAMAN : nandu ek minute ruko na

HARSHAD : navyaa

NAVYA : kya hain

HARSHAD : chilla kyu rahi ho... tumhe achanak ho kya gaya...

ARYAMAN : haan aur nandu tum aise chelke kyu agayi navya ko leke... wo log kya sochenge...

NANDINI : wo log kuch bi soche usse hame koyi farak nahi padtha

NAVYA : aur tum dono iss gar ko samaj kya rakha hain...jab chahe thab jisse chahe unhe gar le aaoge kya...haaa...

HARSHAD : navya wo log koyi mamuli log nahi hain...unke sath hamara deal hona zaruri hain... unhone sirf hamare gar main ruk ne ka request kiya...

NAVYA : kyu gar bech aye kya wo apna

ARYAMAN : navyaaa

HARSHAD : dekho navya hame hamari deal ke aage unki maang choti lagi

ARYAMAN : aur isliye hamne unhe yaha rehene deneka faisla liya

navya turns her head aside while harshad smiles at her and dekho agar tum nahi mani tho main vaha jake sach bata dunga ki tum meri koyi GF nahi ho aur patha nahi kyu jhut bol diya ki GF ho

NAVYA : hogaya...gatiya joke tha...

HARSHAD : yar navya samjo na please

NANDINI : relax harshad its ok madam zara madhubala ki action mode pe hain isliye aisa bath karri

NAVYA : sach main nandu

NANDINI : haa navu

ARYAMAN : sure na

NANDINI : hmmm wo actually iss gar main hame bahar ke log ache nahi lagthe hain tho isliye thoda gussa agaya tha

ARYAMAN : kuch hi dino ki bath hain guys so dont worry

NAVYA : ummm

ARYAMAN : vaise ek bath puchu

NAVYA : kyaa

ARYAMAN : jhut kyu kaha tha tum dono ne vaha ki tum dono hamare gf ho

NAVYA : arey jhut kaah kaha sach hi tho kaha na

HARSHAD : arey sach tha kethe yar tho chel na bf vali harkath karthe hain

NAVYA : oyeee

NANDINI : paas math aao

ARYAMAN : arey peche kyu hatre ho

HARSHAD : gf ho hamare paas nahi aaoge tho kaisa

NAVYA : harshad nahi

guys please...and navni start running while arya and harshad tickle them making them laugh catching them in no time...

thuddd...!!!!!!!

ALIA : manikkk

ARYAMAN : kya hua

DHRUV : laga shayad

HARSHAD : first aid lagana padega

MANIK : nahi...its...its okkk...

ARYAMAN : its bleeding manik you need to bandade it

HARSHAD : kaka...kaka...

KAKA : jee beta kahiye

HARSHAD : ek first aid kit lake ye flower vase tut gaya hain ise saaf kar dijiye

KAKA : teek hain beta

ARYAMAN : chelo we will show you the room

NAVYA : chel nandu ham bi kamre main chelthe hain

NANDINI : haa chel

NAVYA : ek minute...ek minute... acha sunooo

haaa...!!!!! and kabir utters along with harshad surprising everyone

HARSHAD : wo mujhe bulari thi

ROSE : kabirrr

HARSHAD : kya hua kya hua

ABHI : isse bi shayad lag gaya

ARYAMAN : kaka jaldi se pehle ye saaf kijiye sab ko chot lagra hain

HARSHAD : zyada lagi kya

KABIR : nahi teek hain

NANDINI : chel navya

NAVYA : haa...harshad wo ham thayar hoke rahenge tum log jaldi se ajao...

HARSHAD : teek hain

NAVYA : chel

Navni walk into their room while manbir too walk towards their room gritting their teeth along with arya and harshad...

MUKTHI : ye dono kitna badal gaye

DHRUV : i know

ABHI : lekin shayad sahi bi hain vo kehthe hain na vakth logon ko badal detha hain

DHRUV : aur badle bi kyu na ho main tho kehtha hoon acha hi hua

ABHI : haa...unhe bi tho apni zindagi kushi se jeeni ki hak hain...

ALIA : ho gaya...tho lets leave now...

ARYAMAN : okk so we will leave now

MANIK : yaa...thanks for the bandade...

ARYAMAN : welcome and be careful haa

MANIK : yaaa

HARSHAD : aaj tum log rest lelo we will discuss about album tomorrow

KABIR : we can discuss it today too

HARSHAD : ehmm actually nandu aur navya ke sath we were going out thooo

KABIR : out????

ARYAMAN : wo hamari har successful deal ke baad ham log celebrate karthe hain you know

HARSHAD : sooo

MANIK : fine you can go we will discuss it tomorrow

ARYAMAN : thnx man see u soon

HARSHAD : byyy

MANIK : ehmmm arayaman

ARYAMAN : haaa

MANIK : what if we guys join in your celebration

ARYAMAN : aaahhh

KABIR : deal hamare sath huyi hain tho why not celebrate all together hmmm

HARSHAD : yaaa actually its a great idea

MANIK : yeaaa

KABIR : chelo den we will see u soon...

ARYAMAN : yeaaa

Arya and harshad walk out while manbir look each other smiling a little blinking their eyes...




Face palm...dikao chehra... nahi... bilkul bi nahi... thoda bi nahi... huhhh... karo jo karna hai wo... marna hain...bagana hain...bolo bolo... kya karne ka dil kara hain... hope u understood ki harshad positive hain agar nahi tho let me make it very clear harshad bohuth hi zyada positive character hain... you will like him for sure here...i know bohuth kuch unfold hona baki hain and trust me i would love to do that soon but again it would totally depend on you whether you want it sooner or later...do shower me with your likes and comments if you can...will be waiting... thank u and luv u...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Awesome update loved it so finally manbir is back in nandini n navya ke life MA let see will they be able get their original ladylove back in their this time forever
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