firstly it was confusing i thought handsome boy is gonna be our hero manik n cute girl to be nandu... but its good to be different...
nice starting of the story...
rose, abhi, harshad, aryaman r also here...
n nandu n navya r with harshad n aryaman... n manik n kabir must hv done something which had hurt both of them...
this story sounds good... n yeah u should continue with it...
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