MANAN "ISHQ...EK ANOKHA EHSAAS...!!!!" PART 11 ON PG 40 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla

sorry for not commenting
new college searching mey busy hogayi sis
nice prologue
awesome updates
very interesting
aisa kiya navni ney Jo manbir itna thadpana
chahta hey
waiting eagerly for next updates
cont soon



Its ok dear will continue soon thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Awesome update...
Interesting hoti ja rahi hai...
Loved it...
Eagerly waiting for the next part...



Thank u dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...
Y Manbir hates them soo much...
How can Manik do this to Nandu..
What happened in past...
I don't wanna judge anyone until the past revels...
Luved aryaman Nandu Harshad and Navya bond...
Luved it...
Update soon...
Thnx for pm...




Thank u so muchhh...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mananluvpani

Superbbb mind blowing part...
Yaar Asia kya hua that manan n cavya k bichme Jo woh log ek dusre se itna nafrat krte h...
Kyu manbir navni KO hurt krna chahte hai...
Jarur koi bahot badi misunderstanding Hui Thai
Unke bich...
Hope k unke bich ki misunderstanding jaldi se khatam ho Jaye...
Waiting for the next part...




You will get to know everything dheere dheere dear so dont worry will update soon thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manandeeplove

Shocking update...😲

Manan n cavya seems to hate each other sooo much...😕
There must b smthng big misunderstanding in d past...

Fab 5 knows abt it ...
N specially alia seems against nandini ...
She is nt giving me good vibes...

Dress Pics were awesome...😳
Loved it

Nandu toh ekdam sherni nikli...😃😛
Liked it
She slapped alia for talking so ill abt her ...
N warned manik too abt d same...

Last manbir thoughts were shocking...
Hope ki ek hi ghar me rahte ye gile shikwe door ho jaye...
Waiting for past to unfold..

Cont soon
Love u



Hmmm shayad 😛

Ohhh yeaaa alia is definetly against nandu...

ab mishtee jaisi bathe sab log thodi na samjenge aur khas kar alia jaise tho bas isliye bangayi sherni nandu 😊

ummm ab unke beech gile shikve door honge ya aur bi badenge wo tho vakth hi bathayegi...lets see...

will continue soon...luv u tooo...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

manik n kabeer hates nandini n navya
but why
Aliya using all dirty words against nandini




wht s thr past ???????????????///




You will get to know that as story progresses so just wait with patience...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Anu THKS for the PM

Hmmm !!!!!!! Slowly slowly u r giving briefs about Manan knowing each other n Cavya too...

What even Aliya knows about Nandini's past ?????

The way Manik was taunting Nandini was something BAD...

ABI MANIK AUR CABIR KHUCH GADBAD GARENGE...
THEY WILL SURELY DO SOMETHING TO GIVE PAIN TO NAVYA N NANDU...
WHAT IF IT BECOMES WORST WHICH COULDNT BE REPAIRED...

ITNA TOH PAKA HOGAYA KI MANAN AUR CAVYA KA PAST AACHA NAHI THA...


AABH YEH "KARAN" KUN HAI ??????

NANDU NAVYA DONO ITNI EXCITED THI USSE MILNE KELEYE


INTERESTING NAIL BITTING HOTE JA RAHA HAI "ANU"




hehehe dont worry dear tumhe sab bohuth jaldi hi patha chel jayega bas intezar karo mere update karne ka nail bite karthe hue 😉 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: assuuu

Curious to knw wats d past...
Reveal d past sooon...
Plzzz...
Nyc part...
Manbir hate dem...
Wanna knw wanna knw yyy...
Cnt soon




Will continue soon dear thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonu137

Nice update!!

What's up actually manik and alia kabir and rose!!
What all happened in past!!
And the way nandini reacted to alia seriously awesome !!
Amazing it was!!
And now manik want na navni to cry but why??
Too many mysteries
Waiting for next
Thanks for pm
Take care
Keep smiling
Love you




Thanx dear...luv u too...tc...
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 3 :


NAVYA : kaafi der ho gayi

NANDINI : haan aur shayad dono so bi gaye honge

NAVYA : acha hi hain unke sawalon se bach jayenge

ARYAMAN : haan nahi tho jeene nahi denge na wo

HARSHAD : Khoon choos lenge dono ka sawal kar kar ke

NAVYA : mar gaye

NANDINI : harshad...arya tum log soye nahi abi thak

HARSHAD : am sry madam galthi hogayi ham se ham abi jake so jathe hain

ARYAMAN : haa haa chelo harshad jaldi se jathe hain

NANDINI : guysss please

NAVYA : sryyy naaa

NANDINI : tum log kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho we are really sryyy sach main

HARSHAD : kya bole...haaa... nandini isse tho dimag naam ki cheez kuch hain hi nahi par tum... tum tho samaj dhar ho na...time dekho ek baar...rath ke 2 bajre hain ye koyi gar ane ka vakth hain kyaa...

Navni lower their heads without uttering anything while harshad close his eyes controlling his anger...

ARYAMAN : cell kaha phek diya dono ne

NAVYA : wooo

chod yar inse kya puchra...thak jayenge bichare sawalon se aur vaise ham hothe hi koun hain inhe sawal karne vale and harshad utters opening his eyes staring navni...

sryyy...please aisa math kaho... tum janthe ho tum log hamare liye kya hoo...and nandu utters with tears hugging harshad while navya stands still in the same position...

am... am sryyy...par galthi tum dono ki hain...na jane kab se pagalon ki tharah call kiye jare hain par na hi tumne call lift kiya aur naaa hi isne...ham...ham pareshan ho gaye the nandini...ham and harshad stops not being able to continue...

wo club main awaz ki vajah se shayad call sunayi hi nahi diya aur jab ham cell dekhe thab thak wo switch bi ho gaya tha...karan ne hame bathaya ki uski apse bath huyi aur is liye hame laga ki shayad aap janthe hai ki ham der se lotenge...and nandu utters in calm tone breaking the hug explaining everything...

ARYAMAN : haan... bath hogayi thi karan se lekin agar hamari bath na huyi ho tho...

Nandu remains silent looking him sadly

ARYAMAN : ab jawab nahi hain bolo na

NANDINI : nahi hain jawab...ho gayi galthi ham se...ehsaas hain hame apni galthi ka and we promise aage se aisa nahi hoga aur main isse age kuch nahi keh sakthi...

HARSHAD : acha fine ab iss bare main bath yahi katham karthe hain

NANDINI : aryaa pleaseee

ARYAMAN : galthi karo aur aise chehre banao acha hain

NANDINI : tho maafi mil gayi

ARYAMAN : par aage se nahi milegi

NANDINI : done

ARYAMAN : navyaaa...dekho tumhe hamari bath bura lagi tho we are sry par

NAVYA : nahii...nahii aryaman aisi bath nahi hain...

HARSHAD : aur agar hogi bi tho ham kuch nahi kar sakthe kyu ki galthi tumhari hi hain

NANDINI : guysss

NAVYA : nandu ham thak gaye aaj ham apni room main soyenge

NANDINI : ummm

ARYAMAN : kya hua...tum dono teek ho na aaj thak kabi alag nahi soye ho tho...

NAVYA : aise hi bas...ab aur sawal math karo please...gud nite...

NANDINI : mainnn...main bi chelthi hoon...gud night...

Harshaman glance each other and stand watching navni walking to their rooms...

ARYAMAN : chel bhai ham bi so jathe hain

HARSHAD : haan chel

Listening to whistling sound nandu who was standing in terrace gazing stars turns her head and tum????

without replying the person walks close to nandu and nods his head as yes continuing whistling...

"tum yaha kya karre ho..." and she utters looking him planely while he stops his whistling and "gud night...shayad yehi kehke gayi thi na tum apni kamre ki ore...thooo phir tum yaha kya karri ho..."

kabirrr...!!!!!!! and she looks him sighing...

Nandiniii...!!!!!!! and he sighs acting same like her...

Nodding her head she turns her gaze again towards stars while he too turns his gaze towards stars and "tharo ko dekri ho ya phir tharo main uss chehre ko... jiske sath bait ke inhi tharo ko dekha karthi thi...!!!!"

Not replying she stares him without blinking her eyes while he looks her for a second and then nods his head as a no holding his both the cheeks with his hands...

Nandu crings her brows while he licks his lips and "nahi...mujhe koyi thapad nahi kani hain..."

Failing even though trying hard nandu bursts out laughing while he smiles looking her without turning his gaze from her...

Kabirrr...tumm...tummm and she continues laughing while he simply stands admiring her laugh...

NANDINI : goddd

"tum badli nahi ho nandini aur na hi kabi badal sakthi ho tho phir natak kyu karri ho" and he utters out of no where changing her expression in seconds...

"math karo na aisa please...tum janthi ho tum khush nahi ho..." and he pleads her while she looks away from him and "kabir please mujhe iss bare main kuch nahi kehna hain"

smiling sarcastically he turns his head away while she controls herself and "aap ka kya chelra hain janab...sab teek hain na"

haan...ek dum perfect... and he replies instantly turning towards her while she wraps her hands around him the very next second without thinking twice hugging him tightly...

Hugging her back he closes his eyes while she continuously blinks her eyes controlling her tears...

ajao na vapas...wo teek nahi hain...kush bi nahi hain...and he utters breaking the hug pleading her...

Ek baar navya ke bare main sochna abi bi sab teek ho saktha hain abi bi kuch nahi badla hain and she utters pleading him more...

KABIR : rath kaafi ho chuki hain... hame chelna chahiye...

NANDINI : gud nite...

Blinking his eyes he walks away silently while she closes her eyes pressing her lips inside letting a lone tear escape her eye...

ye ham kya karre the...kyu uski vajah se baar baar kisi na kisi ko chot pahunchathe rehthe hain... and navya sits near pool completely lost in her thoughts when a cough brings her into reality and "manikkk...!!!!!"

arreyyy wahhh... not bad... naam yaad hain tumhe haaa... and he sits beside her looking her smiling...

tum soye nahi abi thak and she utters ignoring his words...

MANIK : nahiii wo jantha tha na ki navya naam ki bhooth sothi nahi hain tho main bi nahi soya

NAVYA : manikkk

MANIK : haan navyaaa

Rolling her eyes she sits staring the water while he rubs his palms and "abi bi bohuth pareshan kartha hain na wo tumhe...tumhari kayalon main rehke..."

NAVYA : main uske bare nahi sochri thi

MANIK : jhut...mujhe kehri ho ya apne aap ko...

NAVYA : main kabir ke bare main nahi sochri thi manikkk

MANIK : maine kabir ka naam liya hi kab tha navya

closing her eyes she sits letting her uncontrollable tears roll down while he kisses her hairs pulling her close wrapping his hand around her...

Hugging him she sobs like a kid while he ruffles her hairs and shhh...bas kar...

Not wanting anyone to witness them together she breaks hug and wiping away her tears turns her head away from him...

MANIK : navya jo bi hua wo galath tha...misunderstanding tha...tum ek baar kabir se...

NAVYA : manik please jo hua so hua...ab kuch nahi badal saktha aur na hi main badal na chahthi hoon...

MANIK : navyaaa

NAVYA : nandini aur tumhare beech jo kuch bi hua wo bi ek misunderstanding thi tho

MANIK : wo misunderstanding nahi thi navya...jo kuch bi hua mere ankhon ke samne hua...

NAVYA : nahi manik tumhe sach main lagtha hain ki nandu kabi

MANIK : navyaa pleaseee... nahiii...

NAVYA : usse zarurat hain tumhari manik

MANIK : aur tumhara kya...tumhe kabir ki zarurat nahi...

manikkk tummm...huhhh...mujhe nendh ari hain tum bi jake so jao...

MANIK : wo kahega nahi par thadap raha hain tumhare liye ho sake tho sochna zarur uske bare main...

NAVYA : thand bohuth hain zyada der rehna math yaha...gud nite...

MANIK : gud nite...

entering into room navya closes the door and directly walks towards balcony without even switching on the lights...

Here nandu stands before mirror after entering into her room locking the door having her eyes closed removing her ear rings when two pair of warm hands hold her hands looking her in mirror...

Knowing the touch even before completion of a nano second she fists her hands closing her eyes even more tightly while the person
before she could do or say anything twists her both the hands together at back holding them in his left hand and places his right hand on her shoulder...

NANDINI : dont you

shhh...!!!!! MANIK MALHOTRA ke samne chillana tho door ki baad unchi awaz main bi koyi bath nahi kar saktha... isliye hamesha apni awaz neche karke hi bath karna...!!!! and he whispers in her ear moving his right hand down lazily from her shoulder...

"aur NANDINI MOORTHY kisi ki order nahi follow karthi ye bath tum ache se samaj lena..." and she answers him back glaring him trying to free her hands from his grip...

Rassi jal gayi par bhal nahi gaya and he utters standing an inch away from her lips turning her towards him with a jerk pressing her hands tightly...

aaouchhh and she cries in pain closing her eyes tightly...

kyaaa huaaa...dard huaaa...and he utters innocently pressing her hands again giving her unbearable pain...

"dard ke alawa tumne kabi kuch diya hi kaha hain" and she utters opeing her eyes looking him with tears not because of pain but because of him...

leaving her hands in a jerk he looks into her eyes and "ye gatiya dailogues na tum apne paas hi rako, mujhe tumse kuch zaruri bath karni hain varna galthi se bi tumhari jaisi aurath ke samne aa kar bath karne ki galthi nahi kartha"

Hearing a sound navya here turns back and "kon hain..."

seeing the person walking close to her she burns with anger and "tum...tumhari himmath kaise huyi ander aane ki..."

"Bagwaan ne ache kase do pair diye hain tho unke sath hi ander aonga na aur jab ithne ache pair hain mere paas tho himmath ki aur kya zarurath hain ander ane ke liye" and the person utters leaning against wall...

NAVYA : outtt just justtt get out

aur agar nahi tho and person replies instantly increasing her anger...

Without wasting a second she starts walking out to her room when the person pins her to wall pulling her suddenly standing deathly close to her...

Kabirrr... and she whispers gulping her throat closing her eyes tightly...

"ankhen kholooo" and he whispers her back making his breath fall on her lips...

pushing him away she takes few steps ahead while he pushes her back to him in a blink holding her hand tightly making her collide with his chest and open her eyes...

Lost in her eyes he unknowingly moves close to her lips while she knowing what might happen pushes him back again and
"kabirrr kya karre hooo...!!!!"

"aisi ladki se kya zaruri bath jise tum galthi se bi bath karne ki galthi nahi kar sakthe" and here nandu utters lowering her head ignoring manik's gaze...

CAVYA...!!!!! and manik utters making her look him instantly...

mujhe phirse unhe paas lana hain and he continues while she stares him without blinking her eyes...

MANIK : cabir navya ko dhuk pahunchana chahtha hain

NANDINI : wo chah ke bi aisa nahi kar saktha hain

MANIK : ye ham janthe hain lekin wo idhar aya hi usse thaqleef dene hain

NANDINI : navya ko thaqleef main dekhe usse khud thaqleef hogi

MANIK : aur main nahi chahtha ki dono main se kisi ko bi thaqleef ho

bath...bath karni...tumse and here kabir utters after gaining his senses...

NAVYA : mujhe tumse koyi bath nahi karni hain

"MANAN ke bare main" and kabir utters holding navya hand stopping her from walking away...

NAVYA : kya bath hain

"mujhe tumhari help chahiye...unhe phirse ek karne main..." and he utters leaving her hand looking into her eyes...

NAVYA : unhe sath tho main bi dekhna chahthi hoon par wo itna asan nahi hain

KABIR : i know lekin agar ham kuch nahi karenge tho unke beech bath aur bigad jayegi

NAVYA : matlab

KABIR : manik nandini ko hurt karna chahtha hain wo bi buhuth buri tharah

NAVYA : aur wo isi liye vapas aya hain

kabir nods his head as yes while she closes her eyes and "ye ladka kab samjega ki uski kushi main hi iski kushi hain aur uski dukh main hi iski dhuk"

KABIR : philal ke liye aise hone ke chances bi nahi hain isliye hame hi kuch karna hoga

par kyaaa and she utters confused looking him opening her eyes...

"karna kya hain" and here nandini asks manik while he sighs and "exactly kya karna hain ye abi thak maine decide nahi kiya bas itna patha hain ki kaise bi karke unhe paas lana hain"

nandu nods her head silently while he blinks his eyes back looking at her...

"Kuch bi chahe kuch bi" and here kabir utters in a determined tone while navya sighs and "teek hain"

taking steps silently he walks ahead a little but stopping in mid suddenly moves close to navya and "galthi se bi ye math sochna ki iss sab ke beech tum mujhe phirse apni jaal main phasa paogi kyuki iss baar main aisa kuch hone nahi dene vala"

NAVYA : aur ye bath tum pe bi lagu hothi hain...tum bi galthi se bi mere paas phirse ane ki koshish math karna varna anjam bura hoga...

KABIR : par agaye haa tumhare teek hain koyi bath nahi ab main agaya hoon na bohuth hi ache se kaat dunga tumhare ye par aur wo bi bohuth jald

NAVYA : hogayi bakwas tho niklo mere kamre se

aur kuch and nandini asks manik while he smiles faintly and "kuch nahi bas thayar rehna barbad hone ke liye ab main vapas ho agaya hoon"

NANDINI : kon kaise barbad hoga wo tho vakth hi bathayega isliye tum uske bare main zyada chintha math karo

MANIK : iss baar barbad tho tumhe hi hona hain and i promise i will make sure about it

NANDINI : all the very best

Pachthaogi...tumhe pachthana padega...and he utters in anger while she shows him way towards her door...

Glaring navni manbir walk out from their rooms fisting their hands and bump into each other accidentally...

MANIK : tu

KABIR : tu

MANIK : tu yaha kya karra hain soya kyu nahi ab thak

KABIR : yehi sawal main tujhse bi kar saktha hoon

MANIK : wo main actually ek minute tu navya ke paas gaya kya

KABIR : main wo ek minute tu nandini ke paas gaya kya

MANIK : nahiii main kyu jaunga uske paas wo bi iss vakth

KABIR : yaa right main bi navya ke paas kyu jaonga wo bi iss vakth

MANIK : teek hain chel phir

KABIR : haa chel byyy

MANIK : byyy

and they walk into their rooms thinking how to destroy their love's life not having slightest idea what destiny was planning for them...






Doneee...kaisa laga... batao... bataooo...am waiting...!!!!!!
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