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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

thanks for the pm...

it's a nice starting...

BLUE BELLS VILLA... liked the name very much...

i think fab 5 knows navni before only...

n navni n manbir were very close... when manik n cabir introduced aliya n rose to b their gf then only to show manbir that navni have moved on in their lives that's why they also said that arya n harshad r their bf...

vase gir gya... manik n cabir injured themselves after seeing 4 of them enjoying n tickling...

fab5 wants to live in navniz house...this is also their part of their plan... n now celebrating the deal n going with them also is to get close to navni...




Ummm seems lIke you guessed so many things...yess manan aur cavya know each other lekin wo close the ya nahi aur navni ne jhut kyu bola wo tho you will get to know with time...staying in navni house is manbir plan lekin wo kis liye am not gona say anything...you will get all your answers dere dere with updates...continue waiting till that...thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow awesome update...
Something might have happened b/w manbir and navni in past...
I think they r in love...
So all r going to stay at one place...
Tht gonna be fun..
All r going to club...
Waiting for next...
Luved it...
Update soon..
And do pm me as u never do it 😑



Thank u dear will update soon...you are not in my buddy list thats the reason u dont get my pm's...am sryyy but will pm u from now...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sun07



hi


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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mananluvpani

Awesome superb part...
Kya fab5 nandu n navya KO phale se hi janta hai but kaise...very confusing... waiting for next part...



Dont worry dear u will get to know everything with time...will update soon...thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthi25

awsome updateπŸ˜ƒ

nice story line ..finally harshad in positive role for a changeπŸ˜†
continue soon eagerly waiting😊




Will update soon...thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manandeeplove

Ohooo...
1st part is up...
I m soo latee...chorryyy...

Amazing update...
Navni aryaman n harshard share thick bond of frndshp...

Navni got d contract for fashion designing...
N harshman got concert deal...
That too with fab5...

Good to see harshad being positive character...

Fab 5 ...manik with alia...cabir with rose...
I guess they r pretending to b in relationship..
Navni gave it right back to them by saying they r also in relationship with harshman...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
Manbir got angry listening it...πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†

So tom n jerry game starts between manbir n navni who r gonna stay under same roof...🀣
M excited for this..

Cont soon
Waiting



Its ok jaan you dont need to say sorry aur vaise bi sorry jaap karne ki adath meri hain teri nahi πŸ˜†
wanted to show something different so isliye harshad is positive and also navni is having good bond with harshman
Manbir are pretending ya nahi wo tho tumhe time ke sath patha chel jayega and lets see whether your guess turns to be right as usual or wrong for a change...will continue soon...keep waiting till that and yess ofcourse i know you loved my this comment too πŸ˜‰ 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja_manan

Fab update ❀️

Njoyed a lot...
❀️ ❀️



Thank u 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolate5756

ThankS for the pm
First chapter was super duper hit
Very nice
Wow navni are fashion designers very nice
Manbir are going contract wiTh harshad and Aryaman kya ideA nikala manik baba ne apni Juliet kE sath rehne ke liyE
Navni and aryashad binding very nice
Navni schooled DNS manbiR rocks by seeing eacH other
Wah ab toh wo sAb ek ghar mein re henge
It's nice to see harshad in positivE role
Navya ka reaction was awesome
Jallu manik apna hath hurt kar diya nandu aur Aryaman ke sath dekhte huwe
Dhruv single and Aliya with manik what how's that possible
Manbir ke shakal ka tang urgaye jab navnI ne apne apko aryashad ki gf boli hhaha par they were lying
Story aur bhi mazedar banne wali hain
Waiting for party all of them together at a time
Super update
Update nexT part soon
Thanks for the pm
Tc
Keep smiling
With lots of love and hugs




Thank u...thank u...thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hey Anuuu

Thank u for the pm
I know I'm late sorry...
Thoda guest ke saath busy thi ...

And then I had to read the prologue again... Ufff...
I actually forgot it so wanted to read it...

Update EK dum mast THA...chakaas...
Wow Manik CABIR and the rest will stay at NANDU'S house that to for a few days... Superb..

Khuch toh gadbad hai Manik CABIR iss Tarah se Nandu Navya KO dekh rahe the

Aware but Nandu Navya be jhoot kyun bola KI Harshad Aryaman unke boyfriend hai !?????

Khuch past main inke saath hula hai KYA ...
Have they met before??????

Confusion clear Karo ANUU...
Tujhe marenge toh Hume update Karun dega...hmmm

CHALO ABHI good girl Jaldise next update de dean ...



Its ok dear u dont need to say sry...heeheh i know i know bohuth sare questions hain par dont worry time ke sath tumhe sab kuch patha chel jayega aur apne sawal bi mil jayenge...haa haa good girl banke jaldi update dungi jaldi matlab jaldi 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 2 :


guys you are ok na and alia enters making manbir look her

KABIR : yaaa

manik tum dyan kyu nahi rak sakthe apna haaa and alia sits beside manik taking his wounded hand in hers carefully

MANIK : alia main teek hoon relax

DHRUV : you need to take rest guys

ABHI : yaaa chelo phir ham chelthe hain

KABIR : guys wo

MUKTHI : hame patha hain hamare rooms kaha hain

DHRUV : aryaman ne bathaya abi thodi der pehle

ABHI : dhruv tu akela nahi rehna chahtha tho we can share the rooms you know

DHRUV : pagal hain its fine vaise bi i dont wana disturb you guys

MUKTHI : pagal...chelo

MANIK : guys guys

ABHI : haaa

MANIK : wo ham sab bahar jare hain

ALIA : manik no you need rest aur ham

KABIR : common alia choti si chot hain bahar jane se kuch nahi hoga

MANIK : exactly so common get ready and we will meet down again

MUKTHI : par ham ja kaha rahe hain

KABIR : deal ki kushi celebrate karne

ALIA : par guys

ROSE : alia common bahar jayenge tho inhe bi acha lagega

KABIR : see how intelligent my love is

ROSE : haa haa bas bas ab chelo

KABIR : yes mam cheliye...arey tum sab kade kya ho chelooo...

ALIA : manikkk

MANIK : alia please mere liye chelo i know you are worried but i swear am perfectly all right aur

ALIA : acha acha teek hain calm down

MANIK : thank you...tum jaldi se change karlo phir main karlunga...

ALIA : okkk

Knock...knock...knock...

HARSHAD : ye dono door kyu nahi kolre

ARYAMAN : ready hore shayad

HARSHAD : hmmm ek kaam karthe hain ham bi thayar hothe hain aur phir inse bath karthe hain

ARYAMAN : teek hain chelo

MUKTHI : goddd abhi jaldi karo ladki main hoon lekin mujhse zyada vakth thayar hone main tum lethe ho

ABHI : bas panch minute mukthi

MUKTHI : okk fine tum thayar hoke neche ajao main jari hoon

ABHI : okkk

KABIR : kya hua madam

ROSE : kabir i need some more time tum aisa mere peche math pado

KABIR : ufff okkk i will go out then tum ajana apna some more time katham hone ke baad

ROSE : done

MANIK : chele

ALIA : nahii main ready kaha huyi hoon

MANIK : arey par you changed na

ALIA : haan lekin sirf change hi kiya abi thayar hona baki hain

MANIK : not again alia tum achi ho make up ki zarurat nahi hain

ALIA : awww thank you so much manik par phir bi mujhe make up dalna acha lagtha hain isiliye please thodi der aur wait karlo

MANIK : ek kaam karthe hain tum thayar hojao thab thak main sab ko dekhe atha hoon

ALIA : okkk

NANDINI : navya athe vakth mera cell lale aur haan jaldi aa zyada der math kar

NAVYA : teek hain tu thab thak aryaman ko puch ki wo thayar huye ya nahi

NANDINI : hmmm

cell...cell...cell...kaha hain tu...dikh ja mujhe jaldi se...and nandu gets busy searching her mobile while one person stands leaning againt door entering into room...

"Great make over haaa" and nandu gets frozed listening to manik voice while he walks closer to her taking slow and steady steps...

Indian dress se western...ek choti se open hair...its really ausome change haa...and he stands behind her just an inches away while she turns towards him and looks into his eyes...


(nandu dress)

Che mahino main apna pura ka pura rang hi badal dala haa tumne and he utters sarcastically looking into her eyes while she too stands looking him without blinking her eyes...

"vaise apna gatiya character bi badla yaaa nahi hmmm" and he utters moving deathly close to her standing just an inch away from her lips...

"you bloody" and before alia could slap her nandu holds her hand ever so tightly glaring her like anything and "zaban sambalke varna anjaam bura hoga..."

"chodo usse" and before manik could hold nandu hand she jerks away alia's hand making her stumble and fall on manik...

KABIR : aliaaa...manik...

MUKTHI : ye dono yaha kar kya rahe hain

you haven't changed right...oh yaaa...how can a bitch even change herself... and alia utters looking nandu while manik wraps his hand around her...

Thud...!!!!!! and nandu gives a huge tight slap to alia making everyone shock to the core...

"kaha tha...zaban sambalke..." and nandu utters widening her eyes in anger while abhi,dhruv,rose and navya enter into room at the same time...


(Navya dress)

you and not letting manik even utter another word nandu shows him her index finger and "same applies to you...mind your tongue or else you will regret it badly..."

Startled manik stands looking her while navya walking closer to nandu stands beside her looking manik and alia...

ALIA : tumhe kya lagtha hain...tum apni hoshiyari se ye sab harkathe karke manik ke paas ajaogi...uske zindagi main vapas ajaogi...

NANDINI : excuse me...kisse bath karri ho tum...haaa...

ALIA : listen zyada

NANDINI : ohhh just shut up and you listen...stop assuming things and dont ever dare to decide anything about me...

ALIA : then why the hell were you standing with manik damit itne karib se aisa bath kya karri thi jo tum dur rehke nahi kar sakthi

"open your eyes for god sake miss alia saxena...ye mera kamra hain...tumhara so called BF mere kamre main aya hain aur tumhara so called BF hi mere paas bi aya hain...isliye apne BF se pucho ki wo mere kamre main kya karne aya hain aur wo kyu..." and listening to nandu loud anger tone every one glance each other completely shocked...

"Main tumhari vajah se manik ko question nahi karungi...chelo manik..." and holding manik alia starts walking towards door while everyone stand looking nandu without blinking their eyes...

listen... and alia stops hearing nandu voice...

"Ho sake tho apne BF ko thoda thameez sikha dena ki kabi bi apne partner ke GF ke kamre main aise hi nahi jathe aur agar jana utna hi zaruri hain tho knock karke jathe hain" and nandu utters looking into manik eyes while alia walks out angrily with manik closing the door with a thud...

navyaaa ye manik and harshad stops in mid seeing everyone standing in navni room...

ARYAMAN : aap sab yaha

NAVYA : hamse bath karne aye kyu kya hua

HARSHAD : ohhh nahi kuch nahi par manik aur alia apne kamre ki tharaf kyu gaye

ARYAMAN : aur wo darwaze ki awaz kya thi

NAVYA : wo logon ka hame kuch nahi patha lekin wo awaz hawa ki vajah se thi

HARSHAD : par navya

NAVYA : shhh chup kitne sawal karoge

HARSHAD : huhhh teek hain

NAVYA : haan chelo ab der hora

ARYAMAN : actually navya wo ham tumse kehna bhul gaye

NAVYA : kyaa

HARSHAD : manik log bi hamare sath bahar are hain

NAVYA : achaaa

ARYAMAN : navya please dekho gussa math karo ham tumhe bathana chahthe the par

NAVYA : offooo itna kyu gabrare ho sab milke party karenge tho acha hi hain

HARSHAD : kyaa...matlab tumhe koyi problem nahi hain...

NAVYA : nahiii

KABIR : ummm actually wo manik thoda tired hain wo bahar nahi ara thooo ham sochre the ham bi gar main hi rahe

ARYAMAN : its ok bro jaisa aap chahe

NAVYA : acha ab chele

HARSHAD : haa madam chelo

NAVYA : yeyyiii

ARYAMAN : guys we will be back soon...tc...

chelooo and navya runs out holding nandu making harshman laugh nodding their heads...

ARYAMAN : nanduuu

NANDINI : hmmm

ARYAMAN : kya hua

NANDINI : kuch nahi

ARYAMAN : sach

NANDINI : much...acha ham bathana bhul gaye karan ne call kiya tha...

HARSHAD : kya kaha

NANDINI : aaj rath party hain

ARYAMAN : ooo

NAVYA : hmmm hamare celebration ke baad ham seeda vahi jayenge

HARSHAD : ab samaj aya ki kyu tum dono itna thayar huye

NAVYA : heheh

NANDINI : aryaaa

ARYAMAN : not again nandu nahi

NANDINI : please naaa

ARYAMAN : nandu next time pakka tum hi drive karna par is baar nahi

NANDINI : arya puppy face please

ARYAMAN : okk fine par thodi hi der ke liye

NANDINI : thank you

ARYAMAN : aram seee

NANDINI : yeee

HARSHAD : navyaaa kuchalna bandh karo bachi nahi ho tum

ham bachi hain...ham bachi hain...ham bachiii hi hain and navya sings in "hamko peeni hain" salman song tone making harshman and nandu laugh loud...


"manalo jitni chahe utni kushi miss navya naveli kyuki kal se tumhe sirf aur sirf rona hi hain...tumne mere sath kel kela na ab dekho main tumhare sath kya kartha hoon..."


"You dont deserve any happiness miss nandini moorthy and hence i will snatch away all your happiness...manalo aaj ke liye kushiyan kyu ki kal ke baad tumhe kushiyan mananeka mouka nahi milega"


and manbir utter gulping down their throats standing in their rooms watching navni smiling while screen frozes between them four πŸ˜‰






Why do manbir want navni to cry...why do they hate them so much...what had actually happened between them...will they succeed in hurting navni...stay tuned to know all the answers will continue soon πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
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