I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 19

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Awesome update well done loved it


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Nandu is hiding from Manik n so does want Naina n Shekar to happen...
Nice one indeed... ⭐️👏

I find it a bit cute when Janvi pouted n manik made the ice cream plan... Lets see if he manages to see Nandu ... 😳
Waiting for the next... thanks Eku... n so sorry for being too late this time dear... !
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Waiting for Manik and Nandu meeting and...
Lovely chapter Ekta, thanks dear 🤗
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Awesome dear 👏 Loved every bit of it.
What i enjoyed the most is the way Manik is behaving so maturely now.
Loving the track and will wait for more, luv ya sweetie.
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nandu is hiding from Manik n so does want Naina n Shekar to happen...

Nice one indeed...⭐️👏

I find it a bit cute when Janvi pouted n manik made the ice cream plan... Lets see if he manages to see Nandu ...😳
Waiting for the next... thanks Eku... n so sorry for being too late this time dear... !


Thank you bhaiya. ..why so much of sorry ...plz no sorry ...
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Waiting for Manik and Nandu meeting and...

Lovely chapter Ekta, thanks dear🤗


Tysm Di :)
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Awesome dear👏Loved every bit of it.

What i enjoyed the most is the way Manik is behaving so maturely now.
Loving the track and will wait for more, luv ya sweetie.



Thank you bhabhi :))
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All settled in the car ...

The kids were too much happy...

All kids and Naina sat on their back seat while Shekhar at the driving seat and Manik on the passenger seat ...

Manik : so bacha party chale ?

All kids shouted : yesss!

Elders smiled at their kids excitement ...

It started raining suddenly ...

When suddenly Janvi shouted : baarishh!!!

And her eyes twinkled like stars ..

Janvi : window kholo na...

Shekhar : beta ap bheeg jaoge...

Janvi : Masu nai bheegungi...plz khol do...

All smiled at her eagerness ...

Shekhar opened their window ...
Now Janvi was playing with the rain... sometimes taking some drops of water in her tiny hands and throwing on Pari and Abhi... sometimes giggling ...All kids were enjoying ...While Naina was admiring them

All these took Manik , deep down his memory lane ...

Nandini and Manik both were in his car... when suddenly it started raining heavily...Nandini smiled to the fullest and excitedly pressed her nose on the side window ...

Nandini : Manik...open the window na...

Manik : arey but baarish horahi h bheeg jaogi...

Nandini : nai bheegungi...tum kholo na

And made a puppy face ...

Manik : Acha acha now don't make this puppy face ...khol raha hu...

And he opened the window...

Nandini took some drops of rain in her hand and threw on his face ...

Manik made a bad face ...While Nandini laughed at him ...and again turned towards the window enjoying ...sometimes giggling ...sometimes throwing lil lil water at him...

Manik stared at her smiling face ...

Shekhar : We reached !!

This brought Manik out of his land ...
Soon they reached ice-cream parlour with kids talks filled of excitement...

All got down...

They had a seat...

Shekhar : so kis-kisko koun-kounsa flavour chahiye?

Pari : strawberry

Abhi : chocolate

Janvi : butterscotch with extra chocochips ...

As soon as Janvi completed ...Manik was lil surprised and he again went down on his memory lane

[CONTINUOUS OF THE PREVIOUS FLASHBACK ]

Manik stared at her smiling face ...

Suddenly Nandini shouted : Manikkk!!!!

Manik stopped the car being lil scared ...

Manik :what happened sweety ...tum thik toh hona...

Nandini : arey meko kya hoga...mujhe toh ice-cream khani h
She said with a pout ...

Manik : what ...and here I was so scared that what happened ...

He said with an angry face ..

Nandini: acha sholly ( she said holding her ears ) meko ice-cream chahiye...

Manik : sorry toh accepted baby girl but no ice-cream ...itni barish horahi h ...thand lag jayegi...

Nandini : plz na monster ...pretty plz (she said with a cute baby face)

Manik : okay okay now don't make this face or else (and he came too close too her face )

Nandini jerked him and blushing turned her face on the other side ...

Manik again started the engine and they reached an ice-cream parlour ...

Manik : so sweety kounsa flavour khana h ...

Nandini : as always butterscotch with extra choco chips ...

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His eyes were full of tears remembering all these while at the other hand , Shekhar called him 4-5 times but he didn't responded ...

Naina who was sitting beside him ..shook him from his shoulder ...which brought him back from his memory lane ...

Manik being lil unaware of surrounding : Haa???

Naina : Manik...shekhar is calling you since so long ... where are going lost ??

Manik : umm no where ... say na what happened ..?

Shekhar : woh I was asking which flavour of ice-cream you want ...

Manik : umm. ..I don't want to have it .. you guys have it ..

Shekhar nodded and went for getting the ice-cream ...

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All the kids were having their parts of ice cream ...While elders...or I can say Shekhar and Naina were talking and Manik was sitting all silent ...

Naina : arey bacho hogaya toh ghar chale?

Pari and Abhi nodded while Janvi was still having her ice cream with her tiny fingers...

Naina smiled at her ...

When Manik looked at her ..He was again lil surprised .


His thought ," phale same flavour of ice-cream and now same way of eating... matlab whenever I see her ..she always reminds of sweetie ..is she related to sweetie ... oh Manik what are you thinking ...just stop your non- sense ... " he scolded himself in his mind ...

Till then Janvi has completed her ice cream and Shekhar's car too had came ... so all departed as per their plan ...

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