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CHAPTER 4

Soon they reached home ... Naina rang the bell ...
Shruti opened the door...

They came inside ...
While Naina entered saying ,"bhabhi aaj baht thak gai !uff kinna kaam the! "

While Shruti and Nandini smiled at her .
When they were moving towards the hall area... Naina and Nandini saw Navya, Mukti and Cabir ...and we're surprised to see them there... They both blinked there eyes to believe if it's really true or what ...
While Navya, Mukti and Cabir smiled wholeheartedly.

Naina and Nandini at the same time : koi mujhe pinch karo plz. ..

At which they laughed and Navya took both of them in hug... Nandini and Navya took few seconds to believe and ingest the fact...
But soon they reciprocated ...and shouted loudly in unison ," Chutki..."

Nandini :- oh my god ! You guys are really here !!!! I can't believe it ... I am sooo sooo sooo happy...

Naina :- so ye sab chal raha tha, there dimag main Chutki !!

Mutki :- of course my dear ! Top batao kaisa laga hamara surprise???? .

On listening Mutki, they both jumped her and said in unison ,"baht baht baht baht achaaa... Thank you. ..Thank you soo much guys ...!!

Cabir : lagta hai. ..phir se main kisiko yaad nai hu :((

Now , they noticed Cabir...

Naina : Awww ... mere crime partner aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki main apne partner ko bhul jau. ..hmm?? Bolo ...??

Cabir : not at all !
He took Naina in side hug ...

Nandini : and me jeju? :(

Cabir : arey idhar aa meri doll...

And he took Nandini too in hug from other side ...

Nandini : I missed you all sooo muchhh.!!!

"We too missed you ", they all said and all hopped in a group hug including Shruti...

Breaking the hug all sat down on the sofa...and catching up all ...
After all they were meeting after sooo long ...

When suddenly Naina asked ," where is Manik????woh nai aaya????

Hearing Manik's name Nandini's expression changed ...

Mukti : nai woh aaye h ...actually unke kaam ke wajah se hi toh ham yaha aa paye. ..

Naina : acha. ..toh hai kaha woh. ..usse toh rarely baat ho pati thi...kaam main hi busy rahta tha...

Navya : woh he has gone for some work only ...urgent call aagaya so...

Naina : ohhooo. ..iska kuch nai hosakta...
Acha ye batao tum sab ne kuch khaya piya ya bas bhabhi ke sath baatoh main hi busy the. ...

Shruti : wahi toh main bhi kah rahi hu Naina ...inhe magar ye mane tabhi toh. ..kuch lane hi nai dete h. ..na hi le rahe h. ..

Naina : aise kyu?

Cabir : actually hamne bhabhi se kaha to take rest we will take whatever we want ...and then we got busy in talking ...so ..

Naina : so tumlogo ne kuch nai liya...acha chodo who wants the special coffee made by me ??????

All shouted ,"Mee..."

Naina smiled :okay wait ... I will be just back ...

Nandini : wait Naina mai bhi aati hu...and bhabhi. .ap room main jao and take ret for sometimes ...

Naina nodded ...

Shruti too nodded :- guys tum sab ja kar fresh ho jao tab tak.. Nandini phale inhe inke room dikha de...phir jana...

All nodded ...

Nandini showed Cabir and Navya their room ...While Mukti was going to stay with Naina in her room

And a room was for Manik which was just opposite to Nandini's room ...

Nandini showed them their room and went to Naina...

Naina was preparing coffee for everyone ...Nandini came there ...

Nandini : teri coffee ban gai?

Naina : haa bas hogaya...

Nandini : okay. ..tu jaa bhabhi ko ek bar check kar le...tab tak sab aajyenge. ..main yaha dekhti hu. ..

Naina nodded ...

Nandini prepared snacks for all of them and she thought to go to her room ...

When Nandini went to her room ...then only Manik returned back ... Manik entered home ...While Naina too came there ... seeing Manik she smiled widely and went to him and covered his eyes from back ...as he was facing his back to her so ...

Naina : pahchano koun??

Manik was lil startled by this sudden act...and touched the hands which covered his eyes ...

Manik : off course aur koun meri cutie pie hai. ...!

He said smilingly ...

Naina made a pout and said ,"this is cheating ...tum hamesha jaan lete ho..."

Manik made her face him ...

Manik : cutie pie ...ye tumhe bhi pata hai and sabko bhi ki ye habit tumhari hai and waise bhi main apni cutie pie ko na pahchanu ho hi nai sakta

Naina smiled : you are the best Manik ..

She hugged him ...He also hugged her back ... They broke the hug ...

Manik : sab kaha gaye??

Naina : sab fresh hone gaye h tum bhi jao ..fresh hokar aao...waise bhi tumhe toh harr waqt kaam hi dikhta h... :/

Manik : arey. ...acha sorry na...apne friend ko maaf nai karogi...

He said holding his ears and making a cute face which can melt anyone's heart

Naina : chalo now don't make this cute face ..jao maaf kiya...tumbhi kya yaad rahoge...

Manik smiled . Naina smiled back ...

Naina :acha jao fresh hojao tum...main bhi aati hu sabke liye coffee lekar. ..sab aate honge...your room is upstair... first one ...

Manik nodded..

Naina went from there ..

Manik went upstairs ...While going Manik saw a lot of photo frames hanging there ! All frames were having paintings ..those were very beautiful ...



He went upstairs ...There were two rooms opposite to each other ...so he was confused ...he saw the door of one the room was open so he thought that no one would let the door open ...so it must be the room ..He was looking for ...

He went inside the room...He found that the room was soo girlish type ...how can it be for him. ...

He turned to go back when he heard the door knob getting open ...

He saw someone coming out ...

After seeing the person , only a word escaped from his mouth ," Sweety.."

To his luck she didn't listen to him ...she was just too shocked to see him there ...

Both were just lost in each other ...

[Yes ...It was Nandini's room :P ]

Just then Naina shouted from downstairs...

"Nandini,Manik. ...come down ...kaha rah gaye dono???

They both came out of the trance ...

Nandini :umm. ...woh. ..Naina aarahi hu...

Nandini left from there hastily ...

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Shruti and Rahul's room ...This one is downstairs...




Naina's room ... This one is also downstairs ...



Room arranged for Cabir and Navya...downstairs only :P




Nandini's room ... There is a big area attached to it , which is like a terrace for her ...





Room for Manik...

Manik and Nandini's room are opposite to each other ...and they are upstairs ...

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So guys ...kaisa laga????
Hope you enjoyed it ...
Do tell me how it going ???
Thank you all who liked and commented :).
Thanks :)
Ekta. ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow that is the best update... all the rooms and decorations are awesome .
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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful update...
all room is too gud...
loved d update...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome n very cute update Eku... ⭐️👏
So the love birds have got the opposite rooms... 😳
And what rooms... 👏 Beautiful decor... n loved the color combinations... !⭐️⭐️
Now waiting for the trance coming back to the two n romance starts...
Loving the update... God bless you dear... !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update Ekta 👏👏
I loved the bond everyone shares, so cute and loving !
The lovers have met and the eyelocks were magical Nandini and Manik are in a trance and... 😳
Room decors are so beautiful ⭐️⭐️
I must say their home is a paradise !
Waiting for more, thanks dear so so much 🤗
Loves ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
The most friendly bond i loved it so much!
Beautiful update Eku dear ❤️🤗
Loved the bond they all share plus, the way they all talk. I mean they are meeting after a long time and this can be seen in their meeting and talks.
I liked the decors of the house. Very Royal Touch!
Now the lovers have met and Nandini left hastily. I know Manik will be following her downstairs to come back upstairs to their respective rooms 😉
Luv ya sweetie, awesome write up! ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
manikn nandini met
amazing part






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Superb update
Wow everyone meeting after a long tym
Hehe Naina n Manik
Nyc rooms
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Wow that is the best update... all the rooms and decorations are awesome .



Thank you :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you :)
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