I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zarakhanarlover

Awesome story... . Thnx for the pm...
Continue soon



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilkhushi

Sweetheart the story really good continue soon

So nandini is reliving the past by remembering it
Continue soon

N do pm
Love the story



Thank you dear ... :)
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Hello guys ...
Here is the banner of my ff. ..
Do tell me how's it ???? It's made by Sarahpeyton


And btw who wants me to update the next chapter ?????

Here is a short promo. ..:-


Manik and Cabir smiled on their excitement ...

Cabir : matao ap dono ka hogaya ho toh chale ya phir yahi rukne ka plan h ??????

Navya and Mukti both in unison shouted :Nooo ... chalo chalo jaldi chalo. ...

While Manik and Cabir laughed on them ...

Both made irritated face ..

Mukti : ab late ni horaha h ...let's go ...

Manik : yep let's go...

All moved to the car ...

Soon they reached airport and they boarded for their destination ...unknown to the future ... known to happenings which is going to take place ... !!!!



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nice banner ...
promo is too gud...
waiting for update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy
Thanks a ton for the pm

Very interesting story
Aww nandu's family is so cute ... Naina bhai n bhabhi
Manik CaVya n Mukti going to an unknown place
Who is Chutki? Navya or Mukti?
Interesting story
Would love to read further
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Thank you :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: navla

nice banner ...
promo is too gud...
waiting for update...



Thank you :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Heyy
Thanks a ton for the pm

Very interesting story
Aww nandu's family is so cute ... Naina bhai n bhabhi
Manik CaVya n Mukti going to an unknown place
Who is Chutki? Navya or Mukti?
Interesting story
Would love to read further



Thank you so much. ..
Your confusions will get clear in the next part :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Samruddhi_Kadam

Awsm banner...

Loved it
</div><div>Promo wow...



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MUMBAI :-
After breakfast all were ready to leave ...

Navya: so finally. .like I am gonna meet here. ... I am shoo excited ...

Mukti : me too ...navu...

Both said smiling to the fullest ...
Manik and Cabir smiled on their excitement ...

Cabir : matao ap dono ka hogaya ho toh chale ya phir yahi rukne ka plan h ??????

Navya and Mukti both in unison shouted :Nooo ... chalo chalo jaldi chalo. ...

While Manik and Cabir laughed on them ...

Both made irritated face ..

Mukti : ab late ni horaha h ...let's go ...

Manik : yep let's go...

All moved to the car ...

Soon they reached airport and they boarded for their destination ...unknown to the future ... known to happenings which is going to take place ... !!!!

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Soon the plane landed , all came outside the airport where the car was waiting for them. These were all arranged by Manik.
They put all the luggage in the car and they themselves also sat ..

They drove for the hotel first ...as they didn't want to be burden on anyone ...so ...
Soon they reached and freshen up ...

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On the other side :-

Nandini was busy in cooking while Naina was preparing coffee which is very famous ...as like Nandini was famous for food , Naina was famous for beverage sector . Both were experts in their own work .
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The interior of the restaurant was too beautiful !!






[Imagine Nandini standing there ]

Nandini was cooking something when her cell buzzed . She saw that it was from Chutki . She picked up the call.

Chutki :- Hello !Nandu tu abhi kaha h?

Nandini :- main abhi restaurant main as usual.. kyu kya hua? Tu aisa kyu puch rahi h?

Chutki :- nai bas aise hi, tu wapas kab aayegi I mean ghar jayegi. ...

Nandini :- umm... thode derr main, ab it's going to closing time ...toh tabhi. ... arey but tu ye bataiyegi ki tu aisa kyu puch rahi h bhala?

Chutki :- nai bas aise hi, tu jaldi aajana. ..I mean ghar chale jana. ...

Nandini :- okay! But ... ( till then she has cut the call ...)

Nandini found her behaviour weird but she chucked the thought and continued her work ...

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Here all reached Nandini's home and Navya rang the bell ...

Soon Shruti opened the door and was shocked or I can say surprised to see them all there ...

She shouted loudly ," Navya!!Mukti !!"

While Navya, Mukti and both men smiled...

Navya :- bhabhi thoda dheere, baby ko darr lag jayega. ..

All other laughed at her statement ...

While Shruti taking her in hug slapped lightly on her shoulder and took Mukti also in the hug ...

Cabir :- bhabhi! Phali baat ap hame toh bhul hi gaye. ... kyu haina Manik. ...

While Manik nodded cutely ...
Manik and Cabir were also fond of Shruti. ...
They also used to talk ...

Shruti smiled at them and nodded and by expression asked them to join the hug ...

They immediately came and hugged her ...but taking care that they don't hurt her as she was pregnant...

And our Cabira continued :- maine apni baat complete nai ki. ...

All broke off and gave him look while Shruti was lil confused ...

Cabir :- arey bhabhi. .yahi bahar hi basne ka plan hai kya andar nai bulaoge kya hame? ?

And Shruti nodded :- Haa, haa. .come inside ...woh just mile to excitement main ..
Manik cut her in middle :- arey bhabhi you don't need to be sorry and we understand. .. ye Cabir toh bas aise hi kuch bhi bolta h. ..

Cabir nodded and took her in side hug ... All moved inside the house ...

All sat on the couch ...

Navya :- bhabhi,ap kaise ho?Aur Nandu aur Naina ab tak aaye nai?

Shruti :- hmm...main tikh hu ... woh dono aati hi hongi...

Mukti :- aur bhaiya woh kaha h?

Shruti :- woh kaam se bahar gaye hue h...kal aane wale hain. ... acha ruko main Nandu ko call kardeti hu. ... Navya tumne bataya usse tum yaha aane wali ho ???

Navya :- nai bhabhi, usse phone na kare ap, humlog toh usse surprise dena h. ... maine issiliye toh kaha tha surprise hai!

All nodded ..

Shruti:- Acha baba theek h! Acha tell me ..kya loge tum sab. ...

Manik :- bhabhi, ye hamara hi toh ghar hai, hume kuch bhi chahiye hum lelenge...

Mukti :- haan bhabhi, bhai sahi kah rahe h. .

Cabir :- and you just take rest ... hum toh bindass h. ...

Shruti :- arey but ...

Navya :- no ifs and buts. ..end of discussion ..you just take rest ...

Shruti:- Acha baba, tikh h..

They were talking at random topics !!!

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Nandini asked the staff members to serve the remaining customers and then close the restaurant at its timing ...
After instructing them she came to Naina's cafe ...





[ The inside cafe was somewhat like this ]

Nandini was standing beside Naina. .. As she always use to come...
Naina saw Nandini and was saying something but Nandini was lost somewhere. .
Naina called her many times but she so lost that she didn't listen...

Naina :- Nandu! Nandu. .kaha koi hui hai?

She said tapping on her shoulder...

Nandini :- oh sorry , tune kuch kaha?

Naina :- Wah! Yaar main tujhe inne derr se bula rahi ! Huh ! Ja main tujhse baat nai karti :( !

Nandini:- Arey yaar, sorry na..
She made a very cute face which can melt anyone's heart ...

Naina :- awww! !! Meri cutie cupcake ...

And she said this while side -hugging her...

Nandini smiled in response ...

Naina :- Acha chal tujhe coffee treat deti Hu ..

Nandini laughed at her statement...

They sat in a table that was outside the cafe as the cafe ws inside and outside both... and they wanted to enjoy the weather ... .They came out and Naina asked the water to bring one black coffee and one coffee with extra cream ..


(The outside cafe.. They sat on this table.. )

The coffee came ... still our Nandu was lost somewhere ...

Naina :- kya baat hai?

Nandini :- kuch nai yaar. ...

Naina:- tu jhut na bol. ..samjhi. ..

Nandini :- tu ye sab chod, aaj na Navya ka call aaya. ..bara weirdly baat kar rahi thi ?..pata nai kyu? ?

Naina :- matlab? ??
Nandini sighed as she succeeded in diverting the topic ...Nandini while taking a sip on her coffee ...

Nandini :- haan pata nai. .. n rahi thi ki ghar jaldi jane. ..

Naina also took sip of her coffee ...

Naina :- hmm...kuch toh gadbad h..

Nandini also hmmed. ...

They completed the coffee and started for home ... ...


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I know I know I am very very late... but guys kya karu. ..busy with exam preparations... I hope you all will understand. ...

Coming to update ... I know it was boring ..its just I wanted to show the bond which they all share with each other ...and I also know that there wasn't any manan seen but trust me ..manan will meet soon ...hopefully in the next update ...


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God bless!!!!

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