I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE


A cute lil girl was sleeping in her big bed ... too cute and beautiful she was ...!!



Suddenly a girl of around 26 came ...

" Sugar, wake up !! apko school jana hai na bacha. ...!! chalo,chalo jaldi se get " with the she removed the curtain which were before a second stopping the sun rays. ..and now were falling at the face of that cute girl ... which was making her more beautiful and cute ...that lil girl frowned and covered her face with blanket ...


" sugar, it's 7 baby ...apke school haina at 8 ...and you are sleeping abhi tak ", said that woman .

By listening the time , that lil girl shouted, "What !! mamma .. apne meko utaya kyu nai. ..ab I will be late na..."
that woman made a perfect 'O' shaped face and put her both hand on her waist ..." mai. ..mai toh apko kinne derr se utha rahi hu and ap hi nai uth rahe the "

with that the lil girl bite her lips ,to cover up her mistake , she said ," mamma abhi I am getting late na. ..and you are wasting time in talking ..offo mamma ap bhi na " and by giving a silly and cute smile ..she went inside the washroom ...and shouted from inside ," mamma mere dress plshh give to me na. ."


"pagli" ,that woman smiled to herself and took out her dress and went to make breakfast ..

Till then the lil girl got ready and come down to her mamma and saw her in the kitchen ... she smiled to herself and back hugged her suddenly ...


That woman smiled and turned around and sat on her knees ...
" Mera bacha, you are ready ???" said she and kissed on her cheeks ...on which the lil girl kissed her back on cheeks ... and nodded her head in agreement ...

"Acha! toh mere sugar kya khayenge? ??"asked she .
The lil girl replied ," Aloo ke parathe", with cheesy smile ...

" Mere sugar ka hukam sar aakho par , abhi banati hu princess , you pack your bag.. OK. ." The lil girl giggled and went to pack her stuff ...

At the breakfast table ,
That woman made the lil girl eat her breakfast ..

Till then that lil girl's bus has been arrived ..


" Mamma, meri bus aagai h. . "said the lil girl ..

The woman came with her lunch box and was giving her strict guidance to her ..For eating her lunch properly ..to not to do jayada masti! !


"Mamma. .meri bus chale jaiyegi na. .mai jau ya aur bhi kuch.."she said with a cute pout.

That woman smiled to her and finally ..bid her bye ...

That woman came inside the home and went to a room ...

"kyu chale gaye ap dono hume ko chor kar...
kyu.." said looking at the picture hanging at the wall...and cried her heart out ...


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hello guys ..remember me ??? ;)
Kaisa h ye? ?
If you liked to tell me ...
Should I continue or not ??
any guesses who's the lil cute girl and that woman .???
toh what are you waiting for ... comment and like ...and tell me how's it ??

see you all soon ...

Lots of love ,
Ekta...


INDEX
PROLOGUE ABOVE
CHARACTER SKETCH
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
Chapter 10
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Posted: 8 years ago
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SUCH A SWEET PROLOGUE DEAR..
I LOVED THE CONCEPT..
AND WHAT I THINK IS THAT WOMAN MIGHT BE NANDINI AND THAT CUTE LITTLE PRINCESS MIGHT BE MANAN'S DAUGHTER..
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mananneetu

SUCH A SWEET PROLOGUE DEAR..

I LOVED THE CONCEPT..
AND WHAT I THINK IS THAT WOMAN MIGHT BE NANDINI AND THAT CUTE LITTLE PRINCESS MIGHT BE MANAN'S DAUGHTER..
UPDATE SOON



THANK YOU πŸ˜›
umm let's see how much your guess is right :))
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's wonderful update dear...
Who is the baby girl & who is this woman!?
Very excited to know..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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choti.. awesome prologue.. continue soon..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice start
please continue soon
thanks for pm
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Nice concept...πŸ‘πŸΌ.
Looking forward to read it...😳
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Awesome prologue. Too adorable.seems to be an interesting story. May be mamma was nandini and lil girl was manan's daughter.
Thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for update. Update soon. Super excited to read this story
Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
Update soon
Can u please pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update...
D lil girl is so cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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