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Posted: 8 years ago
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so guys this is short story if you like i will extend it πŸ˜†
i hope you guys like it πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
so this is about the jungle track but some changes in my story πŸ˜‰
this isthe part from wheree the tv episode ends πŸ˜†
Part 1
jassi runing runnuing and runing meanwhile aditya is running in the opposite direction the terrotists is behind aditya .
aditya trips and falls down and hits his head on a big stone
the sceene flashes to jogi
jogi is also runing he hears a jeep sound and goes towards but is stopped by one terrorist the terrorist stop him but he fails meanwhile the jeep is nowhwere to be found . jogi kick the terrorist in the gut and takes his walkie and runs ...
on the other side of the jungle
sumedh is talking to somebody on phone tells they should get jassijogi the other person on the line says what about aditya amy abhid . sumedh smiles with a smirk and says that for them hes planned something big also and cuts the call .


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cool yaar :D. Update soon. Cliffhanger pe hai abhi. Update jaldiii. :D
And if possible add some JasTya and Jogia scenes haan. :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAUCholic

Cool yaar :D. Update soon. Cliffhanger pe hai abhi. Update jaldiii. :D

And if possible add some JasTya and Jogia scenes haan. :D

thanks i thought my story sucked πŸ˜†
sure i will do that too πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Very nice story. πŸ‘
Pls pls pls continue it soon😳
I can't wait to read the next part..😭
Pls update soonπŸ˜ƒ
Add more scene of JasTya too.
I m loving them too much..
And pls pm me.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rahimar

Very nice story. πŸ‘
Pls pls pls continue it soon😳
I can't wait to read the next part..😭
Pls update soonπŸ˜ƒ
Add more scene of JasTya too.
I m loving them too much..
And pls pm me.😳

sure will do 😳
yes i like jatsya i will surely add them n all the other students too πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Nice story 😊
plz continue asap 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Nice...i liked it...
Do continue...
Want to read...
Update soon...
N I am very late...i m sorry

Also I possible add some jastya and jogiaa scenes...
Plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Awesome story,⭐️
Pls add more Jastya scenes
And pls continue soon😳
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