Ariya SS ~Thousand Years~ updated on pg 25

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hey guys i'm here back again with a TS. I've written it long ago but didn't got time to post here but when today i was rechecking my old works i thought to post it. so here bear my another work & this one is for the wonderfull support u all showed towards me when i was at my broken point & thanks for providing me time to recover, love you all.
Ariya Ts~Thousand Years~

part - 1

In a dark room a girl was sleeping peacefully but her slumber was broken by the ringing of her phone , she frustrated by the sudden disturbance opened her eyes cursing the person who disturbed her peaceful slumber which she got after how many ages she don't know herself too.

In phone ( sleepily )

Girl : hello... who's this ?????

Caller : (...)

Girl : whaaat ??? no this can't be happening plsss tell me it's lie.

Caller : (...)

Girl : ok , i'm coming to Mumbai

Girl's pov

What the hell ????? why is this happening with me ???? why me only ??? I just hope i don't have to face any of them and why the hell uncle didn't inform me earlier. Shit. I don't have any option left now but anyhow Riya get ready to face them. Please god help me with all this. but firstly i've to inform him??

End of girl pov

Girl : hello, prince i need you...

Prince : hey , riyu calm down what happened baby ??

Riya : prince , i've to go back there i don't want to face them ,i'm scared prince, plss can u come ??

Prince : yeah , i'm coming don't worry  jaan, i'm on my way...

Guy's pov

What the hell ?? what is this man planning now ?? i hate this man so much , three years i spend three years of my life making her mine , making her her old self i can't loose her now , i still remember that day that horrifying day when i loose something & get something better...

Flashback

The Mumbai police was in target of media after so many attacks in Mumbai but she was in fame for her bravery , her never ending spirit of helping others , her dedication to her work but all changed in one night when she was framed on attacking n trying to kill her boss , who was supposedly her brother too ACP Sameer Rathod , everyone left her side no one was there to support her , her finance Nikhil who was her boyfriend for past 5 years they were dating from last year of school he was always riya's crush, what she said love at first sight ugh break up with her broke all his bond with her saying he don't want her anymore what an idiot if i saw him somewhere i'm surely going to beat him black n blue for hurting ri then thank him cause of him i got her . but the aspect remain same still now she was hurt no broken no shattered that time , her friends , her family, her loved ones all against her but she didn't gave up she fought n fought till her last breath & proved herself , she won the battle but was injured badly she took her revenge punished the culprits n was out of the scene without informing anyone from her so called team who were hostile there but she was injured badly when i saw her first time , she was in hospital covered with all types of drips , IV's n   various other machine connected with her soft n delicate body ,n my heart was breaking watching her like that she was my everything my first crush , my first love , my life , i can't see her like that could i ? i knew her from school , was her senior & her best friend , no one knew that at that time as i was the school hero , the perfect guy with every girls eye on me, but my eyes were only on her from the starting firstly i thought it was cause she was my only girl cum best friend but then got to know i loved her when i was in collage but then got to know about her love n left her for her happiness but when i come back i saw her like this n it took every inch of my self control to not go n break them who dared to hurt my love, but i couldn't i've got something more important to do at that time ,i took special permission & bring her to Delhi with me &did all thing in my hands to make her normal whatever i could do n i succeeded finally she was normal again with me only at first then she was back she again joint the force n we were happy in our small world, our self made heaven until this uncle decided to drop an atom bomb on us.

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Guy's pov

I entered the house n found riya sitting on dining table lost in her thoughts, i went towards her n hugged her tightly , she hugged me back

Riya : prince , i don't want to go back there , i don't want to , y can't uncle understand this , i can't do this...

Prince : shhh riyu jaan look at me see no one is going to hurt you as long as i'm here n it must be imp other wise uncle would never had called us

Riya : us ??

Prince : yeah , Mrs Riya Rawte your husband Arjun Suryakant Rawte is appointed as the chief of NIA Mumbai n mam u r the second in command , i promise ri i'll never let them near u & that Nikhil not at all baby & see it's only matter of two - three months then u r on leave

Riya : leave ???

Arjun : yeah , see i can't let my pregnant wife work

Ri : arjun , i said na i can work till the 4 or 5 month the writing work

Arjun : but i don't want to & no discussion on that

Riya : ughh Mr arrogant rawte huh

Arjun : Mrs stubborn rawte

Riya : haaaw , u called me stubborn ??

Arjun : yeah , i did

Riya : u r so going to be dead tonight

Arjun : catch me first na

And started running in the whole house with riya behind him throwing diff stuffs at him well cushions mainly who wants to break valuable things & then after a tickling war both laughing whole heartedly fell on the bed.

Looking at each other & then again breaking into fits of laughter

riya : u always do this

arjun : n it always works , now just take rest i'll handle the rest...

riya : i love you

arjun : i love you tooo jaan now sleep tomorrow is a big day for us...

next day riya wake up pretty much late & found everything done , arjun had packed all the stuffs prepared breakfast & was waiting for her

riya : gudmrng 

arjun : mrng  sleepy head

riya : haaw , u can wake me early to u knw

arjun : but i don't want to , u look so cute while sleeping

riya : u knw starring is rude

arjun : but i've got the license , u see i can do whatever i like with my wiffy , now would u like to get ready or wanna me to help u with it

riya : shut up , give me 5 mins i'll back soon

after getting riya came n they had breakfast together & left for airport...

n Mumbai, their flight landed on time & when they came out of the airport , arjun's car was waiting for them to take them home..

Rawte mansion

As soon as the car entered & halted before the main entrance riya jumped out of the car like a lil kid & ran inside leaving a chuckling arjun behind...

When arjun entered the house , he find his cute wify in his mothers arms talking with her like they haven't talked for ages

Arjun : mom , i'm here also u see i'm ur son not vice versa

Riya : don't be sooo jealous & u knw it better mom loves me more than u

Mom : arjun stop complaining like a kid & being jealous of my daughter , who will say u r going to be a father  but alas i'm happy now we all be live together

Arjun : me too maa

The whole they went in pampering of riya by Mrs rawte & a complaining arjun moving around saying his mother forget him after she got riya, well if u see inside arjun's heart u can see how much happy he was cause of the bond his mother n wife shares but whats wrong in having lil bit complaining to gain attention & lighting up the atmosphere ...

Next day mrng after getting ready they all were sitting in dinning table where Mrs Rawte was feeding everything to riya by her own hands saying how weak she is looking she should take proper care of herself , does arjun don't take proper care of her n all while arjun was sitting there with puppy dog face

Arjun : mom , gernaly sasu ma's says this things to their sons n complain about their bahu's not vice versa & y everything is acc to her liking i'm here also na

Mom : arjun stop whining & being jealous of my sweetheart & i knw riya is taking proper care of u so eat

Arjun : so much inequality i'll complain

Mom n riya : shut uppp

Arjun : (mutter) bichara mein meri toh koi sunta bhi nhi


to be continued...

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part 2

After a hearty breakfast ariya left for their new office

When they enter the office riya noticed every girl starring at arjun checking him out & looking like he is something to eat & she was burning ready to murder every one of those girls & arjun was enjoying watching his jealous wife

Arjun : relax sweetheart , i'm all yours so don't murder all this girls , u knw no girl can resist my charm

Riya : proud much, huh

Engrossed in self talks, ariya reached the CF room & found the whole team lost in bickering.

A girl noticed them & stated

Girl : excuse me , who r u guys ? what r u doing here

Arjun : i should be the one to ask this ques miss whatever is your name ?? what the hell is going on here ??? is this NIA headquarters or some fish market huh ?? is this u want to show to others that this office don't have a thing called discipline , all of you listen to me very carefully that i can't tolerate any nuisance under me, so u all better change ur this attitude

Girl : who r u to say this huh??

Arjun : i'm DCP Arjun Suryakant Rawte , the new chief of NIA & this is Riya Rawte the second in command

Girl : so sorry sir , i'm aisha rathod third in command of NIA

Arjun : it's ok miss rathod, is all the team members here ??

Aisha : no sir & it is Mrs Rathod, our tech expert &commando , r outside taking care of a old case

Arjun : ok , i want the completed reports of previous all cases by evening on my desk got it

Team : yes sir

Arjun left from there to his cabin while riya sat there reading about the previous file

Riya : i didn't got the names can u tell me the names of the team member present here

Aisha : yes sure , u got my name n there is liza our forensic expert & shivani research specialist

Riya just nodded & went back to reading the file

The three girl among themselves

Liza : yrr kitne khadoos hai yeh dono , hum kaise kaam krenge inke sath itne khadoos toh tere pati bhi nhi aisha

Shivani : ha yrr dekh baat bhi nhi kr rhe pr jo bhi kaho , humare new chief hot to bohot hai

Aisha : ha dikhne mein bhi aur behaviour se bhi , but yrr naam toh bohot hai inka

Riya : girls this is office & it willbe better if u complete your work instead of chatting

Girls : yes mam ( murtter to themselves khadoos)

It was pin drop silence in the cf hall , when two guys enter, the guys didn't notice the new person sitting there & said

Guy : abbey itna sanata kyu hai idhar ??? aaj suraj kaha se nikala , hum sahi jagah pr toh hai na

Guy 2 : ha kahi hum kisi galat pate pr toh nhi pahuch gye

Riya : agar headqautera ana tha toh sahi jagah hai aur kisi playground ein jana that oh galat jagah kyunki yeh NIA headquarters hai koi playground nhi jo har samay shor sharaba hoga, sys now both of u agar waah pr khade khade ghurna ho gya toh plss join us here n start ur work, i don't want any excuse for pending work got it

Guys : r..ri

Riya : ACP Riya , u both better start your work now saying so she banged the file with a great force on the table showing her anger & left from the CF hall leaving behind an amused team

While both the guys were just starring at her direction after few minutes when the girls couldn't take it

Liza : shreee , mana bohot khubsurat hai voh pr iska yeh matlab nhi ki tum dono aise ghurte jao usse

But no response from shree n liza was burning with jealousy watching her boyfriend lost in some other girls thought

Aisha shook shree n chotu bringing them back to the earth

Shivani : guys mana ladki khubsurat hai but bohot attitude problem hai , bohot khadoos hai , pta nhi kya samajhti hai khud ko

Liza : ha dekho na aate hi pure office ka naksha badal diya in dono ne aur pichle sabhi cases ki complete file chahiye humare new chief ko voh bhi aaj hi...

Choree didn't uttered a single word n cont doing their work only.

It was end of office time without any case lucky for' them & an early end of the day as after completing the file arjun permitted them to leave

Choree were approaching riya to talk with her , but arjun was faster than them & dragged riya out with him, while choree were sadly going home with the girls when the girls told them that they wanted to have ice cream , so the gang went to a ice-cream parlour & found ariya there too

Riya was sitting with three ice cream cups in front of her n was eating one spoon from every cup while arjun was laughing & the scene was too much for the NIA team to take in , they found riya's phone ringing & riya's mood changing again watching the number, arjun picked up the call for riya & talked for sometime & then whispered something to riya & they both left from there

Girls : these two r sooo strange r they dating ??

Choree : don't know

Aisha : but we've to leave now , will see you both tomorrow

Liza & shivani : okk byeee

Arjun pov

Im driving the car n riya is sitting extremely silent besisde  me , i knw she is scared, hurt n nervous n i'm feeling extremely helpless as i couldn't help her, i grabbed her one hand lightly , giving her the much needed assurance after sometime we reach the hospital.

End of arjun pov

Arjun to receptionist : can u tell me where is Mr rathod admitted

Receptionist : yes  sir , room no 21 left from that side

Arjun : thank you

Arjun took hold of riya's hand & left towards the direction the receptionist told when they reach near the room, they saw Nikhil , riya's aunt (buasa), Sameer & comm. Uncle sitting there, riya got more nervous & hold arjun's hand tightly as if her life depends on him, arjun understanding her nervousness hold her hand more tightly & assured her with his eyes, he is with her no matter what at that moment riya's uncle noticed them.

Uncle : riya beta , tum aagayi i was waiting for u only

Riya just nodded at him

Uncle : go inside & meet your dad beta , he has been waiting for u

Riya again nodded & dragged arjun with her inside the room who was till now glaring at Nikhil , riya's aunt & sameer.

Inside the room

Riya's dad was lying in the bed & various machines attached with him , riya ran towards her dad & hugged him tightly & started sobbing

Riya : papa , aap apna khayal kyu nhi rakh skte , dekhiye na kitne bimar hogye hai aap, aapne promise kiya tha na humse aap khayal rkhenge apna

Riya's dad : beta ab tujhe dekh liya na toh ab bilkul theek ho jaunga meri bacchii , meine pehle bhi bola tha na beta duniya kuch bhi bole mujhe meri bacchii pr bharosa hai fir khud ko sabit krke apne papa k paas wapis kyu nhi aayi , kya itna bhi bharosa nhi tha apne papa pr

Riya : dam ghoot rha tha yaha humara papa , ghutan ho rhi thi , jinhe itna pyaar kiya unhone hi dhoka diya , aap the , uncle the pr fir bhi nafrat ho gyi thi iss jagah se

Riya's dad : mein samajh skta hu mere bacchii pr itne deeno tk apne papa k bina kaise rahi, ab toh apne papa ko chod kr nhi jayegi na

Riya : bilkul nhii papa kabhi nhi

Arjun was looking at the reunion of this fater-daughter duo when riya signalled him to come near them

Riya : papa , arjun se miliye humare pati

Riya's dad : beta tumhara shukriya ada kaise karu , mere bacchii ka dhayan rakh ne k liye wrna in logo ne toh mar hi diya tha mere jaan ko

Arjun : papa aisa bolkr humein sharminda mat kijiye , aur hum riya se bohot pyaar krte hai usse us halath mein nhi dekh skte the hum.

Riya's dad : bohot naaz hai humein aap dono pr , bhagwan tum dono ko humesha aise hi khush aur salamat rakhe

Arjun : babasa ab toh kuch hi mahino mein aap ko dada khkr pukarne wale bhi ane wale hai toh aap jaldi se theek ho jayiye

Riya's dad : sacchi beta , ab toh mujhe theek hone se koi nhi rok skta aur riya beta apne baba se milne aate rehna

Riya : ji papa , ab aap aram kijiye hum chalte hai.

Outside

Choree n aisha just reached the hospital & saw ariya entering the room.

Aisha : sam , aap jante hai inn donno ko kya ??

Sam : tum kaise janti ho inhe aisha ??

Aisha : NIA k new chief n second in command hai bohot hi khadoos aur akdu hai aur uss ladki mein toh bohot hi zyada attitude hai

Before sam could say something , sam's aunt dived in

Aunt : sahi kaha aisha tumne bohot hi ghamaandi ladki hai , apne siwa kisi ka koi khayal nhi , ab toh bado ki izzat krna bhi bhool gyi hai , bohot hi selfish hai voh dekho itne deeno se uskey baba hospital mein admit hai milne tk nhi aayi kaisi ladki hai

Riya : humein iss seher se nafrat hai Mrs suryavanshi issliye hum yaha nhi the aur papa k bare mein humein aaj hi pta chala hai, and hum aaj hi milne aagye aur jaha tk hum kaisi ladki hai yeh aap na hi jane toh behter hai aur bado ki izzat ka jaha sawal hai humein yeh pta hai kn izzat ka hakdar hai aur kn nhi aap sys

Buasa : aaye ladki tu apni aukad bhool rhi hai mat bhool humne tumhe paal posh krr bra kiya hai

Riya : pehle mujhe bhi wahi lgta tha, pr ab pta chala ki mere papa k ghar pr rehna aur unkey paiso pr aish krne ko parwarish krna nhi khte

Buasa : zubaan sambhal ladki

Riya : kyu sach kadwa lga aur batau apna ghar toh sambhala nhi issliye apni beti lekr humare ghar mein aa gyi, mere har cheez apni beti ko de diya, mujhe uskey purane kapde dete the aur meri nayi cheeze usse de dete the mujhse kaam krwate the aur usse kuch nhi kehte meri galti na hone pr bhi papa se mere complain krte the yeh thi na aapki parwarish huh, aur ab yeh parwarish aur khayal rakhne wala drama mat krna plss

Arjun was standing beside riya & watching her bua's facial expressions finding it very difficult not to laugh as riya was the best officer no doubt before too but was a really sweet girl in home who never replied back to anyone n listened to all the bad words of her bua now if such a person answers like this then u can imagine the persons reaction

Nikhil : stop it riya aise bado se baat krte hai kya koyi maafi mango unse abhi

Riya : hey , Mr stay in your limits & don't interfere in my matters or i'll show u what is hell , get it  & i've ears u knw i'm not deaf so y r u shouting , r u still in such misunderstanding that ur loud voice scares me or something than forget it & for talking to your senior like that i can suspend u right now only

Buasa : ladki , tere jijaji hai voh aise baat mat kr samjhi , tere behen k pati

Riya : pehli baat mera koi bhai-behen nhi , dusri baaat mera iss pariwar se koi rishta nhi, teesri baat meine sirf usse apne seniors aur ladkiyo se baat krne ki tameez sikhayi jo us mein nhi hai , so aap apna yeh prawachan apne paas rakhe better hoga

Buasa : ( highly insulted now ) ladki ek toh apne bhai ki jaan lene ki koshish ki aur ab humse aise baat kr rhi hai ( in mind riya rathore hi toh ho na ab dekhti hu kya bolti ho tum , ab toh bohot dard hoga na tumhare khud k pariwar ne sath chod diya tumhara)

Riya : meine toh bohot sari jaan li hai , mere hath toh khun se range huye hai pr ek bhi begunaah k nhi aur jin ki jaan lene ki baat kr rhi hai na aap , unse ek bar khud puch lijiyega kya hua tha aur kisne jaan lene ki koshish ki thi aur aapki beti kuch zyada hi naam sune mein aa rha hai pr ussse na mera koi lena dena nhi jiska ho usse btana ab aapka ho gya toh mein jau, kuch aur reh gya hoga na toh uncle se puch lena mere paas abhi itna samaye nhi hai, aur na hi itna faltu ka samay hai bohot kaam hai mujhe so byeee fir na milne mein koi interest nhi mujhe

Riya turned to see an arjun on the verge of laughing very hard as his face had turned red cause of controlling his laughter

Riya smiled at arjun who grinned back at her& took hold of his hand & left from there. Thinking that taking out her anger & frustation felt really good

While there stood a bunch of startled people & a smirking comm.  rathod was the first one to come out of his shock state n roared at buasa

Sam : aapki himmat kaise huyi humari behen se aise baat krne ki , kuch akal hai aapko ki aap kya bol rhi thi huh pta hai na ki humari jaan bachayi hai usne na ki li hai , itne deeno k baad apni behen ko dekha meine baat krne ka mauka tk nhi diya aapne aur nafrat krti hogi ab voh mujhse sirf aapki wajah se aur yeh rawte aisa chipka kyu hua hai mere behen se damn it

Buasa : (scared seeing sam's anger) maaf kr dena sameer beta hum bhool gye the bhaisa ki tabiyat ko lekr pareshan the

Sam : band kijiye apna yeh drama aur chale jaiye yahase isse pehle hum bhi aapka lihaaz krna bhool jaye.

Nikhil : but yeh Rawte riya se aise chipka kyu hua hai, kahi voh usse humare khilaf bhadka toh nhi rha na

Aisha : sam , yeh aapki wahi behen hai na, fir aaj usne apna naam riya rawte kyu kaha , uske iss attitude ki wajah toh pta chali pr arjun sir ka attitude aisa kyu and shayad yeh dono date kr rhe hai

Choree & samkhil : whaaat ????

Sam : yeh rawte toh shuru se hi aisa hi khadoos hai mere behen ko bhi bna diya ab aur yeh rawte ka chakkr kya hai ??

Uncle : ab voh tumhari behen nhi rhi sam , voh ab arjun ki biwi hai , delhi jakr pehle arjun ne riya se shadi hi ki thi taki koi unkey relation pr ungli na uthaye eyeing buasa & he is really possessive about her

And for some people there whole world turn upside down hearing this news.


to be continued

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Edited by angelariya - 8 years ago
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Omg stuti its so awesome
I really loved it
What I say its so cute n emotional
All blame ri wrong.but she prove herself right.
That bloddy nikhil also left her side n 5 year relation
But as arjun says its good otherwise how we get ariya
Awwe ariya married n soon to be parents
So they are back again in mum
Ohh ri n her mil bond so nice
Arjun is showing fake  jealousy but happy inside
Plz haa ab ise late mat karana
I have a problem cant handle curiosity
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oyye ye toh fantastic hai yaar 
Loved it and luv u tooo
How cute ariya married and ri preg how cute
Lived ri and sasu ma's bonding
Plzzz yaar mere hotel hue hi UE story complete honi chahiye 
Did u get it
Ye tumhare di ki dhamaki air request bhi
Hope u'll fulfil it
And mind blowing idea
Thanx for pm
Cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww lovely update
wow ariya s married
loved arjun's mom's bond with ariya
eagerly waiting for next part
cont sooon

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just  awsm mindblowing  story
eagerly  waiting  4  next  part
plz  update  soon
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superb
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Superb fantastic update!!!
Love all ur ffs!!
Dey r Fab...
Interesting ts!!!
Luvd all emotions n track...
Poor ri...tragic past!!!
Luvd arjun...d way he supports ri!!
As always ariya r Fab together!!!!!
Ri n her dad convo was awsum...
N arjun's commentary in it added d sparkle!!
N I loved d new ri...
Who fights for herself!!!
Hate everyone who didn't supported ri ...
wen she needed it d most...includin Sam!!
Hate dat bua d most...
Continue soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome parts
Love ariya relationship
Arjun is so supportive
Plzzz thoda aur shock do etf team ko
Continue soon
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Omg i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it