Parvarish season 2 ff: Parvarish ka Parinaam(Chapter 1 - Pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice CS
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice CS

Waiting for the update

I will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls update soon😊
Pls pm me too.
Edited by Rahimar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please PM me haan when you update. Loved the character Sketch. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome cs
Plz also tell the pairs
I want jassi and rahul together
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE

Government College of Technology
Delhi

Ha to doston aaj hum sikhenge modern generators ke baare mein. Vaise to purane generators bhi bahut acche the aur lekin meri mumma ji kehti hai ki parivartan hi sansaar ka niyam hai hahaha
S1- yaar bhale hi Jogi sir ke kuch jokes pj's se bhi batter ho par vo jis tarah se bolte hai na apne aap hi hasi aa jaati hai.
S2-sahi kaha yaar, lekin sir hai bade acche inke class mein kabhi bore hi nahi hota.
S1- vo to hai

Tring Tring
J- oye ek minute yaar mera phone aa raha hai.

After picking up the phone
J- Hello

Voice on the other side - Hello ,kaha ho tum

J- Main to abhi class le raha hu

V- ok fine jaha bhi ho jaldi aa jaao

J- arrey aise kaise aa jau, main abhi class mein hu

V- vo sab mujhe nahi pata, jaldi aao that's it.

J- arey lekin, hello hello, ye bhi na, arey doston mujhe jana padega main professor sinha ko bhejta hu, vo tumhe aaj padha denge

All students(with pout) -siiir

J(sheepishly)-sorry

And he went away, he calls the person and ask where to meet, the person give him address and he reaches CCD. He goes to the table where the person is sitting

J-oye kya hua

The person gets up and hugs him

V- I am so so so happy Jogi, tumhe pata hai main Mrs Malvika, the best designer of Delhi unke under unki intern banke kaam karungi, oh god I don't believe this (she started jumping in his arms only )

J- Kya baat kar rahi ho yaar riya, congrats

R- Jogi I am feeling over the moon now

J- oye dekhna ab vo din dur nahi jab tum bhi Delhi ki best designer mein se ek hogi

R(with excitement )-really

J- arrey ha yaar bilkul

Scene shifts to AK Industry

L- Aditya sir aapki aaj ki meeting fix ho gayi hai Mr. Rahul Singh ke saath vo abhi aate hi honge

A- ok neha, aur ha main jab unse meeting karunga to mujhe koi disturbance nahi chahiye

N- ok sir, I will make sure of it

A- thankyou

After sometime
Knock on the door of Aditya's cabin

R- may I come in Mr aditya Kapoor

A(smile and smirk)- welcome mr rahul, please come

They both shake hands and then hug each other as during soty they have also became friends

R- so kaise ho

A- bilkul thik, khade kyu ho baitho na.

They both got seated and then after discussing their work they started talking about their past school life, etc. Then suddenly Rahul says

R- waise soty ke last round ne humari zindagi badal di

Aditya's expression also turned serious

R- aur I think tumhari sabse zyada, jassi aur tumhara equation jo change ho gaya

A(with genuine smile)-equation ka to pata nahi lekin uske prati mera vision zaroor change ho gaya, afterall jis jassi ko maine us din dekha vo to bahut alag thi

Rahul was hurting himself by talking about it, but he wants to know feeling of Aditya towards jassi and vice versa

He remembered the harsh day of every participants of soty last round

To be Continued


Ok I know aap mein se kuch log ye update padhke naraaz honge ki maine rahul jassi ka pair up nahi kiya, but is forum pe already ek rahul jassi ki story chal rahi hai aur adi jassi pe kisi ne nahi likha so I thought to write on them
Please comment acche bure sab chalenge



Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Massst hai yaarπŸ˜ƒ
Update soon- abhi suspense mein rakha haiπŸ˜ƒ
Loved the characters- Jogi being always funny, Ria designer, Rahul and Aditya also doing great. Jassi ka dekhna hai abhi.
Waiting for the update.πŸ˜ƒ
And haan, THAAANKS for the PM.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



Edited by NAUCholic - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Omggg finally prologue I was waiting for it u knw!!!! It was amaznggg jogiaaa jogi ll never change lol!!!! Coming to adi jassi dear go ahead I love them and I would love to read wat is their story...omg prologue is cliffhanger...I really wanted to know wat happened in soty but koi nhi...update first part soon...and jassi's introo...!!!! Prologue is very interesting and pls pls update first part soon...nd thanku soo mchh for the pm!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rahimar

Pls update soon😊

Pls pm me too.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAUCholic

Please PM me haan when you update. Loved the character Sketch. πŸ˜ƒ

Thankyou so much
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