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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Amazing must say u write so nicely...

I always wait to c if thr is ne new concept on Swaron frm u...

Loved it do continue soon...

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Sana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow...awesome concept

They still love each other <3

Waiting to read more...update soon! :)

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VReSh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

U wrote this for my bday thread and I m so glad you are writing another part...I so wanted to read more so Thank you :)

Will be waiting for the update🤗

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Shifa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Superb Part, loved it.
Eagerly Waiting for Next Part, Update Soon.
Thanks for d PM.

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raksh11

@raksh11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Really interesting concept n new too plz update second part did,I missed ur writing, finally u r back, update ur other stories soon

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gsk4

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome story keechu. 👏👏👏. Update soon.. 😃😃😃

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SHAhira-Swaron

@SHAhira-Swaron

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Awesome update di.. Swayam a sport person was great their 7 yrs of seperation deir love thou sharon is nt ready to acept t nt now nt den bt our swayam wil surely make tie him as he s her loverboy jst awesome & new concept loved t wholly update sn nd pm me

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Finally u posted it n decided to give it a shot

U r amazing writer n dis one u wrote so well dat too in so less time 😛

i already said dat i loved it and now coming to the story

Swayam n sharon meet after 7 years of seperation and sharon loves him bt still afraid of confessing her love as she feels dat if swayam stays wid her he wont be happy bt swayam finally back in his lover boy mode n he is all set to win her back i guess Simmi gonna play cupid for sharon n make her realise dat dre happiness in incomplete without each other

waiting for nxt part ...update sooner 😊

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Thank u so much Didu the editing it...

I'm waiting eagerly for the second chapter... Update soon

Love u

Will update soon.

Love you too.

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star
Oops... Didu I'm so sorry yaar... Woh kya haina I'm a crazy girl... I can't stop myself from giving a long or at least a bit long comment so I'm back here to comment.. Don't mind it haan...😆
I re-read the first chapter and I couldn't stop myself from reading it again but had to stop😉

The way Sharon is potrsyed is just so so sooo wonderful yaar... First I thought she was seriously not those girly type who thinks of falling in love... But yaar she's already in love.. OMG! Sharon Rai Prakash is already in love...👏

Swayam, a sportsperson, amazing yaar.. What had happened 7 years ago that Sharon didn't let Swayam enter her life? What is wrong with Sharon? Why did she say that the happiness she'll give to Swayam will just be short lived? Is Sharon suffering from any disease? Please update soon sissy...

I'm just glad that Swayam din misunderstand Sharon and is all set to woo her back...

I love you Didu.. Though I rarely watched D3 but I've always loved their Jodi and I'm loving this story too

Love,
Shreya

Thank you so much Shreya for this long comment. 🤗

@Bold That cracked me. 😆😆

she is not suffering frm any disease.

I love you tooo...

Will update soon, i havent bcoz i was not happy with the response. but will do soon.

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