#6 Devil's Bride Manan Ff epilogue on page 62 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Amazing ... Awesome... Wow... Mind blowing... Loved it to the core...Iu r back with a bang!!!!

So beautifully written ... I loved how Manik said all that in anger to make her cry ... But u two write... U did show us another side of the coin ... We all thought Manik was the devil & the villan here but u wrote it so well showing us that Nandini was just as wrong & she put him thru hell as well

Love it how u brought them together as equals... & not 1 right & 1 wrong...
U shud put ur story on whattapad... Am
Sure u will get tons of more readers & followers to appreciate ur work there

Thank u for an awesome chapter once again !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Awesome update loved it so finally manan is back as one n they will be together hamesha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Great update .plz update the next part soon,waiting... πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Wah wah wah what an amazing chappy πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...tussi dil khush kar ditta...ps...i doubt if last line was correct πŸ˜‰...but on a serious note i loved the chappy...the way you made them patch up...it was awesome n thanks for giving us happy ending...i m so happy that finally u have given us update n i hope u did very well in yr exams...best wishes for yr result 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
First of all thank you for understanding me. I know I am a bit too emotional at times, but can't help it. This story made me cry so much😭.
Also please you don't have to be sorry, I mean you can't always make everyone happy, you just have to choose one or the other. Coming back to the update I actually liked the way you represented both sides, proper court style you know.πŸ˜‰
I hope this is not the end because I really want to see what happens after, and please if possible try to make it a bit funny because this will light up the mood up a bit, kind of like desert after spicy food.(if you get what I mean, I know it doesn't make sense but still) πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
You are back with a bang!!!! Amazingly beautiful. You are the best ' Devil's Bride writer'.
That's what they needed. Now back in track.

Please update soon other parts. Waiting. ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Waaaooo finally u r back dear.
Amazing update.
Superb.
I loved all angry manik's dialogues.
U described amazingly.
Even for some time I thought that manik suffered more than nandni,
I will wait and I will love to read their intense love and rumance.
Bcz no one can give aggressive rumance but u.
Next part soon plz.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#38


Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome amazing superb .emotional. ...and go on...

This is called a devil's bride...chapter. ..

My God the way you shows maniks side. ..

Nobody can think that way that was amazing answer. ...

He was more hurt and painful hearted. ...

And he was too begging for forgiveness. ..

He did some mistakes but. ...the way you tell his side. ...

The game change here...yes tali do hath se bajti hai...

Today you make him a good person who deserve a happy life. .

I think today he stands more good because he was asking for forgiveness. ..without any ego...all hands down. ..on his knees. .

This is a nandni who also admit her mistake. ...

All the chapter was magical. ...

You are a one very good writer. ..who' only can justify with all the characters. ..

A big applause for you my dear. ...for sharing this wonderful story. ..

This was the amazing chapter. ...I was waiting for from very long. ...

And you just did magic here. ...

Now only one request. ..show them lovey dovey...romantic. ..

Manik with hunger of love with his daughter. ..to fulfill. ..

Looking forward to seeing more amazing update. ..

Thanks for sharing this the amazing chapter. ..


Stay blessed dear...




Thanks.






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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Wow
Awesome
Amazing
Superb
Finally she let it out
And true not everbody is perfect

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
It was totally amazing,
you are brilliant,
the way you justified Manik and his did shows it,
cause I have never thought in this way,
love it a lot,
can't wait for the next part,
continue soon.
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