ariya ff JAHAN PE BASERA HO part 8 on pg 18 4 jul

hi

I again come with new story. ha ha ha
I know I know meri 2 stories on going hai.
but kya karu ab ek bar Jo mujhe plot dimag mai aa gaya to dobara mai khud khud ki bhi nhi sunti. ha ha
to about story pelhi bar I am going to write a little thriller story. not only thriller this story consist friendship love n life


hope I will write my best. it's my ambitious story.
n hope I'll get proper comment if not I'll drop. I repeat I'll drop. yar guys atleast itna to bata dena is it good or not.

thanks
Edited by kashvi19 - 7 years ago

prologue

location Indore (MP)

place - a beautiful house "Basera"

14 Feb 2016 time midnight 1:00 am

Its feb month .so atmosphere bahut pleasent or normal hai. Na jyada thand na jyada garmi. pedon k patte dhere dhere hawa k sth lehra rahe hai like hawa koi dhun baja rahi hai .or ye jhoom rahe hai.

ek beautiful sa ghar basera . garden , swing ,or bahut pyar se banya or sajaya gaya basera.

ek couple apne bedroom mai so raha hai.ek dusre ki bahon mai. boy ne girl ko protectedly pakda hua hai jaise use puri duniya se secure karna chahta hai.

kamre ko dekho to lagta hai.its happy family. or kal rat us couple ne koi occasion celebrate kiya hai.room flower candels ballons se decorated hai.

girl kiss boys chest in sleep n boy smile in his sleep. tabhi koi room mai enter hota hai or kuch spray karta hai. wo un couple ko alag karta hai.


next morning 8:00 am


ek lady Jo 60 s mai hogi mandir mai puja kar rahi hai .fir wo uncouple ka room knock karti hi par koi door open nhi karta. WO sochti hai so rahe hai.

after one hr wo fir aati hai. par fir no response. WO ghabra jati hai or apne husband or padosiyon ko bulati hai sab door knock karte hai or fir tod dete hai.

15 march 2016

police headquarter Indore

one man in 60s

man - ek mahina ho gya us hadse ko .aap aj tak ye pata nhi laga paye us rat kya hua. to culprit ko kaise dhudhenge.

dig - dekhiye aap chinta mat kijiye

man - bas apke hi kehne par humne abhi tak media ko koi byan nhi diya. warna aap logo ki ijjat par bat aati. par that's enough ab mujhe is case mai etf chahiye . ab sameer rathod ki team hi ye case solve karegi. warna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga .kuch bhi kijiye par 3 din k andar etf yaha honi chahiye.

dig - par etf aaj India ki best team hai kya wo is case k liye ayegi

Man - jarur ayegi. ap bas unhe case bataiye apko request karne ki jarurat bhi nhi padegi .sameer rathod dauda chala ayega.



that's it


aisa kya hua us rat.WO couple kaun the. or aisa kya hai ki sameer is case k liye dauda chala ayega
janne k liye stay connected n comment karte rahiye

Edited by kashvi19 - 8 years ago

character sketch

Dcp Sameer rathod - 33 year old etf chief .
Quality n nature same as show. Missing his best friend badly n waiting for him. Married to Aisha from two year and had a son of one year name Ruhaan

Aisha Rathod - same as show .but change little as she become wife n mother now. But at duty she is same even better then before. She misses arjun n feel bad to see sam n shree like this.31 year old

Shreekant sen - same as show .become mature from before. He miss his arjun sir his brother badly .he try to become best cop like arjun.29 yrs old

Chandrakant patil - same as show. Miss his arjun sir n bff shree vary much , who is no more his shree. Married to lisa after knowing his 11:30 wali is only his crush n she is his love.31 yrs old

Lisa patil - same as show. Miss arjun n worried for shree as he is not the same who get irritated by her. Married to chotu. They make unique pair as he is simple guy n she is stylish .they are different yet love each other very much.29 yrs old

Sakshi anand kamath - same as show now also trained in maritial art. Miss arjun as friend coz she realise he is her only crush just like hero worship.she is married with her aayi friend's son who is in airforce. 28 yrs old

Arjun S Rawte - same as show .but currently not part of etf. No one know about him from 2 years n missed him so much. He himself encountered sik with his team before disappearing.33 yrs old


Riyanshi kashyap aka riya - she was is will not the part of etf. She is a what you will know as story progressed . 28 yrs old

Additional character

Mr suryakant rawte - Arjun's father 62 yes old

Mrs Archana Rawte - Arjun's mother 60 yes old

Mr Sanjay kashyap - riya's father 61 yr old

Mrs Meenakshi kashyap- riya's mother 54 yr old

Shriya kashyap - riyas younger sis 25 yrs old

Mr divakar jha - Indore dig

Rajeev sinha - sr insp Aig thana Indore

Paras kamath - sakshi's husband .30 yrs old

Ruhan Rathod - 1 yr old son of Samsha

Edited by kashvi19 - 8 years ago

nice prolouge

update soon..
I loved the prologue

part 1 a/c

location Indore

basera

lady - kya hua kuch pata chala. kuch progress hui .

man - sigh nahi abhi kuch nahi pata chala.

lady -mujhe lagta hai sameer ko bula lena chahiye ab wo hi kuch karega.

man - hmm maine dig ko bol diya hai.

lady - aisa humare sath hi q hua pehle ajeet or ab

n she start crying ..

man - chup ho jao. rone se kya hoga.

scene shift

Mumbai Railway Station

whole etf team reaches mum station with their luggage.

sam - aap log seat check kijiye mai abhi kuch call karke aata hu.

all nods n arrange their luggage n sit on seat n start chitchat.

sak - guys aisa kaun sa case hai ki sameer itna serious hai. I mean wo humesha serious hota hai par aaj kuch pareshan bhi hai.

ai - haa aaj pehli bar sameer ne ruhan ko sath lene k liye bola hai.mujhe kuch alag lag raha hai

ch - deva pata nahi kya case hai. sir ne abhi tak disclose bhi nhi kiya hai.

li - haa sir ne kai dino k liye packing karne ko bola hai.Maine suna hai sir ne chief se ye case khud manga hai. shree tumhe kya lagta hai

sh - mujhe lagta hai hume intzar karna chahiye waha pahuch kar sab pata chal jayega. n he get busy in lappy again

all look at him sadly.

tabhi sam aata hai or train start hoti hai.

ai - sam.

sam - team plz mujhse abhi kuch mat puchna . waha ja kar sab pata chal jayega .abhi bas itna bata sakta hu ye humari life ka sabse tough case hone wala hai.

all just nod. he look at shree n sigh.

all are doing chit chat n shree is checking some details n look at rathod who is standing at door of train n starring outside.

cs and part 1 ( a )added next part soon
Edited by kashvi19 - 8 years ago

awesome update. ..
continue soon

who is that couple
shree also knows them
awesome updates
cont soon

wow..lovely update