MaNan FF - Temptation to make you mine #Note on pg 29 - Page 5

hey I m so sorry so srry I m.late... update hi late me read kiya.. srry

haha what an update.. it was ssly bump day for nandu..

n she copoed Manik..like copied his attitude n arrogantness.. like ssly.. nandu bhool gayi ke woh Nandini hai n Manik nahi.. hahaha

so funny.. nandini acted like Manik n her badluck, the other person turned out to be her professor.. holy crap.. hahaha I was ROFL...

n that was Manik na who made her stumble? ssly... Manik ne aisa q kiya? Bad boy...

u know d best part of ur story is nandinis self talk...its damn hilarious.. awesome..
but somewhere down d line she is full of inferiority complex...always underestimating herself...
anyways I love dis messy Nandini

but this messy Nandini reminds me of sm1.. don't kill me but she reminds me of kitten...yaad hai? offcrse tumhe yaad hoga woh tumhari hi to story hai...masterpiece...
srry u know na hangover ...its so bad... it keeps me nostalgic everytime..

oh i jst love this Nandini n her self talk n her bumping rides...

but plz give d long update na...
Kahi aisa na ho jaye ke meri yeh comment latest update se bhi long ban jaye..hahaha bad joke..

ssly I kobe ur even chotu update they r fully stress bursters...

keep updating...

hey I jst forget to say...

CONGRATULATIONS GIRLY FOR SUPER SUCCESS

pointer 8.2 is ssly awesome n managing this wid writing stories..hats off to u ssly

aur parents ko kaun samzaye? they b like..yeh dil manage more ...hahaha n its kahani ghar ghar ki..

but I wish next time u ll get pointer beyond 9...way to go girl..achieve d heights of success...

but but but jst keep ur mobile wallpaper away from u.. its serious kind of distraction ..hahaha

keep studying & keep updatin...

love ur stories...

hey I jst forget to say...

CONGRATULATIONS GIRLY FOR SUPER SUCCESS

pointer 8.2 is ssly awesome n managing this wid writing stories..hats off to u ssly

aur parents ko kaun samzaye? they b like..yeh dil manage more ...hahaha n its kahani ghar ghar ki..

but I wish next time u ll get pointer beyond 9...way to go girl..achieve d heights of success...

but but but jst keep ur mobile wallpaper away from u.. its serious kind of distraction ..hahaha

keep studying & keep updating...

love ur stories...

hey dear.. just now came across ur story...and its so freaking awesome. . loved it...
and falling for bad boy ka fever sach mein nhi utra...hehehe...
luking forward to this story..
update soon... 😊

Interesting story read all the 3 chapters n luved them all

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Haha..! epic first day at college..!
Nandu is so cute to b an angry bird..!
So many fights to happen b/w d babies..!
Wil b waiting..!
N m ok wid chotu chaptrs.. study is more important na..!

YUp fights to happen b/w Manik and Nandani but it will be fun😉
thanks for understanding😊😛

Originally posted by: simkapoor

awsm stry..
lving it...
this wrd also seems small in describing the feeling..
do cntinue soonn..
tc

ty dear 😊

Originally posted by: elsaanna

hey Anna,did you just dedicated your precious update to me?

oh God...😲

thanks a million..girl I'm so touched..honored..seriously..

thanks..

Falling for a bad boy ka hangover kabhi nehi utregi..

iss bar to "temptation to make you mine" ka bukhar chara hain..aab kya karogi?

coming to the updates...yes,you are late,but justified tha..

congratulations for your results dear..brother aur uparse elder ho to aise he hota hain re..jeet na bhi acchi marks lao..phir bhi

"u can do better sis" sunte rahogi..personal experience hain re..

oho,update ke liye likhna tha,..aapbi chapar chapar main bhul gaye..tumhari galti...tumhari wali nandu ki self talk ki effect..!!

nandu and uski hilarious,funny self talk..she's really a nomuna..

first day pe pehle e Hot handsome hunk se takrana..phir professor se..like seriously??

i just loved it..chotu sa thi but this update was so hilarious..tremendous yaar.

phir se Handsome jerk!! Ne panga liya..

pata nehi age kya hogi...egarly waiting for tht..

ek request hain,manogi?can we have manik's POV too?kisi bhi chapter mein de do,chalega..

thanks for this update again..

God bless you...

Yes Girl,,I just dedicate my update to you 😉
About Falling for Bad Boy ,,Yaar uska hangover utarna padhega for which I prescribe read this story😆😆
Ok coming to update glad that you like Nandani self chatting 😃😛
About Result Yup elder sibling is sometime Mean >-<
About Manik POV I'll think about it...
Till Next Update😊

Originally posted by: KYYian

hey I m so sorry so srry I m.late... update hi late me read kiya.. srry

haha what an update.. it was ssly bump day for nandu..

n she copoed Manik..like copied his attitude n arrogantness.. like ssly.. nandu bhool gayi ke woh Nandini hai n Manik nahi.. hahaha

so funny.. nandini acted like Manik n her badluck, the other person turned out to be her professor.. holy crap.. hahaha I was ROFL...

n that was Manik na who made her stumble? ssly... Manik ne aisa q kiya? Bad boy...

u know d best part of ur story is nandinis self talk...its damn hilarious.. awesome..
but somewhere down d line she is full of inferiority complex...always underestimating herself...
anyways I love dis messy Nandini

but this messy Nandini reminds me of sm1.. don't kill me but she reminds me of kitten...yaad hai? offcrse tumhe yaad hoga woh tumhari hi to story hai...masterpiece...
srry u know na hangover ...its so bad... it keeps me nostalgic everytime..

oh i jst love this Nandini n her self talk n her bumping rides...

but plz give d long update na...
Kahi aisa na ho jaye ke meri yeh comment latest update se bhi long ban jaye..hahaha bad joke..

ssly I kobe ur even chotu update they r fully stress bursters...

keep updating...

Haha Glad that you enjoy the update 😛and give such a long comment which I think will be bigger than my next Update >_<
Ok Kidding,,,Seriously I am giving short update till the time being ..So please adjust with it
About Kitten ...Yaar tum Kitten ko Bhulo To me kissi aur se introduce karvau Na is Story ME...
Till Next UPdate Which Will be shorter than your this comment😉