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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update

nandini manik scene was awesomely awesome
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more than 1 month and still no update

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Chapter 12
Dedicated To KYYian
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After running away from Manik, I kept my distance from him.

Whenever he is around me, my heart start beating louder & there is some unknown desire in his eyes, which scare me.

I am chatting with Mukti as we all are eating golgapaa (Indian street food) from stale.

Yummy! The golgappa is the best street food in the world.

I bet that Monster never have the golgappa in his life till now.

Aiyyapa! Why I'm thinking about that Monster, Again.

I look up to find out that, the Monster is coming this way.

And as usual, I run away from there like a jerry run away from Tom.

Mukti called me for my sudden rush but I did not listen to her.

How funny is that, I am jerry and he is big Tom?

At least now, I have friends. Mukti is good if she want to. Just do not go on bad side of her or she goes all ninja on you.

As I am in my dream world thinking about my friendship and all I did not notice, that Manik is standing right in front of me.

He swaps his hand in front of me and I get out of my dreamland.

I look up at his brown caramel eyes as he looks at me with his intense eyes that I melt from inside literally.

He start coming towards me and I start backing up in small space.

I stop as I got block between wall and him.

He blocked me by placing his arm on both side of me on wall.

"Where did you run now Baby Girl?" he asked me in his husky voice

"I...I am not running "I replied while stammering

When he is that close to me and eyed me intensely I cannot think straight let forget answering him back.

"Can you give me an honor and have your first dance with me "He asked me while looking down at me with his smoldering gaze.

I nod my head, as I cannot even form one word without stammering.

It's your chance take her hand to the floor

(fellas just the moment you've been waiting for)

Girl if you see something you like then let 'em know

(ladies i know your ready)

Cuz you only got one chance

(yeah yeah)

For your first dance

(you never forget bout your first dance)

So take advantage of the slow jam

(tell 'em J.B.)yeah, man

He takes one-step back and holds my hand and takes me to the dance floor.

As Justin Bieber - First Dance start playing. Everyone start slow dancing.

"Isn't it ironic that you are going to get your first dance on FIRST DANCE" He asked me smilingly and places his arm on my waist and pulls me closer.

My heart starts beating faster as his touch on my waist start creating havoc inside me.

I look up at him as no word get out of my mouth.

when I close my eyes,

I see me and you at the prom

We've both been waiting so long

For this day to come

Now that its here

Let's make it special

Manik pull me close to him as he sways me to the beat. I was looking down too shy to look in his eyes.

"What's so interesting down there then my face that you're looking down "He asks me in husky voice.

"Nothing "I murmur.

"Look up Baby Girl. I won't eat you ,Right know "He told last part silently but still I hear.

(I can't deny)

There's so many thoughts in my mind

The D.J.'s playing my favorite song

Ain't no chaperones

This could be the night of your dreams

I look up in his eyes shockingly as blood start rushing in my face and soon I am blushing.

"You look like Cherry. Total Red." Manik told me

"And for your info Cherry is my favorite fruit." He told me naughtily.

Only if you give, give the first dance to me

Girl I promise I'll be gentle

I know we gotta do it slowly

If you give, give the first dance to me

I'm gonna' cherish every moment

'Cuz it only happens once, once in a lifetime

He suddenly does the dip dance with me and I shockingly open my eyes looking at him.

He looks down at me and wink.

And suddenly crash. I am on the floor looking up at him.

Aiyyapa! I think I weight too much that's why Manik lost his balance and I fall.

Everyone present in the hall start laughing at me, pointing down at me.

Manik look down at me and told loudly

"Aww Nandani I am sorry that you fall but you weight too much that I lost my balance" He told me with sorry face and then burst into laughter.

Mukti and her group come. Now at least Mukti will help me and save me from such an embarrassing situation.

"Aww Poor Girl thought that I am her friend .How wrong you're .to befriend with Mukti first you have to win her heart and by your so called status. I don't think you have any quality to befriend with me." She told me while smirking as she go and stand beside Manik.

"Nice Job Bro" She hit Manik on shoulder and praises him.

Then everything starts to fall in place. They all are just acting nice with me. All sorry, lending this dress, Manik teasing me and all was just a lie.

A lie which I believe. How stupid of me.

"So tell me Baby Girl do you like your first dance. "He asks me and again everyone burst into laughter.

Before I know, I am rushing from there as tears start falling from my eyes.

They all just use me to entertain themselves.

There is no one in my life who can tell me that everything is going to be alright.

I am all alone in this big city without any friend.

Mamma Papa was right. I should have never come here. I should stay at Mangalore and do my graduation from there.

I should have never run away from Home.

I go and sit on the bench in the park.

They all are making fun of me.

He was making fun of me.

He was faking with me.

All word he says is just the lie.

How fool of me to believe that.

I am no one to him.

And I don't know why but my tear don't stop from falling from my eyes because of his betrayal and before I know I sleep in the park on the bench cursing my fate.

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Ok Guys I'm here with next Update.

I know I'm late like really late.Sorry(Holding my ear )..but its my final year I was really busy with placement burden,project and all.Hope you all understand.

So tell me did you get shock.I mean come on we are talking about Manik .How can he became sweet just like itπŸ˜‰

Ty for all reviews and like.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Peace Out

Ana😊

PS: Kyyian I just update it.and About It's started at Bus...I'll update it so soonish.πŸ˜›

PSS:Just Watch Zootopia.What an awesome Movie.Just in love with Sly Fox and Dumb Bunny😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
What was that...
How could they do that with Nandini...
You turn the tables dear...
Awesome update
Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting to know what will happen next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey
I came across ur story
Today only
N read in one go
Liked it so much
That read ur other works too
πŸ˜†
Falling for the bad boy..
N this one.
Very nice
But manik is mean in this story
πŸ˜•
Poor nandu
I thought he genuinely started liking her
Anyways
Plz pm me if possible
M sending u buddy request
Also update next part soon
N plz update your other story
Sorry I forgot the name
But that's an ff only
With just 2 arts till now...

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Posted: 8 years ago
everything was fake seriously

poor nandini ...

amazing update
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Posted: 8 years ago
I m speechless, shocked and sad too

total game change

he was faking it

betraying it

I was so happy to read their frst dance and imagine it but all of a sudden this big twist..

oh what can.I say

why he did that? mukti is understandable but he?

so sad twist

poor Nandu

and thank u for dedicating d update to me..thank u

and now plz update soon..this mystery will kill me, why he did that?

plz update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mijhe to high volt ka shock lg gya. manik.. arghhh 😑 Innocent poor nandu... 😭 nandu Ko bhii bilkul himmat na harke khada hona chahiye. manik or sbko ek lesson sikhan chahiye. waiting for next update eagerly.
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Posted: 8 years ago
😲 440 volt ka jhatka...
how mean..
waiting for next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
great update
feeling sad for nandu
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