#1 AsYa FF ~ The 1st of April (Chapters 1-13) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

 

monicaaa-oh my darrlingg!❤️

I know someone too calls u with the same name tell him not to! 😡 this is MY NAME for YA 😉 I have exclusive copyrights on it. 😳

Hahah ab mere bol ne se woh thodi roke ga 😆

Ohh soo sweet of yaaa! 🤗 I guess yes! I am yet to read some of stories here but I can assure it is totally out of the box. Pure Hindi Movie Masala it is 😆 Let's see how it shapes up. 😳 

I'm so excited!! This forum was so dead lately it's nice to see old writers come back. Especially the ones with the most interesting stories 😳

I have realized I have OCD when it comes to description. 😕 😆 

Hahah don't worry I'm the same 🤣

Thank U sweety-pie. Love ya loads! 

Love you moreee 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Interesting.
Azam is so cute.
Love to read more.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Looking forward to read 
Plz not too much Hindi plz 
Love azam he is too much
So he brought happiness into Asad life 
waiitng for more 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Whhuuuhhhooo...You posted...!!! 
AND NAAM KAHAN HAI? The title of the story is missing? Still a mystery? 😲

I can't wait for this story to start, I have been craving for AsYa ffs for so long, not finding any new one since such a long time...But now I have this one and I can't wait for more, to read and to discover more of Asad AHMED Khan...

An amazing, amazing start and the best part of this one is that the writer is brilliant as the concept is...So, huge expectation from you, kiddo...Feel so proud, the growth I see in you as a writer and as a person makes me feel so proud of you...I wish you all the best for the beautiful journey you are going to have while you write this story...More power to you...🤗

About proofreading, thank you for the mention, and you know that you are always welcome...Saying that, that whole process is nothing more than reading the chapters in advance...Woh bhi bulkil muft, muft, muft...😉

So, while I do feel so honored that I am going to be the first reader who is going to read the chapter before anyone of you...Feel free to think the writer as the one who is at blame for all the amazingness you are going to find in it...
Edited by A.Hajnal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
See, again, the page number 7...I am always at the page number 7 on your post/topics...😲

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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Nice prologue dear
Asad azam scene was beautiful.
Their talks was good.
Waiting for story to start
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
I wonder what Azar's role is in the story?
Like his purpose

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

thanks yaar aju. 😳 bus Almighty ki kripa hai baki sab chal raha hai. 😳 thank you for the kind words. I will update only once a week until mid of may 😆

welcome shelcome!🤗😳 LOVE U❤️
😲😆 UPDATE MAY MAIN ?🤣 
yehi umeed h k may main toh ahija😉😆
Khair Almighty k kripa bani rhe aur aapki
jabardast entry hoti rhe!😆aur haan apke
dimag k daat deni hogi😳 metro m crowd 
m bhi assa dhamaka! hayye!😉 asli KSG k
fan h yaar!😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Wow...Loved it...Cant wait to read more...CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


Thank you Arpita! 
Even I loved the convo between the two. 
Azam is V's (TheNamesV) creation. I'll try my very best to do justice 😳
How i wish it is so. But work may turn up. No surity.  I feel like a donkey at field literally every single hour. 🤢 
Thanks once again 🤗


Please do continue to pm me..
Will wait for an amazing story..