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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Guys I know my wish is finally fulfilled today...now I am in the first position in the hall of fame list with 35 votes...love you all...aww...my wish is fulfilled...I feel like standing in the heaven...lets celebrate this with a chapter...

Happy reading...

CHAPTER 18

All villagers with nandini as the culprit are standing infront of her family...all her family members are shocked to learn the truth as they knew nandini cannot harm a animal in her dreams also...killing is far away...

But nandini's eyes were facing down proving her the culprit...

N papa: nandu...aa shu che...yeh sab kya keh rahe hai...bol de...bol de insabko ki tu kisi ko mar nahi sakti

Nandini:maine hi mara hai uss gaaye ko...

N papa: main nahi manta...

Nandini: yakin kijiye ...maine hi mara hai...

N papa: accha yeh baat hai...toh kha apni maa ki kasam...aur bata sacch...

Nandini looks at her mother...she slowly moves her hand ina journey to her mother's head...while moving her hand she reminisces the promises given to manik post their marriage...and it clearly says that: manik...mein apki har galti mein adhi hissedar hungi...aur apki khusi mein ...mein apna hissa kabhi nahi mangungi( nandini's dialogue)

Hands are moving...Nandini is going to do the biggest mistake in her life...

As the hand is moving we see another hand holds nandini's hand stopping her to take a false promise of her mother...this hand stopped nandini to do her biggest mistake...the hand belongs to non other than manik...yes manik is back...to protect nandu...

Manik: mein kisi maa ko ab kuch hone nahi de sakta...aur na hi kisiko maa ki ghuti kasam khane de sakta huin...

Nandini is shocked to see manik back.

And also the villagers ..as no body knew the truth...manik gazed at nandini...but nandini couldn't face manik...

Manik: yeh galti meine ki hai...uss gaaye ko mere hi gadi se takkar lagi thi...

Villagers: yeh ladka iss ladki ko bacchane ki kosis kar raha hai...

Manik: koii kisi ko nahi baccha raha...

Meri gadi bahar khadi hai...I can check abhi bhi uspe khun laga hai...

Nandini know looks at manik...

Nandini provo: ap mano yah na mano...mujhe bachane ke liye ap hamesha aaoge...

N papa provo: ab yeh pakka hai ki manik hi woh ladka hai jo meri nandu ko har kadam pe sambhalega...

(Grins a smile on his face)

Manik: kya...kya kar rahi thi tum...

Iss brain mein kuch hai yah puri ki puri khali hai...apni maa ki ghuthi kasam khane ja rahi thi...kiske liye...ek aise insaan ke liye,jo tumhe uss situation mein akela chod ke bhag gaya...

Nandini: ap ho na mujhe galti karne se rokne wale

And now nandu was giggling...

Manik: nandini...can u please stop it...aise situation mein bhi majak...pagal ladki...

Villagers return after checking the car..

Villagers: ji...isski gadi se takkar lagi thi...ab hum isse accga sabak sikhayenge...

Nandini looked at manik in fear and same does manik...

What!!!!!! Manik to beacame a halwayi...manik halwa wala...

Very funny...

Lets see..kya karta hai manik...kuinki usse toh kuch nahi ata...aur nandini uski help kaise karti hai...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 7 years ago

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Jackvijay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

good update manik to come in he told this is my mistake to say the way super

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Interesting update reading it after a long time continue soon will be waiting

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

CHAPTER 19

Villagers: to batayeye...kya saza di jaye iss ladki ko...

Nandini drags herself to her father...holding him she whispers something in his ear...

Nandini: ap kya chup chap khade hain...

N papa: par mein kya karun...

Nandini: arre...papa..manik hamara mehman hai...usse hum badi muskil saza kaise de sakte hai????

N papa: beta baat toh teri sahi hai...

Nandini: arre apki beti ki har baat sahi hoti hai...ab meine apko jo bola woh ap in logo ko batao...

N papa: accha suno...manne su lahe che ..manik hamara mehman he...usse thoda asan saza dena...

Manik gazed at nandini...

Nandini: kaisi lagi meri setting...

Manik: setting ki toh acchi tarah karti...asi karti ki koi saza nahi milta..duffer

Nandini makes a W*F wala face...

Nandini: oh hello...galti karne se pehle soch tha...

Villagers: bas isse iss gaaye ki malik ko uski gayye ki kimat deni hogi...

Manik is now overwhelmed...

Manik: itni si baat...yeh lo meri credit card...jitna chahiye le lo...

Manik lools at nandini...

Manik: dekha dekha...

Villagers: ek minute beta...yeh paisa tumhe khud kama ke deni hai...

Manik(smiling): matlab...

Villagers: matlab...hum tumhe ek halwai ki dukan denge aur tumhe mithaii bana kar ,bech kar ,paise kana ke deni hai...

Manik: what...

The face which was know enjoying laughter changed into horrifying grin... Kuch bhi...ab manik ko halwa wala banna padega...bana manik...mithai bana...

Now Nandini brust with laughter same as a balloon brust when we give it a pinch...

Nandini: hehehe...dekh dekha...

Manik: hehehe...Very funny...

N papa: ae nandu...tu kya itni uchal rahi hai...teri bhi galti hai...tu bhi iski madad karegi...

Villagers: khali madad...banani toh issi ladke ko padegi...

Nandini and manik: kaha phas gaye...

Scene change

Manik and nandini reached the shop where they have to work...

It was filled with dust...as if not sweeped from centuries...

Nandini: hmm...pehle hume isse saf karna hoga...

Manik:hmm...arre tum dekh kya rahi ho ...cholo suru ho gayo...cholo cholo...

Nandini: matlab...tum bhi karo...

Manik: chi chi...mujhse yeh sab nahi hoga...tum hi karo...

Nandini: kaha gaye yeh gayon wale...

Manik: ku...kuin...bula rahi ho unko...

Nandini: mujhe unhe batana hai ki tum koi kam nahi kar rahe ho...

Manik: karta huin meri maa...

Nandini giggles...

Manik brings back a broom and a bucket and starts sweeping...it was like ...what to say...manik doesn't know how to sweep also...

Nandini: oh hello...yeh kya kar rahe ho...

Manik: dekh nahi rahi ho kya...sweep kar raha huin...

Nandini: tame nathi...Tame taddana nakama che...( ur totally useless)

Manik: tum kya bolti rahti ho...kuch samjh nahi ata...

Nandini: kuin samajh na hai tumhe...koi zarurat nahi hai tumhe janne ki...

Do mujhe...mein dikhati huin kaisa karni hai...

Nandini puts her plams on manik palms giving a sweet sense of a perfect touch...manik eyes got locked with nandini's eyes...and they didn't bother to break the lock...

Manan tuning flows in the background...

Liked the chapter...

Likes and comments...

Aur han nnext chapter type kar diya ha...jab ap log bologe tab update kar dungi...ap logo ki wish pe

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 7 years ago

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Jackvijay

@Jackvijay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

superb update

awsum manan punishment super want some more romance in two of them

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

CHAPTER 20

Hey lovies...what's up...accha mein apsab ko suggest karna chahati huin ki yeh chapter padhne se pehle ap upar diye hue link mein song sune...

I think without listening the song u can't have the perfect glimpse of the scene which I want to bring to you...please please please ...it's a humble request...please listen the song while you read the chapter...aur batana chapter aur songs dono kaise lage...

Waiting for ur comments...

Scene starts with nandini roming outside the manik's shop and manik busy pouring sheera(thick liquid usually used in preparation of sweets)

While manik face is full of different type of confusion...

On the gas...oil is kept to boil in a kadai(is a type of thick, circular, and deep cooking-pot )

Manik provo: issko kisme dalna hei...(lookinh at the sheera)

Lagta hai isse oil mein dalna hai...bah manik very good...tujhe toh cooking aa gaya...

Nandini turns to see manik trying to pour the sheera in to the hot oil...

W*F...

Nandini: manik...(shouts and runs to him)

Manik stops and gives a stiff glance to nandini...

Nandini: yeh kya kar rahe ho...

Manik again looks at nandu...confused...

Manik: ab samjha...tum jealous ho rahi ho...kuinki mujhe khana banana,aa gaya issiliye...

Manik shows his all 32 teeths out his mouth...

Nandini: oh hello...gadha malhotra...yeh sheera ko teel mein nahi dalte...

Itna bhi nahi pata ...aye khana banane...

Manik looks qt sheera and teel...pushing all the saliva present in his mouth to his stomach...

Manik: haa ...haan ...toh mein isme nahi dal raha tha...

Nandini: tum chodo...mujhe karne do...

Manik: nahi mein kar kaha huin na...

Nandini: do...do...mujhe...

Manik: nahi mein...mein...mein karunga...

Now both the idiots are standing near the hot oil and fighting who will work...and while this fight continues...manik unintentionally gave a hollow strike to the kadai and few droplets of hot oil got in touch with nandini's hand causing a small burn...and nandini suffered from a pain...

Nandini: aaaggghhh...

Manik looks concerned for nandini...he comes closer to Nandini...snatching her hands from her...

Tera ishq hai meri ibadat

Didaar hai dil ki rahaat

Manik slowly blows some air on the burns...his eyes were closed as he can't see those burns on nandini's plams...

Tere sajde mein sir jhukau(X2)

Mujhe dede itni ijazat

Manik: kaisa lag raha hai...jyada pain toh nahi ho raha hai na...kaho toh first aid lekar auin...

While nandini was busy in feeling deep pain...

Tu hi mere khuda

Tu hi meri dua...(X4)

Manik looks at nandini...who is forcefully closing her eyes in her fear for pain...

Wo mayasar jo khwab hai

Tune mujko diye

Manik goes and brings the first aid box ...he opens it...after putting some antiseptic in the cotton he slowly gives a touch of the cotton on the burns...

Intja dadkno ki hai

Hum juda na jiye(x2)

Nandini drags her hand out of pain...

Nandini: nahi...bohut jal raha hai...

Manik: chup chap haat dikhayo...

Again bringing her hands back...

Nandini again closes her eyes forcefully...

Kud mein tujhe mein chupalu

Bas aakhri meri chahat(X2)

Tere sajde mein sar jhukau(X2)

Mujhe dede itni ijazat

Tu hi mere khuda

Tu hi meri dua...(X4)

Manik looks at nandini's face full of childish love affection and fear...a strong connection drags manik continuously towards nandini as he can't take his eyes off from her...also he can't even dare to see nandini in pain...manik turns his eyes back...

Rooh ki ik rubai toh

Raat din mein padu(2)

Bin teri na sukoon mile

Tu Bata kya karu(x2)

Tujhje Rahnuma mein banalu

Itni ho mujpe inayat(x2)

Tere sajde mein sar jhukau(X2)

Mujhe dede itni ijazat

Manik: kuch nahi hoga...aaram se...

Nandini opens her eyes bearing strength to look back at manik...as she opens her manik...she got a glimpse of that manik which she always wanted in her life...that love affection and care from him...is it a truth or just a dream...

Tu hi mere khuda

Tu hi meri dua...(X4)

Manik now looks up to eyes of Nandini with a perfect eye lock...

After a few minutes...eyelock breaks...

Nandini: cholo...hum mil ke yeh khatam karte hain...kuch hi der nein bazar phir swle khoulega...

Nandini started making jalebi as manik also helped her...

Manik: nandini...hume yeh kam kab tak karna padega...

Nandini: pata nahi...jab tak ek nai gaaye(cow) kharidne ki paise na ayye tab tak karna padega...

Manik: ek gaaye ki kitne paise hote hain...do hazar rupee...

Manik: do hazar??

Nandini: buddhu...two thousand ...

Manik: oh...

After one hour...the market again opened...some people came to the shop for buying sweets...but these was not sufficient...manik and nandini looked little bit tensed...

Nandini provo: ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga...

Nandini walks out of the shop...she walks to a distance where many ladies were standing for buying sweets for a devotional offering to the god...while nandini reached there...

Nandini:ap logo ko taklif he...kuch madad karun?

Ladies(one of them): beti hum yahan ek achi mittai ki dukan dhundh rahe hai...sabko mithai leni hai...

A plan stroke nandini's manik...her eyes glitters up...

Nandini: itni si baat...woh dekho...woh jo dukan hai na...(nandini waving her hands towards manik's shop) woh...kya mittai banata hai...kehte hain uski mittai dene se bhagwan khush hoke ashirwad dete hain...

Ladies: toh beta hum wahi se le lete hain...

Nandini: yes...

Ladies makes a move to manik's shop , buying all his sweets...

Manik is happy and is counting money...

Nandini is back at the shop...

Manik: tum na kahin chali jao...tumhare jane par hi sari mitthai bik gayi...lagta hein tum thodi unlucky ho...kya kare sab meri tarah lucky nahi hote...

Nandini provo: man toh kar raha hai ki bhangi nako todi nako bhukko kari nako ...pata nahi apne ap ko samajh ta kya hai...bander kahi ka...

Manik: kuch bola...

Nandini: nai..nahi...

Manik: aja ka one thousand rupees...yeh...manik rocks...

Nandini: achha hai...lagta hai aur ek din me ho jayega...hmm...cholo ghar nahi jana kya...bazar nand ho rahi hai...

Manik: kal mein isse sath le kar hi nahi aunga...

End of chapter...

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