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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 14
Nandini provs: (giving a big tension bala expression,) pata nahi monkey manik ke dimag mein kya chaal raha hai...and she looked at manik and he was giving a weird smile...and nandu for more tensed...
Mata rani bacha lo ...mein nariyal chadhaungi...then suddenly biting her tongue ...kya kar rahi hai nandini mata ko riswat they rahi hai ...(again nandini) are riswat thodi na mein to bas unke puja karne ke bare me bol rahi thi...
Suddenly the scilence broke...
N papa: chal manik beta bol...kya karegi nandu...
Manik: chachaji yeh aja kuch nahi karegi...
A flow of happiness was seen on nandini's face...
Manik: yeh mera pending raha...jab sahi waqt ayega tabhi maang lunga...
Nandini(proves) are mata rani apne itni jaldi meri baar sun li...
All members started lefting to their rooms...
Manik comes near nandini and speaks in her ears: itne kuch mat ho...jab mein manguga toh aise chig manguga ki tum de nahi payogi...manik works from there
And again nandini got tensed...
Nandini:gaya toh gaya ...ulta dara ke chala gaya...(in a very funny way,) jo manguga mujhe de nahi payogi...asa kuch mange tab dekhega...bhangi naku todi naku bhuku kari naku...
Hmmhh...
Nandini also worked to her room...
Scene 2
Location : nandini's bedroom
Nandini has still not slept...
Nandini proves: kya hai iss monkey manik ko...hamesha mujhe dara deta hai( getting up and sitting on the bed) daar ke mare nind nahi aa rahi hai...(stopping for a while ) aisa kya mangega...( acts like thinking) and suddenly...nandu itna mat soch...tera chota sa pyaara sa dinaj au tension nahi le sakta...kahi tension ke maare wrinkles aa gaye toh...yah phir ek pimple...nahi nahi nahi nahi...chala nandini pani pe le aur so ja...
Nandini search for water bit but saw the jug was empty...she hold the jug and came out of the room...
Location: corridor...
Nandini is holding the jug...and is thinking about manik and is also little bit scared when suddenly there was a power cut...
Nandini souted : auch...
Then she realised it was a power cut...
Nandini:hey bhagwan ab toh mein power cut se bhi darne lagi huin...pata nahi nandini aur kya kya delhana baki hai...
Nandini fills the jug using a torch and was wolalking to her room when she saw manik sleeping quitely...she srands at the door and admires her...and suddenly manik is distracted from the sleep as he was felling hot due to power cut...nandini came inside...and started searching for something...after something she took out a hand fan...and taking it she comes to manik and started blowing air to him with the fan...
But after sometime nandini yarns and sleeps there leaning on the table...and slept...manik got up after sometime due to hot and he sees nandini sleeping there...
(Background music)

O karam khudaya hai(looking and smiling on her)
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh(all the hairs are scattered on her face due to the slow blow of air on her face)
Mujhe jeena aaya hai(going nearer to nandini)

O tere sang yaara(touching her cheeks and siding all the hairs from her cute little face)
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main(manik sees nandini's sleep is getting disrupted due to the light coming from the Window...)
Teri khushbu se takraun main(manik walks ro the window looking at nandini and slowly closed it...)
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe(manik is coming towards nandini)
Woh khwab tu..


Tera mera milna dastoor hai( he gets sitted infront of nandini chairs and stared admiring her)
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai( with a big smile)
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan(remembering there choti moti nok jhok and again smiling)
Mehtaab tu..

O karam khudaya hai(manik feels asleep)
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai( manik leans towards nandini)
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yara(manik puts his head on nandini's lab )
Khush rang bahara(both of them were sleeping quitely and seen was as beautiful as angles are sitting together)
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganvara(camera moving around)

And its morning now...

Author: are dekho in besarmon ko ...suraj sar pe hai aur yeh dono so rahe hai...utho manik nandini...

Nandini gets up with a jerk and to her surprise she saw manik on her lap...she got up ...manik also got up...

Nandini: yeh ...yeh kya kar rahe the tum...

Manik: actually I should ask u this...kal raat yaha kya kar rahi thi...kya hoga hai aga kaal ke ladikiyon ko...akla ladka dikha nahi ki try marna suru ho gata hai inka..

Nandini:chup raho ...aisa kuch nahi hai...au mein tumhe answer kuin duin...monkey manik...

Manik heared ...this...

Nandini ran away...

Manik(souted) kya boli...

Manik(fumbling)monkey...am I a monkey...makina a weird face and maving out..

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hlw everyone...here is ur update...agar acha lage toh comment jarur karna...happy reading
CHAPTER- 15
Manik comes out of the room all dressed...
Nandini brought tea and snacks for all...
Manik: uncle aj ka kya plan hai...
N papa: beta aj usse kuch hai nahi...par...nandini tumhe hamare hamare yeh sunder village dikhayegi...
Manik: fantastic ...mein bhi dekh lunga ki kya tha aur abhi kya badla hai...
Nandini: par ... Ghar mein hazar kaam pade hai..
N papa: are aha kam tumhari maa sambhal legi...ab jayegi...
Nandini: han
N papa: saras che...
Manik: cholo nandu...
Nandini: abhi
N papa: han han jayo...
Nandini and manik both left for a village darshan...
They reached a temple...
Nandini: yeh mandir yaad hai...yahan hum bachpan mein bahut ate the aur...
Manik completes nandini's statement: aur yahan hum morr(pecock) ke saath bhi khelte the...
Nandini(giving a smile): tumhe yaad hai...
Manik: einstine mein bhi tumhare satth hi ata tha...
Nandini: han par mujhe laga itna bhulakaad ho toh bhul gaye hoge...
Manik: what...
Nandini: kuch nahi bidesi...chalo...
They both fed some pecocks there...
After that our toli reached the big banyon tree ...
Nandini: yahan...hum kya karte the...batao batao...
Manik: yahan hum pitto khelte the...
After that some small kids came and ...
Kid: didi aur bhaiya...apko pitto khelna ata hai...
Nandu and manik: han...
Kid: hamare group mein ek jan kam hai ap dono khelenge...
Manik looks at nandini and nandini looks at manik...both of them have a big smile and said ..kuin nahi. ..chalo ...
Game started...(manik and nandu in opposite teams)
Manik hold the ball and after concentration manik threw the ball but it doesn't hit the rack of stone...
And this time nandini does and she also failed ...
Manik also failed the third time...
But nandini successfully broke it in the fourth time...
After that every body started running and manik's team held the ball and were bashing it upon nandini's team while nandini's team were busy in arranging those stone...at last a last stone was left nandini was going to put in and manik was holding the ball...
Nandini looked at manik...manik have a cute smile and nandini put the stone but manik does not threw the ball...
Nandini team won and the kids were happy...
Nandini came to manik and asked...
Nandini: tumne ball kuin nahi phenka...
Manik looks at nandini : aise hi...
And after that they reached in a bank of river ...
And manik was literally shocked and was standing like a stone there...nandini so yeh hamare village ki sabse badi nadi...
Tears rolled down from manik's eyes...and he ran from there...
Nandini: arre ab isse kya hua...
Nandini also came back to house n...every body were standing tensed...
Nandini: kya hua sab itna chup chap kuin khade hai...
N papa: nandu manik ko kya hua woh itna roo kuin raha tha...
Nandini: manik ghara aa gaya...pata nahi...
N mama: kahan le gayi thi tu usse...
Nandini: kuch der pehele toh thik tha par jab meine usse hamare
Village ki sabse badi naadi(river) dhikhane le gayi ..nwahi...
All r socked and are stunned...
Nandini: kya hua...
N papa: tharo dimag khrap ho gayo hai kya nandu...
N papa and manik papa ran to manik's room...
Nandini: maa kya hua...
N maa: beta wahi nadi mein duub kar manik ke asli maa ne atmahatya kiya tha...(suiside)...
Nandini was stunned and shocked...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update dear
plzzz give the index of u r chapters
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NEW PROMO...
NANDINI IS STANDING IN DULHAN ATTIRE HOLDING SINDUR IN HER HAND...
GHARAWALE KHUSH...SASURAL WALE KUSH ...PAR KYA YEH RISTA DE PAYEGA HUM DONO KO BHI APNI APNI KHUSHI...
MANIK COMES IN A DHULHA ATTIRE ...HIS EYES WERE RED ...HE WAS LOOKING VERY ANGRY...
HE TAKES THE SINDOOR FROM NANDINI HAND AND THROWS IT...THE SINDOOR SPLITS...
MANIK: YEH SAADHI MERI MARZI NAHI...ISS RISTE MEIN MUKHE SHRIF DHUKH MILEGA...MEIN KABHI TUMSE PYAAR NAHI KAR SAKTA...YEH RISTA SHRIF EK NAAM KA RISTA HAI JISE MEIN KISI BHI KIMAT PE TOD DUNGA...MANIK WORKS OUT...
NANDINI SITS DOWN...
PAR MEIN YEH RISTA KISI BHI KIMAT PE TUTNE NAHI DUNGI...SHE TOOK A BIT OF SINDOOR AND PUT IT ON HER FOREHEAD...

JALD HONE JA RAHI HAI MANIK OR NANDINI KI SADDI PAE KYA YEH SAADI AUR YEH RISTA HAI EK NAYA SAVERA NANDINI KI JIWAN MEIN ...KYA MANIK KABHI BHI ESS RISTE KO SAMAJH PAYEGA...KYA NANDINI APNE PATI KO APNA BANA PAYEGI...JANENE KE LIYE SEE THE UPDATES...
NEW PROMO PIC

MANAN FF TUMHARI NANDINI- MARRIAGE SPECIAL

TAKE THEM AS MANIK NANDINI
Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am begging sorry to all my readers for so much late but I was really busy in my os and ts...but now I m back with new chappy...enjoy reading...achi lage toh comment karna...
CHAPTER -16
Nandini: kya...mujhe sacch mein yeh nahi pata tha...
N maa: ab jao usse samjhao...
Nandini with a tensed face walks towards manik's room...
Still the door eas locked and all were outside and manik was inside...
Nandini: ab sab jayiye mein manik ko samjhati huin...
Everyone walks out from there...
Nandini knocking the door: manik ...mein huin nandini...kholo...please...
Apne dost ko bahar khada karoge...
Manik slowly opens the door...with red eyes...tears making there ways...
Nandini got to go inside...
Nandini: I am sorry manik ...mere bajah se tumne...
Nandini was to continue when manik started crying and hugged her tightly...nandini slowly put her hand on manik...
Suddenly manik remembers something...his eyes became more dark...and he pused nandini away from him...nandini collide on the wall with a sudden jerk...her head got smashed on the walll...
Nandini:aaa...
She cries amd looks at manik...
Manik comes to her and put the hands on the wall in the side of nandini...
Nandini was scared and shocked too...
Manik: tumhari himaat kaise hui mujhe waha le ke jane ke liye...jab se mein aya huin tab se tum toh mere pichhe pad gaye ho...tum kuin nahi samajhti ki mein tumse pyaar nahi karta...nahi karta tumse pyaar...
Agli baar agar mere paas ayi toh accha nahi hoga...
Manik works out of the room...
Nandini moves her hand on her head where it was injured...she sits on her knees in one corner and cries her heart out...
Manik was standing and the flashback was going on her mind...how her mother was going slowly in to the river...how he was running to save his mother...and how her mother told 'ja manu chala ja yahan se...yeh jagah achi nahi hai'...
And at that time soha comes there
Soha: baby ...what happened...why r u so tensed...
Manik: kuch nahi...
Soha: comeon ...u can share it with me...
Manik remember nandini coming to him and he pused her...
Manik: bola na kuch nahi...manik walks from there...
Soha remained standing there...manik mom came...
M mom: soha...
Soha: yes aunty...
M mom: jao manik ke paas uske pas raho...usse samjhao...
Soha: rehene digiye na aunty...woh abhi aisa hai...kuch der mein thik ho jayega...waise bhi mujhe abhi parlour jana hai...I know maine mere beauty expert ko bulaya hai...
M mom: ek baat yaad rakho soha...agar iss ghara ki babu banana chahti ho...agar iss ghara mein paisa ...position cahati ho to tumhe hi manik ke saath rehena hoga...ab jao...
Manik's mom forcibly made soha to go...
On the way to manik...
Soha proves: are soha tu kya sacch mein manik ke pas ja rahi hai...tera dimag toh thik hai...are manik toh aise kuch der ke baad samajh jayega...lekin mere make-up agar aj nahi hua toh to mera skin kharap ho jayegi...
Thik sochi ho soha...chal...
Soha walks out from there...
Nandini comes into kitchen...
Nandini: ap sab log jayo..aj mein manik ke favourite kuch banaungi mere hathon se...
Nandini starts the work...she brings kadai...puts oil then masalas...etc etc and prepare something exciting for manik...
All at dinning table...
N papa: arre aja khana milega ki nahi...
Nandini and nandini's mom brought the food...net Manik also comes over there and sits for food...
All were served food in there respective plates...
Manik hold the spoon when everybody has started eating...
Manik brings the dood in his spoon...
N papa: are bah bahut accha hai...par yeh banaya kisne hai...
Manik was going to eat...
N mama: nandini ne...
Manik stopped ...his hands literally freezed near his mouth...he puts the spoon down...
Manik: mujhe yeh sab achha nahi lagta...ab chigne badal gayi hai...(looking at nandini) mein ab pehele jaisa nahi raha...I will order a pizza for me...
Manik gets up and leaves...

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CHAPTER 17
Coming back to his room Manik immediately picked up his phone qnd dialled a number...and the ring goes on...
Manik: hello ..cabir...
Cabir: han bhai bol...
Manik: dekh bhai aja ke aja jo ticket mile usse book karde...mujhe ghar jana hai...
Cabir: but bhai hua kya...
Manik: mujhe yaha nahi rehna...ghutan hoti hai...
Cabir: ok...bhai..chill ...abhi book karta huin...see maine abhi check kiya hai...afternoon ko hai apka flight.
So reach there at time...n
Manik: finally...ok..chal byee...
Manik puts down his phone and walks ouside...without noticing that nandini was hearing his conversation hiding behind the door...
Tears crowded nandini's eyes...for whom she was living her life and with whom she has dreamt to live her remaining life that man is now frustrated with her...he wants to leave her and go...nandini sat down beside that door...the knees touching her chest...she cried down...without uttering a word...her pain flourished from her face but she decided to saty quite...
After sometime manik has his bags packed and is all set to leave...everyone has gathered in the backyard to say him a final good bye..
N mama: beta achanak aisa kya hua ki apne jane ka faisla kiya...
N papa:han beta...rukh jao na...
Manik: nahi uncle...mujhe bas ghar ki yaad aa rahi thi...isiliye jaa raha huin
Everyone is present there except nandini...nandini is seen moving to the kitchen with her hand full of plates...
N papa: nandini...aa shu che...aayihan abo...ke pan tu bhi...arre manik ko samjho nathi...
Nandini: mein kya samjhaungi ... Inko jana hein toh chale jaye...
Manik paid a look at nandini favmce with a little shock...
Nandini: ab unhone jana ka phesla kar liya he toh hume inhe rokna nahi chahiye...
Nandini walks inside the kitchen...
Manik: accha uncle ..mein chalta huin..
Manik walks to his car...and leaves ...
Nandini was looking at him from the window...
Nandini: jaiye manik...humne aj apko iss naam ke riste se azad kar diya...ab mein apki life mein kabhi interfere nahi karungi...
Manik drive his car inside the village but he had no idea about the way to
Go out of the village...he parked his car and looked for someone to help him...
Manik: hello aunty...
A lady was walking down the river to bring water when she was called up by manik...manik ran to her...
Manik: woh aunty...
Before manik could complete...
Lady: arre...aunty naahi...bhaujai ...
Manik: bhaji...what...
Lady: chi chi...bhaujai ..matbal bhabi.
Manik: accha mujhe batayeye yeh main road kaha hai...
Lady: accha tanik yeh batao yeh main road kaa hai bachuaa...
Manik: hen...
Manik provo: kitna ajib language hai yahan ka...ab yeh thehere typical villagers...ab inhe kaise samjhun main road kya hai...
Manik: main road matbal...I mean matlab...woh badi road hoti hai na jisme truck , bus jati hai...woh hai...
Manik gazed at the lady...
Manik provo: lagta hai samajh gai...
Lady: naahi bachua...humko nahi pata..
Manik: oh god...
Manik back to his car...he drove the car but his eyes were in a continuous motion for searching main road...
And suddenly...
Thuddd!!!!!!!
Manik stops his car...he felt the he has hurt somebody...he comes out of his car and saw a cow hurt by his car...and was in a verge to die...
Manik: kya karun...maine kaise yeh kar diya...
Nandini came there...as if a goddess...
Nandini: manik tum yahan se jao...main road uss taraf hai...jaldi jao...
Manik again sat on his car and drove back...
Nandini sitting there alone with the dead cow...
The villagers gathered there and ...
Man1: hey bhagwan...iss ladki ne toh gaaye(cow) ko mar dala...
Lady: ghor paap...
Man2: cholo isko le ke gate hai hevali...phir iske barabar sazza denge...
Howling sounds comes from the crowd...han han le cholo...
Nandini had no fear on her face because she knew that she is protecting her love...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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hope she will be able to save herself
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It was awesome.Thank you for the pm
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Awesome story .
Continue soon .
Take care .
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nice update continue soon next part
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