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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

guys i am really sorry for the late update but i was really confused ki ap sabko kya patakhedar update doin.isiliye laate ho gaya...chalo ab maff bhi kar do aur enjoy the chappy...aur like aur comments toh bannta hai bosss...

CHAPTER 11

Nandini comes down...manik also reaches the place and get sitted beside soha ...

Nandini:ji boliye...

N papa:are beta yaad he naa karwachauth aa raha hai...

nandini looking and manik...manik busy with soha...

Nandini:han yaad hai...

Nandini papa:toh iss bar har saal ki tarah iss sall bhi tum sara itazam karogi...

Nandini:thik hai ...

when nandini was to leave...nandini mom stopped her...

Nmaa: beta tu braat rakhegi na iss bar...

manik papa: are nandini brat rakhti hai...

nandini little bit sad...

M papa: par yeh brat toh saddi sudha ladkiyan hi rakhti hai na...

nandini feeling very sad and leaving the place immidiately...

N papa: sun yaar mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

Manik papa: haan bol na yaar

N P:yaha nahi bahar chal...

both of them walked on to the garden...

MP: ab bol...

NP:yaar tujhe toh yaad hoga ki humne bachpan mein manu beta aur hamari nandu ki saddi karwa diya tha

MP:han yaad hai yaar

NP:nandu ne uss batt ko sach man liya hai aur man hi man usne manik apna pati maan liya hai...isiliye woh hamesha uske liye karwachauth ka brat rakhti hai...

MP: mujhe bhi nandu bahut pasad hai... par manik uss saddi ko saach nahi manta...

NP:pata nahi inki kismat mein kyaa likha hai...

plot is changed

it is now nandini room...nandini is thinking and tears are rolling down her eyes...suddenly soha enters

soha: hello bebs...maine abhi uncle ko tumhare childhood ke bare mein baat karta suna hai...

nandini angrily looking at sooha...

soha:u know baby manik tum jaise behengi aur aise dress up karne wali ladkiyon mein koi interest nahi dikhata so forget about him...woh shrif mera hai...i challenge u...manik ko mujhse alag kar dekhau...

hmmm...forget...

telling this soha got up and wasgoing to leave when...

nandini:janti ho jodi uparwala banata hai ...aur usne meri aur manik ki jodi bana li hai...us jodi ko koi nahi tod sakta tum bhi nahi...aur kya mein behengi ...dekhna woh pyaar aur saadhi shrif iss behengi se karega...aur mein tumhari challenge acceppt karti hun...mein bhi manik ki dil mein mere liye apni jagah bana dungi...tum toh apni socho...

suddenly a big challengetic backgroud tone is played...

soha is embaressed and little scared by seeing nandini's confidence...

and she leaves...coming to soha room...

soha :us ladki ki itni himat ki woh mri manik ko mujhse dur karegi...usse pehele hi mein manik ko usse dur kar dungi...woh sayad mujhe nahi janti mein manik ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti huin...

coming soon: karwachauth special...manik first step towards nandini love

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

CHAPTER 12
So it is the morning and of course karwachawth...
Nandini is busy in doing works...
N mama: nandu ...dekh beta manik utha ki nahi...
Nandini: han maa...ja rahi huin...
Nandini walks to manik's room...when she opened the door manik was still in a deep sleep...
Nandini comes to manik...
Nandini: manik...manik...utho gadhe...
Manik utho...dekho suraj saar pe chad gaya hai...lekin bhaisahab so rahe hai...manik utho...
Manik: ma ...band karo yeh alaram...sone do...
Nandini: seriously mein alaram...abhi dikhati huin...
Nandini goes to the table and brought the jar full of water...and poured all the water on manik...and manik gets up in a hurry...
Manik: bachao bachao... Are sunami aa gayi...are mujhe bachao...
Nandini: chup raho...mein huin...nandini...
Manik: hai bhagwan meine toh ap ko choti si sunami mangi thi apne toh sunami earthquake sab bhaj diya...
Nandini: chup karo...kapde nikal diya hai ...naha lo...
Manik: han jaunga...lekin tum kya khadi ho kar mujhe nahate hua dekhogi...
Nandini: han han ...jati huin...
Nandini goes out of the room...
In the hall...
M papa: are bhai kahana layo...ap sab ka upwas hai lekin hum toh khayenge...
Nandini mom and nandini brings breakfast...
Soha also comes...
M papa: are soha beta aayo ...khana kha lo...
Soha: nahi uncle ...meine brat rakha hai...
M papa: kya tumne...
Nandini is shocked...
Nandini proves: yeh or brat...ho hi nahi sakta...aj toh iska pol kholna hi hai...
After sometime soha worked to the kitchen...nandini silently followed her...
Soha: kya hai khane mein...hmmm...chi yaar wahi dhokla...cholo aja ke liye yahi sahi...kisiko pata nahi chalega ki meine khaliya hai...sab toh sochnge ki meine brat rakha hai...and i will be soha the idel bahu...nice...
Nandini standing beside soha hiding behind the door and was video recording all her talks...
Nandini: kha le...kha le...tumhe pata nahi ki tumne kisse panga liya hai...yeh nandini hai...aj toh manu koi yeh dikhana hai...par abhi nahi saam hone do...
Nandini was coming out from the kitchen and mnik from his room...
Manik: ho miss alaram...
Nandini: tumne mujhe bulaya...
Manik: han ji...meine apko bulao...aja itni khusi kuon hai...
Nandini: thare liye ektho surprise rakhe ho...
Manik: are iska all india language changing radio phir se suru ho gaya...
Nandini: kya...
Manik: mam plz ...hindi hamari rastriya bhasa hai...so use hindi...
Nandini:meine bola...tumahre liye ek surprise hai...
Manik: kya...
Nandini: bol dungi toh surprise nahi rahaga...raat ko pata chalega...

Guys...i am again very very sry for late update ...plz enjoy the chapter...like and comments should pe posted

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Interesting story read it in a go continue soon waiting eagerly take care 😊 ...

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome update...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

CHAPTER 13

It is night now...all are busy in preparations...manik is ready and is out of his room ...nandini is still doing work and is not ready...

Manik: dekho nandini mein tumse kitna sunder and cute lag raha huin...

Nandini: are mein toh abhi tayar bhi nahi hui huin...ek bar mein tayar ho jayuin toh phir tum to delhte hi rahe jayoge...

Manik: yeh dialoge kahin suna hai lagta hai...

Nandini: yeh nandini special dialogue hai...

Manik: han han...ab mein jata huin aur dekhta huin meri baby ko...

Manik waljed to soha and soha is also coming towards manik...

Nandini: hmm baby ko to dekhna padega...

Soha: manik baby...

Manik: baby oh my baby...

Nandini: han han bolo bolo...

Soha: baby do u know meine na bahut difficulty se tumhare liye fast rakha hai...

Nandini: acha...

Manik: han han kuin hani...meri baby bhi mere liye fast rakheigi...

Nandini: acha its time for ur surprise.. ...

Manik: surprise acha...

Nandini: jara yeh video dekho...and nandu shows a video of soha eating food and telling ...kaun fast rakhega...

Manik is shocked and looking at soha then at nandini...

Nandini is giving a cute and bechare wala smile to manik...manik feeling insulted leaves from there...

Soha: baby baby...and looks at nandini...nandini

Nandini: are are chilao mat tumhara gala kharap ho gayega phir manik ko baby kaise bulao ge...

Nandini giving a jeet wala ecpression leaves from there and soha is still angry and gazing at nandini...

After spmetime everybody is ready ...manik is present there where he hears the voice of payal...chan chan...and suddenly wind blows...manik turns back and looked at the stairs a beautiful lady with a beautiful dress was coming down...he was mesmerized by her beauty and was standing still as if he is seen a beautiful princess coming down...

Nandini...

Nandini coming towards manik...

Nandini: kya hua...bola tha na jb mein tayar ho ke aunhi toh tum toh dekhte hi rahe jayoge...n

Manik is back and...han han itni bhi achi nahi lag rahi ho...

Nandini: thoro toh dimaj hil gaye se chora...

Manik: aa what about dimaj...

Everyone are ready holding there thinhs for karwachauth and nandini is still thinking how will she break his fast by manik...every ladies hold there carna and looked at the chand...nandini does the saome and after the chand she looks at manik who is busy with soha and then husbands were going to give water to their wives and manik was standini there talking to soha ...then suddenly bandini felt a head drozing and fell on the ground ...manik first notices and runs to nandini...souting ..nandini...

Everyone stops...manik holds nandini...nandini papa have a glass of water and he slowly slowly helps nandini to drink it...hence nandini braat vecame a complete one...

Nandu maharani gets up and is vry happy but soha doesn't seem happy...soha angrily worked inside the house followed by nandini ...

Nandini tells to soha...

Nandini: han toh kya bol rahi thi tum...manik shrif tumhara hai...jodiyan bhagwan banata hain...aur hamari jodi toh usne bachpan mein hi bana diye hain...aj yeh thi manik ke pyaar ki taraf mera pehela kadam...soha and nandini are looking at each other as a maha jang is going to start and taget is manik...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

NANDINI DRESS FOR KARWACHAWTH

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

DRESS FOR MANIK

IMARGINE THIS IN BLUE......

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

awesome update dear

loved u r story

read in one go

if u dont mind I want to give a small suggestion that please give the index of story so that new members can read easily as the chapters get increased there will be difficult

hope u don't mind

continue

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: priyasmiley
awesome update dear
loved u r story
read in one go
if u dont mind I want to give a small suggestion that please give the index of story so that new members can read easily as the chapters get increased there will be difficult
hope u don't mind
continue

Yah I will do it

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

CHAPTER 13

Nandini came out of soha room and she saw manik manik standing there...

Nandini: cholo inko bhi dekhte hai

Nandini came to manik and for making fun of him sho slowly called

Nandini: ba...by...baby...

Manik looked at her and then turned her face as if he dont want to show his face to her...

Nandini: baby ap jara apna pura sai chhera dikheye...

Nandini focefully turned manik...

Nandini: ha toh hamare manik sir bole...mere baby mere liye fast rakhi hai...and started laughing...

Abhi bahut ho gaya ...cholo niche sabhi intezaar kar rahe hai...garba program hai ...tum cholo khali beeth kar dekhna kuinki tumhe to kuch ayega nahi...beeth kar dekhana...

Nandini smiling left the place manik is looking angry...

Cabir comes near manik...

Cabir: manik...soha...aur woh...

Manik: what...

Cabir: are woh hai na pati patni aur woh...usse hi tere situation mein...

Cabir acted like crying...

Bhai mujhe ek nahi mil raha tu do do le kar ghom raha hai...sach me meri buri nazar lagegi...

Manik: oh shut up...aj toh mein isse dikhata huon...

Manik goes down and told nandu papa that he wants a competition to be held between him and nandini...

N papa: bhabi aja hamare manik sur mandini ke bich garba competion aur jo hara usse jitne wale ki ek wish puri karni hogi...

Nandini heres this manik looks at her both of them come to the floor and music starts...

Hey kha naa naa naa naa khankhanat
Hey ta naa naa naa naa tantanat
Ay ja naa naa naa naa naa janjanat
Chha naa naa naa naa naa naa naa
Jee jee jee jee jee hey... ha
Jhananana jhanjhanat jhanjhar baje re aaj
Tanananana tantanat manjeera baje
Ghananana ghanghanat goree ke kangana aaj
Chhananana chhanchhanat payal sang baje
Sar par chunar odhe niklegee aaj radhe, lehra lehrake gopiyo sang
Kanha bhee pichhe pichhe, tang koyee kheenche kheenche
Murlee se barsaye nasur tarang
Dharatee aur woh gagan jhumenge sang sang, sabpe chadhega aaj prem rang
Rangin gulal hoga, socho kya hal hoga
Nachenge prem rogee dum duma dum dum
Dham dham datilal datilal dhidkit dhidkit dhilal
Baje mirdang dhana dhan dhan dhana dhan baje
Chham chham chham chhamat jhanjhar jhamjhamat
Ghungru ghamghamat chamak cham chamake
Hey baje re baje re baje re baje re
Dhol baje
Hey hey...
Hey baje re baje re baje re
Dholee taro dhol baje, dhol baje, dhol baje dhol
Kee dham dham baje dhol
Kee dholee taro dhol baje, dhol baje, dhol baje dhol
Toh dham dham baje dhol
Hey hey chhoree badee anmol, mithe mithe iske bol
Aankhe isakee gol gol gol gol, toh dham dham baje dhol
Han han chhora hai natkhat, bole hai patpat
Arre chhede mujhe bole aise bol, toh dham dham baje dholdham dham baje dholdham dham baje dhol...manik looks at nandini and comes near her and whisper on her ear...Manik: tumne mere liye karwachauth ka brat rakha ta na...Nandini was shocked to hear and she stopped dancing but the song is still playing and here nandini loose...Every body shocked to see that nandini has loosed in garba as well as happy as manik won...N papa: shu nandu shu kare che ...apni nakh kataideo ...inne pardesiyon se...Nandini : nahi isne cheating kiya hai...Manik: kya kya kya kiya hai maine...Nandini: woh...and stops as she cant telll...kuch nahi...N papa: acha ab saja ki bari...Nandini is looking at manik and manik is giving a evil smile...Nandini proves...nandu ab tu to gayi...yeh jab bhi ase hasta hai iske dimag mein kuch kichdi pack rahi hai...bachabhi lo matarani...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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