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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Amazing.
Waiting for them to see each other

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

CHAPTER 8

Since the light has gone all are moving in the darkness...nandini is also moving witha bunch of flowers in her hand...

Nandini: oh ho kuch nahi dikh raha hai...

And suddenly she collide with manik...and fell down...

Nandini: ouch...

Manik started searching his phone and when he got it and he made the flash light on...ha git to see agirl collecting the flowers...

Manik sits on his knee...

Manik: i am sry mein apki help kar deti huin...

And suddenly nandini looks up...

Manik is astonished to see her...wind blows and all the hair fell on nandini's face...suddenly the song flows...

Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

Hmm... thodi-thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

Uske honthon pe muskurayein(showing nandini's face)
Haaye duniya meri
Ho.. chakhna bhi chaahun
Rakhna bhi chaahun
Sabse chhupake usey.. haaye
And suddenly song stop and manik who was lost again regained his sense...

Nandini: sry ...kya sry ...pehele toh girate ho phir sorry bol ke khatam...yeah america ke log hote hi aise hai...kisiko tamiz nahi ati hai...cholo hato...

Nandini gets upnand leave...but manik is still lost...and again the song continues...

Rabba.. Rabba(in slow version)
Mere Rabba Rabba

Mujhe bas ek jhalak toh Dikah...

And suddenly cabir enters...and screams...

Cabir: Bhai...

Manik: (shouting) kya hai...

Cabir: bahi light abhi aa jayegi...

And suddenly the light comes...

Nandini works to his father...

N papa: beta kaha thi tu...koi tujhe dhund raha that...

Nandini: acha kaun...

N papa: manik...nahi nahi manu...

Nandini similes a little ...

Nandini: acha ...kaha hai woh...

N papa: abhi toh yahi that...looking all around...

Are woh raha...nandini looked at the boy her papa was pointing...an she found the he was the only boy there who had hit her...

Nandini: toh yeah hai manik...hai bahgwan meine pata nahi isse kya bol diya usse...kua sochega woh...nandu tujhe na ghar ke alawa kahi nahi bolna cahhiye...sab gadbad kar diya...hitting her fore head...ab kya karun kaise jaun...

Precap: nandini and manik talks in a silent place

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Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Awesome update
Manik was lost in the 1st look itself😃
The song was perfect
Waiting 4 their talk
Cont soon

Edited by rockstarlover - 8 years ago

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

CHAPTER 9

Nandini is slowly walking towards manik...as she reaches...

Manik: hey I am sorry for that...

Nandini: nahi nahi kuch nahi chalega...

Manik: by the way I am manik malhotra and u...

Nandini: I ...am...nandini...

Manik is shocked to see nandini...

Manik: oh so u are nandini...yaar mujhe to pehele samajh Jana chahiye...

Tum hi aise can't sakte ho...

Nandini: tumhe yaad he...

Manik: of course...

Nandini: hey cholo waha chalte hai...yaha bahut shor hei...

Manik: thik hai cholo...

Manik and nandini worked out of the party...

Manik: so finally mein India aa gaya...

Nandini: tumhe toh ana tha...akir hamari saddi Jo ho gayi hai...

Manik: really ...I mean truely...tum USS saddi ko sach mante ho...really and started laughing...

Nandini literally lost his smile...

Nandini: kuin...

Manik: are who koi saddi waddi nahi thi...it was just a part of our childhood...

Childhood chala gaya...air hamare saddi bhi...air uaise mein tumhe yahi kahene aya that...I have a girlfriend...so tum bhi apne life mein age badho...

Nandini is at a shock that manik don't love him and telling this...manik gets up...

Manik: acha ab mein chalta huin...soha atI hi hogi...I have to receive her...

And manik leaves...and nandini starting crying...

Nandini: baghwan mein jiski had mein itni saal rahi huin aj...won mujhe chord kar chala gaya...lekin mein itni asni se haar nahi manungi...

Mein manik se unka pyaar git kar rahungi...

And nandini returns to the party...

Suddenly...a man enters to the party...

Man: band kijiye ye Sab...

M papa: kya hua...

Man: yeah ghar apke naam par abhi register nahi hua hai...ap yaha party nahi kar sakte...

M papa: OK ...thik hai...aka ki party Usse bhi kahtam ho gayi hai...hum apne apne ghar ja rahe hai...

Man: sir ap isse ghar mein rahe nahi sakte...

M papa: aisa mat karnna...him kaha rahenge...

N papa: are sun tu chinta mat kar...hamare ghar chal...jab take registration nahi ho jata tu hamare ghar pe rehenne...

M papa: yeah thik rahenga...

Manik is back with soha...

Manik: dad she is soha my friend...

M papa: hai beta...

Soha: hai...

M papa: manik him kuch din ke liye hariya me ghar pe rahenge...

Soha talking to manik's mom ...

Soha: aunty mein USS chote ghar mein nahi rah sakti...

M mom: baby...they have a very big and beautiful haveli...

Bahut bade khandan se hai...

Soha: acha...then it's OK...and both started laughing

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Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Lovely update
Nandu was hurt by Manik😭

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

CHAPTER 10

all of the family members arrive in the hoise... nandini silently walked to her room... she entered her room and closed the door immodiately...

nandini: meri barson ki intezaar bekar ho gayi... woh toh hamari saddi ko bhi ek jhut samjh ta hai... hai bhagwan... nandini was angry and hurt... when suddenly she was reminded of something... she got up and walked towards the wooden almirah which only she can touch and no body else... after opening the almirah we see many letters and greeting cards were written...

nandini picked up them all and took it and sacttered all pf them on the bed and started reading one of them...

nandini(readind the letter)aja hamri saadi ko ek saal ho gaye... mein ab bhi tumahara intezaaar kar rahi hui ... mujhe pata hai tum ho mere sapnon ke rajkumar aur tum mujhe yahan se apne sath le gayoge... intezzar hai jald anna... tumhari nandini... an like this nandini has wriiten many letter in all their wedding aniversaries...

nandini: itne sare katth toh likh liye par kabhi bhej nahi payi... ab toh inke jarurat hi nahi hai... nandini again picks up all the greeting cards and got up... walked towards the window and threw all the letters out of the window... and closed the window...

but down we see manik picking up the letter and reading it... after reading manik is very angry and rushes to nandini...

he then knocked the door of nandini's room... nandini opened the door after some time... manik got inside and

manik:yeh sab kya hai nandini...

nandini:kya

manik:yeh letters...

nandini is shocked to see the letters in his hand...

manik: tum asa kuin lagta hai ke mein yahan tumhe lene aya huin... listen u dont know me and i dont know u... hamare bich mein kuch nahi hai...

tears rolled down nandini's eyes and she was still...

manik: mujhe abhi yeh sab letters ko jalana hoga...

nandini got very impetient...

nandini:tum in sabko jala doge...

thinking that manik has some fellings for her...

manik: yeh bhi koi puch ne ki baat hai... agar yeh sab soha ne deh liya toh mein usse kya kahunga... usse bhi yeh letters mere koi kam ke nahi and i dont think ki yeh tumhare koi kam ke hain kuinki tumne toh inhe phenk diya tha aur thank god yeh mere hatth laga aur kisike haath mein nahi warna aja toh gaya tha mein...

and manik leaves the room...

nandini sits down in the floor and started crying...

nandini: tum sacch mein mujhe bhul gaye... ap mein tumhe yaad bhi nahi huin... itne badal gae ho... mein toh jis manik ko janti thi yeh toh woh nahi hai...

the plot changes now it os in the hall... all are sitting together and laughing...

n papa: are suno suno sab... karwachauth aa raha hai... iss bar kya kare...

soha: karwachaut? yeh kya hai...

n maa: karwachaut woh hai jab sari patni apne pati ke liye barth rakti hai unke puja karti hai aur chand ko dekhne ke bad hi pati ke hath se kha kar barth todti hai...

soha starts laughing...

soha: inmean surely... aisa bhi koi karta hai... rashma upwas fast... useless things...

m papa: beta these are not useless things hum sadiyon se isse mante aa rahe hai... iss sal ek saath manayenge...

n papa: are nandini kaha hai wahi tob karti hai sab tayari... are girish nandini didi ko bulana jara...

i am sorry guys for very late update... i was really busy with my tutions and studies... but still dont be angry with me... and plz like nand comment if u all like my chappy... see u all with my new masale darr updates... happy reading...