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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

CHAPTER 6

The plot is in america...a boy with 6packs is running it seems that he is in a fitness club...suddenly a sound is hear

Boy's brother: are manik Bhai ruko...

The boy suddenly looked back and it was manik...

Manik: kya chote itne slowly bhi koi exsersise hota hai kya...

His brother name was cabir...

Cabir: ha ha Bhai ap 50 ki speed mein run karoge or muje bhi apne piche bhagayoge...

Manik: tu complain bahut karta hai...

Cabir: tuje kabse ek bat puchne me bare mein soch rahi huin...

Manik: go on...

Cabir: yeah ring kisne diya he apko...

Manik: India mein ladki thi...merit dost...usne diya that...papa kehete hai uske or mari saddi ho gayi hai...

Cabir: sach mein...

Manik: are who saddi sach thodi na this ...

Cabir: tujhe kya lagta hai who abhi kaisi lag rahi hogi...

Manik: bachpen mein who badi khatarnak this...

It was now showing nandini...but the description was by manik...

Uske ankhon mein jaise kuch gehera razz hai( we see nandini eyes)...

Uske hotho pe jaise duniya rukti hai...( we see nandini lips)

Usse blue colour bahut pasand hai...muje lagta hai usne abhi blue colour ki koi dress peheni hogi...(and we see nandini's ghara chili of blue colour)

Cabir: Bhai tumje kya lagta hai woh abhi kya kar rahi hogi...

Manik: wahi apni purani game ...pitthu...

And we see nandini playing pitthu...

It is seen that a girl throws ball on the stone that was shot in a layer...and when the ball hits the layer the girl started running ...and the other team members but up the ball on each other...the girl is trying to keep the stone layer as it was before...

And she has done it...

Now in america...

Cabir: Bhai uska name kya hai...

Manik:(giving a smile) nandini

And suddenly the girl while she has set the layer...she raises her head...

Nandini: yeh yeh ...cahchaji ap had gaye...

Chachaji: Bhai tumhe koi pitthu mein hara sakta hai bahla...

Nandini: so to hai...

In america...

Cabir: Bhai Agra USSe saddi ho gayi hai phir soha ka kaya hoga...

Manik: won marriage I don't consider...soha is my girl friend...

Use bhi mein ja raha huin India...use samjha dunga ki who apne liya koi dusra life patnar dhud le because I have got alive in my life...

GUYS IMARGINE THIS PLOT IN UR MINDS AND DO COMMENT AND TELL WEATHER U LIKE IT OR NOT...

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Sony

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Nice part but chotu tha.😉

Anyways waiting for next.

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

CHAPTER 7

Manik and cabir back to home...manik papa and mama waiting for both of them

Manik: dad mom app aide kuin Bethe hain...

M papa: beta hum kal ke kal hi india ja raje hai... Wahi hum ek bada sa party rakhenge...modern dress mein...

Manik: modern dress who bhi waha...wah toh gagra choli famous hai...

M papa: ek din ke liye toh pehenhi skate hai...

Mein abhi mere dost hariya ko phone kar deta huin...

Manik: hariya??????

M papa: are uske beti nandini...

Cabir: han abhi bol raha tha...

Manik: chip...

M papa: nandini ko an bhi yaad rakha hai...

Manik is thinking...saddi ki galat thinking Jo hamse juda he USSR alag karna hai...

Manik papa call nandini papa...

Now the plot is in Rajasthan...

M papa: hello...

Hariya: hello...

M papa: hariya...hum kal India aa rage hain...

Hariya: kal...acha hai...par milenge kab...

M papa: kal ghar mein ek party hai tu apne baccho ke satth Anna...

Hariya: are bah yeah toh chokhi batt she...

M papa: aue Sir Sab ko modern dress pehenkar ana hai...

Hariya: acha think hai...rakta huin...

M papa: bye...

Nandini in his room arranging her books...

N sister: Didi diddi...

Nandini: su che...

N sis: abhi uncle ka phone aya the...

Nandini: kaun uncle...

N sis: are manik bahiya ke papa ka phone...

Suddenly nandini's attraction is diverted and manan thing flows...

Nandini(again distracting) han toh mein kya karon...

N sis is navya...

Navya: bas han muje Sab pata hai

Nandini: kya pata hai tujhe...

Navya: yahi Ku tu 10 saal se uska wait kar rahe hai...

Nandini: chup...

Navya: acha yeah sun...kal woh aa rahe hai aur kal hi unke ghar mein ek party hai ...usme modern dress pehena hai...chal tuja bapu bula rage hai...San me liye dress tu hi liyegi...yaha kisiko modern dress me bare mein kuch pata nahi hai...

Telling this navya left...

Nandini: uske ghare mein party hai toh who to zarur ayiga...finally mein use dekhungi...

At the evening nandini is back from shopping...

Nandini: bapu maa navya...sabhi ayeye...dekhiye an me kapde aa gaye hai...

All came out and nandini handed over the dress...

N maa: bah mahri nandu Ku choice ek sum chokhi se...

M papa: sola Anne sach boli tu...

Acha nandu tera dress...

Nandini: mera dress toh app ko kal hi dekhne ko milega jab mein pehenungi...thik hai...

All of them say hann...

Next morning...

Manik has picked his bag and is ready and all are ready but cabir is not ready...

Mom goes to cabir room...

Mom : kya hua mera bacca...

Cabir: maa muje mera favourite caddi nahi mil raha hai...

Mom: ow mera bacca ...look here beta yahi kahi pada hoga tumhara underwear...

See got it...put it in the bag and cholo...

Then we see flight left...

Here in Rajasthan ...

Nandini is out is shocked.

Nandini: bapu su che yeah sabb...

N papa: beta gifts che...

Nandini: won toh muje bhi pata hai par itba Sara...

N papa: are hum kisi me party mein jaa rage gain khaki hatth thodi na jayenge...

Nandini thinking: muje toh dekhna hai ki bachpan mein diye hua gift ko ussne sambhal jar rakha hai ya nahi...

GUYS MY NEXT UPDATE WILL SHOW MANIK AND NANDINI'S FIRST MEET...

U ALL MUST BE EXCITED FOR THEIR FIRST MEET...WAIT FOR MY NEXT UPDATE...

AND DO COMMENT AND TELL WEATHER U LIKE IT OR NOT...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Amazing update.
Its a bit difficult to understand this language but no worries trying to understand
Hopefully till some chptr vl get used to it

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Plz Plz Plz update the next part soon

Plz Plz Plz

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Thanks guys for ur comments...

Amazing update.
Its a bit difficult to understand this language but no worries trying to understand
Hopefully till some chptr vl get used to it

Hey I also don't know that language but only some words...don't worry I will put only Hindi and eng language as much as possible...

U all be happy and keep reading...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

CHAPTER 7

In the evening ...

N papa: chalo chalo sab milke chalte hai...

N mama: hum Sab to Tatayar hai...par apki pyaari beti ...do ghante se tayar ho rahi he...

Navya: maa...yeh rahi nandini dei...

And suddenly a girl comes out of the room with a very pretty dress as looking as beautiful as a fairy...

N papa: bah mahri pari rani...ek sum...kya bolte hai woh...perfect...

Nandini: kya bapu...

N papa: are sacchi bolu chu...

N maa: ag tu bilkul meri tarah lag rahi hai...beautiful...

And suddenly nandini's papa started coughing loudly...

N maa: Bas ha ...rehenne digeye...

N papa: cholo cholo...gadi as gayi hai...

And they all reach the destination after sometime...

All of them left inside carrying the gift...

M papa: hariya hariya tu aa gaya...

N papa: dekh...kaisa lag raga huin...

M papa: ek dam handsome

Acha nandini kaha hai...

N papa: are won aa rahi hai...

M papa: beautiful...kitni sunder hai nandini...

N papa: are beti kiski hai...

Then here manik and cabir are waiting for nandini...

Cabir: woh ayegi...

Manik: han han dad me bola that to woh ayegi...

Suddenly manik papa call manik...

M papa: manik manik...as dekh...

Manik: yes dad ...

M papa: yeah hai hariparasad...

N papa: kitna bada air handsome ban gaya hai...

Manik gives a smile...

M papa: inke beti nandini se tera saddi hua that...

Manik: acha nandini kaha hai...

M papa: are woh rahi...

When manik was just turning to see nandini suddenly the electricity goes off...

Manik: oh god ab yeah kya ho gaya...

Cabir ...

Cabir: ha Bhai...

Manik: dekh yeah light Kaiser chala gaya...

Cabir: dekh me as raga huin Bhai...fuse bigad gaya hai...

Manik: ha toh generator toh hai na...

Cabir: generator mein petrol kahtam ho gaya hai...

Manik: oh shett...an mein nandini se Kaiser milunga...

NEXT UPDATE WILL ENTERTAIN A LOT...JUST THINK HOW WILL MANIK SEE NANDINI WITHOUT LIGHT...JUST LIKE AND COMMENT...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

NANDINI'S DRESS FOR THE PARTY

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Lovely update
The dress was pretty
Now electricity is also gone😆
Eager 2 know how Manik will meet with Nandu
Cont soon

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riyaparo

@riyaparo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Loved it
waiting for next
thanks for pm

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