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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Guys this is a new story I have got in my mind...

I think u all will like my plot...

MANAN FF TUMHARI NANDINI

Prologue...

The plot is in the bus stand...a cute little boy is sitting inside the bus and a cut girl is standing out side the window of the sit where the boy is sitting ...the boy is peeping outside...

Boy: tum chinta mat kalo mein jaldi uapas aunga...air tumhe mele sath le gaunga...

Girl: muje pata hai ki tum aaoge...hamare saddi Jo ho gayi hai...

Boy: ha ha... Acha main tumhare liye much liya huin...

Girl: kya...

Boy: tum pehele apna ankha band kalo...phir dunga...

Girl: acha this hai...

The boy takes out a beautiful necklace from his pocket ...

Boy: apna hatth age kalo...

Girl stretched her hand towards the window and he gave the chain to her...

Boy: an ankhe kholo...air suno issue hamesha apne pass rakhna warns mein tumhe pehechanunga Kaiser...

Girl: think hai...par mein tumahre liye much liye huin...

Suddenly the bus started...

Boy: jaldi do...bus chale jaige...

Girl take out a ring and put it in the boy's hand...the bus left the place...

The boy is seen waving his hands and saying...jaldi milege ...mere intezaar karna...

Girl: mein tumhara intezaar karungi...in the chain letter N was printed and in the ring letter M was painted

Guys this story is a love story which will travel from many harsh difficulties but will achieve its love path...it has romance action thriller and high voltage drama that will give u all a shock...do tell me if u like my prologue or not...and I promise u all that the story will be totally different that u all will think after reading this prologue... Well get ready for the surprise...and do tell who is the small boy and girl...

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Obviously the kids r manan
And pls keep their identity like a normal person
Warns yaha bhi manik so called richest guy aur nandini wahi middle class
So pls try to make it different

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiya51
Obviously the kids r manan
And pls keep their identity like a normal person
Warns yaha bhi manik so called richest guy aur nandini wahi middle class
So pls try to make it different

Hi,

I just quoted your comment coz i really liked it. Yeah your words were so true...

Take care.

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Please do continue dear writer as every story should be told.

Take care.

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vinitamakhija

@vinitamakhija

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Posted: 8 years ago

boy is MANIK and girl is NANDANI and continue soon

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi,

I just quoted your comment coz i really liked it. Yeah your words were so true...

Take care.

Thank u and I'm happy that someone agree with my thought
And I hope the writer try to make it really different from what others r writing

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Sony

@Sony.K

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice and interesting prolong.

Waiting for update.

Please PM me ones u update.

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by sadiya51

Obviously the kids r manan
And pls keep their identity like a normal person
Warns yaha bhi manik so called richest guy aur nandini wahi middle class
So pls try to make it different...

I told that u all cannot think the correct one...so I am tellimg u ...manik and nandini will be totally same in economical matters as both there fathers will be bussieness friends...so don't take tension about it...rich and middle don't has to play any role in my story

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER 1

The plot is in a small village of krishngad...a small boy is running from the school to his house...

His mother is calling him...

Maa: manu ...manu ...kaha ja rage ho ruko...

And while running his mother will get to know that his father has cheated her and left for america with his second wife...

Hearing about this his mother started crying and running towards the river...the boy also started running before her...

Manu: ma...ma...

Maa: sun manu tu yahase due chalaga air yaha kabhi mat ayana...

Some villagers came and took manu from the shore...but his mother is seen to give her life in the mery water...

Then a lady comes...manu...beta tum mere sath cholo...

Manu: meri maa ko kya hua aunty...

Lady: kuch nahi...cholo jaldi...

The lady was indeed nandini's mother...she brings manu home and then she calls manu's father...

M papa: hello...

Lady: bhaisab mein bol rahi huin...

M papa: chandrika tum ...kya hua...

Lady: WO bhabi ab nahi rahi...

M papa: kya this hai ...mein at a huin ...mein manu ko le kar america mein settle ho jaunga...

Manu's first meet with nandini...

The seen is a small girl wearing ghagra choli is coming down from statirs...

Nandu: cholo cholo muje pakdo...

Friends: nandu rukh...

And suddenly manu and nandu have a thrash...

Nandu: au...dekhke nahi chal sakte...andhe kahike...

Many: wow...

Nandu: tum to kuch bolo hi mat...

Manu : are mein bolunga nahi toh tumse batt Kaiser karunga...

Nandu: ha ha thik hai thik hai...bolo kya bolna hai...

Manu: I am sorry...

Nandu: tera yeah gun manhe badi chokhi lage se...acha hai...

And telling this she left and manan tuning flows in the background...

Guys I know that the starting is little bit dhuk bhara...but trust me this will be the first step towards an internal love story of manan...do comment and tell me weather u liked it or not...

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kyara;)

@kyaramalhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

aww they are soo cute yaar i love them
speciallr ghagra wali nandini:D
awsm update
loved it
continue soon

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