SwaRon SS~ Love Unspoken on hold.. Note on pg 14 - Page 3

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

omg this was beautiful
yet painful
awesome os

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronus

dis is so beautiful... plz continue na... want to see how dey manage to tell each-other abt der feelings...

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Oh my god..
Thos is fantastic dear..
They love..they care..
They want to be together..

But poor things.
Don't know the feelings of each others..

Really great
Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

That was so beautiful Shreya <3

The opening scene instantly brought back the memories of SwaRon's version of Remeo-Juliet Act.

Till the end I actually thought its just a one sided love and how beautifully Sharon was into him but it was so so lovely to see Swayam feeling that same emotions too. This piece was so soft and you kept the setting as well as conversations so subtle that it just enhanced the beauty of this shot.

You have grown as a writer and its so visible in this piece. It leaves a beautiful emotion lingering inside you even when its end.

Lovely Work Shreya! One of the best I have read from you :)

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: mythreyii

This is beautiful

Such a cute and sweet one

Originally posted by: existentialism

Love the fluidity in your writin'. And that title is Bang-on!

Best,

Linda

Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron

First of all thank u fr givng us such a beautiful os I love reading ur os again&again dey make my day ur wrtng s jst splendid simple yt beautiful cmng to d stry it ws as usual suprb no wrds to dscrbe it remnds f swaron romeo& juliet d emtns prtryd vry wel