SwaRon SS~ Love Unspoken on hold.. Note on pg 14 - Page 2

Oh my god..
Thos is fantastic dear..
They love..they care..
They want to be together..

But poor things.
Don't know the feelings of each others..

Really great
Thanks 4 d pm

That was so beautiful Shreya <3

The opening scene instantly brought back the memories of SwaRon's version of Remeo-Juliet Act.

Till the end I actually thought its just a one sided love and how beautifully Sharon was into him but it was so so lovely to see Swayam feeling that same emotions too. This piece was so soft and you kept the setting as well as conversations so subtle that it just enhanced the beauty of this shot.

You have grown as a writer and its so visible in this piece. It leaves a beautiful emotion lingering inside you even when its end.

Lovely Work Shreya! One of the best I have read from you :)

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

beautiful as always shreya 👏
selection of words is the best thing about your writing
each emotion was portrayed beautifully be it love or pain
I loved it girl ❤️
fantastic work 👏

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

That was an amazing piece of writing.
I was wishing It could have another part.

Originally posted by: Aayu27

That was very heart-touching! Loved it , how you described their feelings and their fears , their hiding games , beautifully written!

Absolutely loved and adored the last line , HOPE❤️

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.

Your words simply inching with sincerity and romance, absolutely beautiful. Such simplicity in emotion and such complexity in writing, seriously a beautiful combination.

Originally posted by: dvrushu

This OS is heart breakingly Beautiful..
Actually don't know How to describe How much I loved it...
Awsmm...kudos girl
Well written
And do write more on swaron.

Originally posted by: swaronaaliya

Nice os

Originally posted by: aneesha93

This was a heart touching one. Lovely work Shreya:)