Ariya ss "Mahe Jaan" part 9 page 31 11/07/18

Hey guys I know meri ek story abhi start hi hui he or me dusri bhi start kar rahi hu but mini di(sur1911)😊suggest me to go for this one so here i am with the other story basically this story of mine is going on dil mil gaye forum but mini di told me to post that story here also on ariya so here is the prologue tell me how was it feel free to tell me..

(love u mini di❤️)

                         

MAHE JAAN (Ariya ss)

 

Prologue

 

Girl : Kya bas itna hi pyar tha aapka mujh par bas haar man gae aap kya ghutne tek diye he humari mohabbat ne boliye"wid tears running down her eyes"

 

Boy : Bohat pyar karta hu me tumse itna pyar jitna kisine kisise nhi kiya ho pagalo deewano ki tarah chahne laga hu me tumhe par jo me karne ja raha hu wo karna zaruri he hume ye karna hoga"the girl try to intrupt him but he didn't give her a chance"

 

Boy : Humara pyar paak he jaan, koi khot nhi he isme par is waqt mujhe mat roko me sab kuch seh sakta hu jo mujh par ilzam lage he me wo sab bardash kar lunga par apni mohabbat ko badnaam hote nhi dekh paunga"he also have tears in his eyes"

 

The girl just hugged him tightly n cry on his shoulder n he kissed her hair lightly

 

Girl : Kya ye karna zaruri he hum koi or..."still holding him she was saying but boy intrupt her"  

 

Boy : Hmmm bohot zaruri he aaj humari mohabbat ko galat naam diya gaya he,galat nazaro se dekha gaya he,kya tumhe bhi ye lagta he ki humne mohabbat nhi gunah kiya he?

The girl immediately replys

 

Girl : Nahi humne koi gunah nhi kiya humne mohabbat ki he humara pyar sacha he kya aap..."she stopped in a mid but he understand what she wants to say"

 

Boy : Me bhi yahi manta hu isliye me sabko dikha dena chahta hu ki humne koi jurm nhi kiya pyar kiya he gunah nhi me zamane ko dikhana chahta hu ki hum galat nhi.Kya tum mera saath dogi "he was looking towards her wid hopeful eyes"

 

N the girl no voice come out from her mouth wid teary eyes she just nod her head as if saying him that I m wid u in ur each n every decision n he, he understand her unsaid wordsn take her in a bone crush hug they remain in same position for sometime then they parted away from eachother n he cupped her face in his hand n she hold his hands they were gazing at each other for sometime after that

 

Boy : Ab mujhe jana hoga take care love

 

Girl : Aap bhi meri jaan ka khayal rakhiyega"while crying so hard n he just nod his head"

N then he left her n she collapse on the floor n cryed so hard...

 

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THIS IS THE TALE OF LOVE, PAIN, HURT, SEPARATION, JEALOUSY, HARDSHIP, DESTINY...

 

So guys plzzz tell me how was it should I start or not m waiting for ur response do tell me it worthy to be continue or not i m waiting for ur reviews... 

love ramya

INDEX

PART 1 # PAGE 4

PART 2 # PAGE 7

PART 3 # PAGE 11

PART 4 # PAGE 14

PART 5 # PAGE 18

PART 6 # PAGE 21

PART 7 # PAGE 25

PART 8 # PAGE 28

PART 9 # PAGE 31

Edited by Ramy_ani - 5 years ago

Superve concept
luvd the prologue
hope girl n boy overcomes every hurdle of mistrust society n destiny
waiting
update soon

Nice concept

Amazing concept
Continue soon
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Thanks dear for writing it on ariya

nice concept
update soon

Nice concept

Conti soon

nice concept..
update soon..
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interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.

Lovely Prologue ...
Continue Soon ...
Thanks for the PM ... 😃