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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Rishivar, the next part is Prof's Rishivar. Ask her to update soon 😆😆

Prof's Rishivar ??

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Prof's Rishivar ??

Prof's, Rishivar.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Prof's, Rishivar.

Got It , When is Riya updating ??

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Got It , When is Riya updating ??

She is done with the update, but she has to edit. So, tomorrow, I hope.

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Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

She is done with the update, but she has to edit. So, tomorrow, I hope.

I was thinking of writing such an post exile period update myself for my OS series- FOUR

But it would mean jumping the whole lankaa plot

Anyways I am not good at writing emotional updates , it is better if I skip that entire timeline and make a story with the Kids , but Sita and Luv Kush included .

In my Update , i will alter the plot , I am not going to show Ram sita separation again ,

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Danceegirl92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: TwinMadness
Hi guys :) This is a LakshMila SS that Rii and I are working on :)
Mili, you asked this of us separately, so we decided to do it together😉😉Hope you like it, bawli :*
This is just a filler, for the brilliant one that is coming from Rii🤗
As always, give me feedback :) Enjoy guys :)
QUESTIONS

Lakshman relaxed. His room was quiet for once. No
mischievous little kids running around. 

Karma', he thought. His children were as mischievous as he
was. Now he understood how much of a difficult time his three mothers would
have had with him and Shatrughan. They were two peas in a pod; devilish,
mischievous, and short-tempered, literally and figuratively. But the years had
tamed both of them. Well, it had tamed him. Shatrughan still pulled pranks,
though most of them involved him these days. That twin of his!

Lakshman paced the length of the room he and his wife
shared. His wife! Thinking of her brought a smile on his face; she was his
light, his life-breath. He had spent fourteen years away from her; he will not
spend a second more. 

Where is she?', he thought urgently, suddenly wanting her
in the same room, in his arms.

Those words threw him back to something so many years ago,
but seemed like yesterday.

Lakshman
paced the length of the meadow. 

Where
is Urmila?', thought the son of Dasharath. I need to talk to her about the
engagement, make sure she is comfortable with it. She looked it, but I want to
hear the words. Where is she? It would be highly inappropriate to go to the Raj
Bhavan to meet her. Oh Shivji!'

Lakshman
suddenly stopped pacing. He smiled. His
Mila was here!

He
turned around, to see a blushing Urmila entering the meadow. She seemed to be
carrying a plate of haldi in her arms. 

"Pranaam!",
said Lakshman, smirking at Urmila.

Urmila
blushed, as Lakshman had hoped she would, looked down shyly, and said, "Pranaam
Rajkumar!"

"Devi,
you? Here? That too with haldi?", asked Lakshman.

"Ji. I
was supposed to give this to your side, and ask you all to take it and give it
for us to our sakhis, who will come to take it. I didn't expect to see you
here, Rajkumar", said Urmila.

Wasn't
she intelligent? She had phrased her question beautifully. Of course, she
could. She was the only one other than his brothers to be able to manage his
sharp wit. 

"I
didn't expect to see you here either, Urm-Rajkumari!"

Lakshman
did not miss the sharp breath Urmila drew. He smirked. How he enjoyed doing
random things like this to her!

Urmila
bit part of her lower lip, and gave him a sharp look, resulting in an answering
smirk from him. Lakshman knew she knew that he was doing it on purpose. He
loved adding flavours to their relationship. 

Lakshman
looked at Urmila, who now seemed to be pouting at him. 

She
looks beautiful', thought Lakshman. I just want to.. Woah! Stop right there
Lakshman. What are you even thinking? Look at your Mila. Look at her purity and
innocence'

Lakshman
cleared his throat, and said, "Devi, I have a matter of utmost importance to
discuss with you"

"Ji",
said Urmila, looking at him, a little tensed.

"Devi,
I just wanted to make sure that you are absolutely okay with our wedding? Your
father didn't ask you for your permission", said Lakshman.

"Of
course I am, Rajkumar. If I hadn't, our wedding won't happen. Pitaji respects
all our wishes. He saw my face, and then only accepted the proposal" said
Urmila.

"And
what was it that your face conveyed, Rajkumari?", asked Lakshman, smirk
widening. 

"Nothing",
said Urmila, blushing, and looking at the ground.

Lakshman
moved forward, and stood in front of her. He gripped her chin with his right
hand, and slowly lifted her face up. Their eyes met; both pairs of eyes spoke
love and promise, trust and understanding. 

He
could feel her breathing increase. Her heart rate also increased. His entire
body felt like it was on flames, the flames of love. Suddenly, Lakshman applied
something pasty on her cheek with his left hand. She looked at his hand, and
realized that he had put haldi on her. She blushed, and looked at him. Meeting
his tender eyes, she smiled lovingly, her face giving out her joy. If RamBhaiya
did something, Lakshman had gone one step ahead!

The
two lovers stood in the meadow, lost in each other's eyes, till...

"Urmi!"

They
got broken out of their trance by the voice of Rajkumari Mandavi.

"I
need to go, Rajkumar. Raksha... Mandavi Didi is looking for me", said Urmila.
"Pranaam"

"Pranaam,
Urmila", said Lakshman, loving the redness of her cheeks. 

As she
left, she kept turning to look at him. He smiled, she smiled; he smirked, she
blushed.

"My
Mila", he said softly, once she went out of earshot.

Lakshman smiled, remembering every second vividly. He
wished she were here now.

Meanwhile...

"Chote Bade Pitaji! Bade Pitaji!"

Two little boys, matching steps with each other, came
running towards Princes Bharat and Shatrughan.

"Angad, Chandraketu", said the two brothers, staring into
the eyes of the two mischievous children.

"What are you two up to now?", asked Bharat, sighing. 

"Nothing, Chote Bade Pitaji", said the two boys, looking
innocent.

"I know that look. I have seen it on your father, and this
natkhat you call Chote Pitaji", said Bharat. "So, what do you two want?"

"Just the answer to a simple question", said Angad, smiling
cutely.

"And the question is?" asked Shatrughan, smiling at his
nephews.

"How did Ma and Pitaji get married?", asked Chandraketu.

"Haan Chote Bade Pitaji, Chote Pitaji. Tell us. How did Ma
and Pitaji get married?", asked Angad, innocently.

Bharat looked at Shatrughan, and sighed at the mischief in
his little brother's eyes. He spoke up before Shatrughan could say something.

"Why do you ask?", asked Bharat, narrowing his eyes.

"Chote Badi Ma and Choti Ma were talking about their
weddings in Mithila, and said something about how Mata and Pitaji's story is
the most interesting of the lot", said Angad, making his eyes wide.

Oh Ishvar! Lakshman is going to get embarrassed now', he
thought, before smirking. 

"It's a very long story", said Bharat. "They met when we
were nine and Urmi was six. We met..."

"Nahi nahi Bharat Bhaiya. This is Lakshman Bhaiya's story.
He has to tell the kids", said Shatrughan. "See children, your parents had
something called a love marriage"

"Shatrughan!", hissed Bharat. "Lakshman will skin you
alive"

"It's okay, Bhaiya. Ram Bhaiya and you will protect me",
said Shatrughan, in a low tone. "As will Urmila Bhabhi"

"I won't. You go to Ram Bhaiya and Urmi only", said Bharat.
Oh Mahadev! Chote is going to get pranked full on by Lakshman. And I have a
feeling that both Ram Bhaiya and I are going to help him'

"What is that?", asked the two children, at that time, wide eyes to full effect.
Seeing those eyes, Bharat was transported to the day he met Urmila. Shaking it
off, he said, "That is a question you should ask Lakshman"

"Will he tell us?", asked Angad.

"Of course he will", said Shatrughan.

"Dhanyavaad", said the kids, running off to see their
father, to pose their questions.

"Bharat, Shatrughan", came a voice from behind the
brothers.

"Ram Bhaiya", said both of them, turning and bowing to Ram.

"Where are Angad and Chandraketu running off to?", asked
Ram.

"To Lakshman's chamber", said Bharat.

"Good. I am going there myself", said Ram, smiling at his
brothers, and going towards Lakshman's chambers. 

"Bharat Bhaiya, can we also go? I want to see the look on
Lakshman Bhaiya's face", said Shatrughan, a pleading look on his face.

Before Bharat could retort, four children came running.

"Pitaji! Pitaji!"

Ah! Shatrughan will be busy now. Thank you Mahadev! If the
kids hadn't come, there would be a world war only tomorrow. No no. A world war
today. My two brothers and their similar temparament', thought Bharat, as he
lifted his sons up.

Meanwhile...

"Pitaji!"

Lakshman sighed. His two natkhats were back. He opened his
arms wide. The two boys promptly jumped into their father's arms, hugging him
tight. He hugged them back just as tightly, happy to have them in his arms.

"So, children, how was your day?", asked Lakshman.

"Amazing Pitaji! Gurudev taught us how to plant trees, and
how trees are blessings to the soil and to us as well. Then Ma said that we
have to embrace trees as our siblings, and love them and grow them with care.
After that,..", said Angad.

"Angad, let me talk", whined Chandraketu.

"No. I will tell Pitaji what happened", said Angad.

"No, I want to talk"

"No. I will talk"

"No, me"

This scene made Lakshman smile, and remember the times he
and Shatrughan used to race to their father, arguing, sitting on his lap, as to
who gets to tell their father what had happened that day. 

"Okay okay. Angad, Chandraketu, stop arguing", said
Lakshman. "Angad, Chandraketu let you tell me what happened first right? Now,
extend that courtesy to your brother. Let him also talk" 

"As you wish, Pitaji", said Angad.

"And then we came back to the Raj Bhavan, and we played
with Taksh, Pushkal, Subahu and Shrutsen. At that time, we heard Choti Badi Ma
and Choti Ma talk about your weddings in Mithila. They said that yours and Ma's
is the most interesting story", said Chandraketu, casting a meaningful glance
at Angad. 

"I'm guessing that both of you are going to take turns
now", said Lakshman, shaking his head fondly at them.

"So, we found Chote
Bade Pitaji, and Chote Pitaji.."

"And Chote Pitaji said it was your story to tell us.."

"And he also said that the two of you had a... What was it,
Chandraketu?"

"A LOVE MARRIAGE!", yelled the two kids in unison. Widening
their eyes, they asked, "Can we know what it is?"

Lakshman's eyes widened in horror; that devil twin of his!
I am going to get back at you for this, Shatrughan', he vowed in his mind. He
tried to ignore the round eyes of his kids; they inherited his Mila's eyes!

"Who taught you that word?", asked Lakshman, already
knowing the answer.

"Chote Pitaji", said the two children.

"What is going on here?"

The calm, serene voice of Ram floated through the air. The
two kids rushed to him.

"Bade Pitaji! Bade Pitaji!", they fell at his feet, paying
their respects, before promptly jumping into his arms as well, just like they
had to their father before. Lakshman got up, and bowed down to his Ram Bhaiya,
who smiled at him lovingly. 

The two kids dragged Ram, and made him sit down on a
cushion, before they both sat on his lap.

"Bade Pitaji! Chote Pitaji told us that Ma and Pitaji had a
love marriage. Is that true?", they asked Ram, eyes wide.

"You both use the Urmi' eyes way too much", said Ram,
shaking his head. "But yes yes. It is"

"So, can we know how their marriage came about?", asked
Angad, pouting.

"Why exactly do you want to know that?", asked Lakshman,
narrowing his eyes.

"All children want to know their parents' story", whined
Chandraketu.

"And", asked Lakshman. "I know that's not the end of it"

"And Chote Pitaji said that you will tell us the story",
said Angad.

"I knew it!", said an indignant Lakshman. "Shatrughan is
going to..."

"Lakshman, calm down", said Ram. "I will tell the story,
and you will add tidbits. And we will switch. Your's and Urmi's story is a beautiful
one, one the world should understand. After all, I can't deny my two prices
anything, can I?"

Lakshman sighed. Ram Bhaiya had calmed him down before
anything could happen. The only other people who could do that were his own
wife and Sita Bhabhi! Sita Bhabhi! How he missed her; she was not just his
Bhabhi, she was his Mata. He loved her as he loved his three mothers. He knew
that she would also spoil his sons with affection. He sighed sadly. Shaking off
his pensive thoughts, he looked at his Ram Bhaiya, who was giving him a sad
look as well. Knowing how much Ram Bhaiya missed Sita Bhabhi hurt Lakshman;
that is why both he and Urmi let Ram Bhaiya bring up their kids. He deserved
the love of children.

"Bhaiya, you spoil them", said Lakshman.

"And you spoil me", said Ram. "Now, let me tell my two sons
the story"

"But Bhaiya... Urmi won't like it", said Lakshman.

"I will tell Urmi. Stop being so scared of her, Lakshman",
said Ram, rolling his eyes at his brother.

"Pitaji is scared of Mata?", giggled the two kids. 

"I am not...", sputtered Lakshman.

Ram interrupted him, saying, "Your Ma is a fierce woman;
she is a tigress. Anyone would think twice before crossing her. And Lakshman,
stop pouting. This is your story. You can prank Shatrughan after this"

Lakshman visibly brightened at the prospect, and said,
"Children, now, Ram Bhaiya and I will take turns in telling you the story,
okay?"

The two kids nodded obediently, and Ram began...

So cute!!!! Loved it!!! So glad this is a ss. Will Urmila be in the next part? Can't wait for more plz update soon!!!!!!

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Danceegirl92

So cute!!!! Loved it!!! So glad this is a ss. Will Urmila be in the next part? Can't wait for more plz update soon!!!!!!

Wait and see 😉😉

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Shivam...

I was thinking of writing such an post exile period update myself for my OS series- FOUR

But it would mean jumping the whole lankaa plot

Anyways I am not good at writing emotional updates , it is better if I skip that entire timeline and make a story with the Kids , but Sita and Luv Kush included .

In my Update , i will alter the plot , I am not going to show Ram sita separation again ,

You go ahead :P

I will be waiting for it, Rishivar :)