Twinj Fan Fiction:*Ishqana Dill*-Last Part updated - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Nice update.
Really liked it. It was great.
I hate Alisha so much.
Please give us Twinj scenes.
It's sad to see them both in pain.
Poor Kunj loves Twinkle so much and is in so much pain.
Make Twinkle take away that pain.
Can i please kill Alisha btw? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
wow awesome update dear
i just loved it
i know this alisha is a haddi from begining
i do hope she is not able to create rift between twinj
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Nice update auritrika..
Alisha๐Ÿ˜ก
Poor Twinj..
Alisha stay away from kunj...
Update next part soon
Thx for pm..

Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Plz update next part soon! I can't stand Alisha! Plz update! Loved parts 8-10
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
absolutely loved the last two partts
feel bad for twinkle...

plz update!

thanks 4 the pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Awesome loved d update Aura
Aww poor Twinj
Gosh! Kunj is so amazing he loves Twinks so much


Just can't wait for d next part
Edited by harshi2000 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Amazing. .. loved it... continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Loved itt Aura..very intense and emotional
Waiting for the next ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Oh my goshness ๐Ÿ˜ณ
So finally I've been updated with all the parts lagging ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Damn this is becoming so much more interesting day by day ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Plz continue sooonnn dear plzzz๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Ishqana Dill- Part 11

Twinkle sent kunj a text wrtng "Thnku fr ths lovely gft ,Mr Sarna"
Readng the msg of twinkle , kunj was on the 7th sky... He was so glad tht he wntd to exprss it by dncng bt smehw he cntrld his desires... Kunj was smlng thinking abt twinkle whn alisha enterd in his office ...
Alisha- Hey kunjo ... Whts hppng ?
K- Alu ,Alu ,Alu i m so hppy tday ...
A- Arreh bapre ... Aisa kya ho gaya jo mera kunjo nachne par utar aya?
K- I m so hppy tday ... tujhe pata bhi hai aaj kya hua! Maine twinkle ko ek neckless gft ki and she texted me thnku fr the frst tym ... Can u jst blv it ?
A- To isme konsi bari baat hai kunj... Its quite ntrl ...
K- Tere liye yeh bat nrml ho sakti hai par fr me yeh uska pehla thnku
hai and its vry vry vry spcl fr me ...
Alisha was frowning in anger ...
Twinkle listend evrythng stndng in a corner ... It seemed lyk kunjs wrds made magic on her , she was blushing nd cldnt cntrl her smile ...
Alisha ran out of kunjs office with full of anger... Twinkle knockd on kunjs door ... .
K- Come in ...
As kunj was busy with his files he didnt notice his lady love ...
T- Mr Sarna ...
Kunj cldnt blve his own ears ... He cldnt react ...
K- T ... Tw..Twinkle ??? Aap yaha ? Kuch kam tha ?
T- Hadd hai Mr Sarna ... Aab kya mujhe apni pati ke office main ane ki liye prmsn lene padegi kya ?
Kunj- :-o :-o Kya kaha apne?
T- Are deaf or wht?
K- Did u jst say "PATI" ??????
Twinkle instantly realzd wht she said ... She was feelng vry shy bt cntrld the situation very tactfully ...
K- Ok ok... Aap ayi hai to ofcrse kuch jaruri kam hi hogi ... Bataiye ..
T- Ji woh actually i ... .
Alisha enters ... she didnt see twinkle as twinkle was stndng showing her bck ..
A- Kunj ... Baby ur lunch ... Tumhara fvrte Italiano pata with extra cheese ... Yummy ...
Alisha kept the dish on the tble trng around she saw twinkle ... .
A- O hi twinkle ! Wht a pleasnt srprse ...
T- Hi alisha ... Waise tumhara yaha hona srprsng hai mera nhi ... Mr sarna main apke lia lunch lekar ayi thi , aab jab ap pasta khane wale hai so i shld leave ...
K- Twinkle , wait wait wait ... Maine kab kaha ki main tumhari banaya hua khana nahi khaunga ... Alisha pls tum yeh pasta leke jao ... pls
T- Nhi Mr Sarna its ur fvrte food na ... Maine to khichdi banayi thi , u wont lyk it .. aap pasta hi kha lije...
K- No no twinkle... Frm tdy zindgi bhar main pasta nahi khaung sirf khichdi hi khaunga ... Frm tdy i love khichdi nd hate pasta ... Sundar pls yeh pasta ka tray leke jao ...
Alisha was hurt she left the room with a cryng face which was unnotcd by kunj ...
K- Wow ... Twinkle its so yummy ... Hmmm...
T- Really! Aur du ?
K- nahi bas bas ... 2 plate kha liya itna tsty tha ...
T- I didnt taste ... kunj tried to stp twinkle frm eatng the khichdi bt faild...
Asa twinkle took the spoon in her mouth her exprsns chnged ... The khichdi was sp salty ...
K- Twinkle pani pije ,pani pije ... I ll get u some chcltes ...
Tears were flowing frm twinkles eyes ... she grabbed kunjs hand ..
T- Yeh khana itna salty hai firbhi apne 2 pltes khli bina mujhe samajhne dia ki khne mein namak jyada hai !
K- Agar apne mujhe jeher milaya hua khana deti na twinkle, khane mein jeher hai yeh jnte huye bhi main khushi kgushi woh khana kha leta twinkle ...
T- Why Mr Sarna ? Why?
K- Bcz I love u , twinkle... Chahe aap mjhse pyaar kare ya na kare par main apni akhri sas tak apko pyaar karta rahunga ...
Twinkle was so happy hearing ths..
T- Mr sarna ... Mujhe bhi apse kuch kehna hai ...
K-Ha blo na ...
T- Woh Mr sarna actually i ...
Sundar-Sahab alisha mam atmahattya krne jrahi hai ...
K-Wht???

To be continued...
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