Twinj Fan Fiction:*Ishqana Dill*-Last Part updated - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
I read all d parts
this is just awesome cant wait for d next part
totally loved it
Edited by harshi2000 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sdea

omggg read all of them. Don't know how i missed this ff. i loved it amazing. Your are an amazing writer dear. Thanks for the pm



Thnks budd... Huggie fr u ...
Bty i dnt knw ur nme ...
I m Auritrika
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Hey, its amazing update yaar..
I didnt notice it before..sorry..
nw all parts i read in one go...
Nice concept...toh twinkle aur yuvi ki beech ki tashan ab twinj mei agya..
Continue soon..[/QUOTE

Thnks dear fr lvng the updts ...
I ll cntnue asap...
Dfntly u ll be pm ed
Love u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow..now only read it in one go...

Am feeling bad tat I missed it before...
Superb...plz update soon...



Hy dnt be upset ... I ll pm u whnvr nxt updt is done ...
Thnks fr lvng it ,dear ...
May i knw ur nme pls?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: harshi2000

I read all d parts

this is just awesome cant wait for d next part
totally loved it



Hey harshi thnks fr lvng ...
Will be bck soon dear ...
Lve u ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Duumps

Very interesting updates.

Loved them.
Waiting to see how Twnkle will fall in love.





Thnku thnku thnku ...
Big huggie ...
Means a lot ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Part 6-
Kunj shwd twinkle her house ... The house was elegant nd preety ... Decorations were done by interior designers ... The house was duplex ... 5 master bedrooms were on upstairs nd 2 mstr bds were on the dwnstairs , living room ,dining room ,study room,music room etc etc...
Beside the mansion there is quarters fr the care takers nd sarvents ...
Kunj- Bas bas puri rat nikl jayegi agr aaj hi sab dkhlogi to ... Kal subah uthkar sab kuch explore krlena ,ok? After all yh sab tmhara hi to hai ...
Twinkle was irritatd by kunjs lovey dovey talks ... It was dsgstng in hr sense ...
T- Main thak gyi hu ... I wanna chng nd sleep...
K- Sure ... You go frshn up main tumhari dnnr bhejwata hu ... Go ...
Twinkle entrd in kunjs bdroom ... She was astonished seeing her pics all around the room beautifully frmed ... She cldnt stop her slf frm smilng ...
T- Ths guy , is totally crzy ...
She took her clothes nd went to washroom ...

Aftr 10 mns whn twinkle came out ,she saw jer dnnr was ready nd kunj was waiting fr her ...
T- Mr.Sarna mujhe apse kuch bat krni hai ...
K- Ha bolo na ...
T- Main iss shadi sa khush nhi hu ... My dad frcd me to marry u ... So i did ..
Kunj- What ????
T- Itna chwkneki jaroorat nhi hai ... Bht shokh tha na apko mjhse shaadi krna ki ... 3 mnths .. only in 3mnth i ll dvrce u ...
K: Twinkle wht are u saying ... I ... I love u .. nd i really mean it ... I cant live wthout u ... I m crazy abt u ... pls undrstnd twinkle ... Tum jaisa kho ge main waisa krnga ... Jo bolo ga woh krnga bt pls dnt leave mee ... I ll die ...
Kunj was beggng twinkle nd crying ... He was brkn frm inside ...
T- Sry Mr.Sarna I cnt hlp it ... Aap pls dusre room ma jaynge or main chale jau???
K- No ...
Saying ths kunj took his clothes nd ncssry thngs and shftd dwnstairs ...
T- Ufff ... I m sry Mr .Sarna ... Par yh to sirf shuruwad hai ... Abhi to bht kuch sehna bki hai apko ...
Kunj was going through a disaster ... He cldnt accpt tht twinkle wasnt happy ...She cldnt accpt hm ...
K- No no no... Twi...twinkle mjge dvrce nhi de skti .. i lve her ... Hw can she leave me ... She cnt ...

Kunj cldnt slp the whle nght ... Tears were falling cntnously frm his eyes ...

Morning :
Twinkle woke up vry early ... She was mssng hr F*Ly nd home ... She got ready ... And came dwnstairs ... She was explrng the nw plce ...
Manu kaka- Gd mrng , bahu rani ...
T- Gd mrng , kaka ...
M- Apke lia nashta lga du ... ?
T- Nahibkaka... Mujhe bas ek cup garma garam chaye chahiya ...
M- Abhi lata hu , bahurani ...
T- Kaka ... Waise Mr . Sarna kaha hai ??
M- Ji woh gym gaye me hai... Quarter k opposite side me hai ... aap waha jaiye main apki coffe lkr ata hu...
T-Ok... Thnku kaka ...
Kunj was wrkng out ... Twinkle went and saw him exrcsng ... His prfct body nd abs made her crzy fr a while bt she cntrld hrslf ...
M- Apki chaye ...
T- Thnku kaka ... Waise apne nashta kia?
M- Ji ha... Main chlta hu ...
T- ji ...
Kunj ntcd twinkle nd stpd his task ... He took a twl and wiped his sweats ...
He came twrds twinkle ...
K- Apke mom ka phn aya tha ... Kisi rasm k liye apko waha jana prega ... Aap chle jaiye ... Car ki keys apke room me hai ...
T- Main taxi se chli jaungi ... Mjhe apki car ki zaroorat nhi hai ..
K- As ur wish ...
He left ...
T- Ise kya hgaya achanak se ... Kal to bara lvr boy bana firrraha tha ... Aab rude! Whtvr... Why do i care ..

Kunj got ready fr office ... He evn didnt tke his brkfst ... twinkle was tkng her brkfst
M- Kunj beta, nashta?
K- Kaka ... Mujhe der hrahi hai ... Office main karlunga ..
T- Mr .Sarna ghar se subha khli pet nklna ashuv hta hai ... Pls sit dwn ...

K- Aap ko koyi phadak nhi padhna chahiye ... Waise bhi aap kuch mahino ki mehman hai ... So u bttr nt intrfre in my lyf ...
Kunj left ... His wrds didnt work on twinkle ... She nrmly took her brkfst nd went to her moms home ...

Tanejas place-
Evryone was exctd nd waitng egearly as their daughter were cmng home ... Twinkle came ... She was on the 7 th sky ... Evryone was adrng her so much ... Her whole day was spent awesomely ... She was so hppy ... Seeing her smile he prnts were glad ... In the eve kunj came as RT clld him ... Aftr dnnr Kunj nd twinkle strtd fr Sarna mansion... Twinkle bcme little bit emotionl nd cranky ...

In the whle journey kunj didnt utter a wrd ... They were stucked in trfc...
K- W*F!!! Yeh mumbai ki trfc ka prb kya hai ?

A girl cme nd knckd kunjs wndw ...
K- kya chahiye?
Girl- Vaia ful lelo ...
Kunj took a 500 note nd gve ths to the grl ...
Grl- Yeh sirf 50 ka hai ...
K- Pata hai ... Bki paisa tmhare gft hai ...
Grl- Thnku vaiya ...
Kunj kept the flwr in the car nd srtrtd fr hme again ...
Twinkle was imprsd seeing kunj lyk tht ...

Part 6 done ... Drop ur comments ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
wow awesome updates dear
i just lved it
poor kunj why is twinkle showing this attitude to kunj she must be thankfull to him nah he saved her from uvs plan
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😃
Edited by kusharberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
awesome update loved the last two parts...
u r a great writer dear looking forward to read mre :)


plz cont soon


and thanks soo much for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow awesome updates dear

i just lved it
poor kunj why is twinkle showing this attitude to kunj she must be thankfull to him nah he saved her from uvs plan
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😃



Ure wlcm lina...
Glad u lykd it...
I ll try to updt soon ...
Love u
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