Yes, so finally read it... Wonderful update... Bohut suspence h yaar tumhari story mein... Waiting for it to b unfold... Will b waiting for the next one... Jaldi update Karna...
Loved akshay Kumar wala scene... Manik and nandini are going to have a good bond... But am not sure about manik... He is one mysterious character of your story...
Looking forward to read more...
Edited by mini2309 - 8 years ago
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interesting... y m nt getting good vibes?? is Der any suspence regarding d marriage and malhotra siblings... ?? m feeling lyk dere is lots more to be unfold... trip gonna be interesting.. amazing update...continue soon
amazing update. nandini totally fall for him and manik the way he behaved and talked to nandini it seems like he is the most nice and gentle guy in this world but for ur prologue l think something very big is cooking up in manik's mind. but whatever manan's talking was well penned.
poor Arymann fall for his best friend but unfortunately failed to get his love.
Awww it was really awsum update yr😃😛 plzz make manik sincere with her😠really loved their growing bonding😃 with naughty manik n blushing nandini😆😃 really loved their ph talk😳 feel pity for aryaðŸ˜ðŸ˜ really loved sisties bonding😆😳😃 eagerly w8ting for d trip😊
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