Hii frds
I m sonal n m quite new to this forum...I really like jogi n ria so I have been thinking to write something on them n now here I m😆
M going to write it in Hinglish...I mean dialogues will be in hindi n ignore my grammatical mistakes because my grammar sucks
N I was planning to write an OS but thoda lamba ho gya so m making it a TS
My story is related to SOTY track...m using the current track i.e. adi's bluff n his fake love drama m going to eliminate kulwinder's recent behaviour (burning books )because I don't have any explanation for that stupid move of his
So here we go
MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR
(Jogi n jassi were studying in their room but jogi's mind was somewhere else...he was thinking about ria n adi's growing closeness...his mind was saying that u should concentrate on ur studies but his heart was betraying him...then he heard jassi's voice)
Jassi - oye veere tune last week ke newspaper check kiye
Jogi - ohh jassi abhi padh le newspaper competition ke baad padhna
Jassi -veere I dint mean that
Jogi - toh phir kya matlab tha tera
Jassi - oh veere u have to read the newspapers
Jogi -arey but why should I
Jassi - kyunki main keh rahi hoon
Jogi - jassi tu
Jassi - oho veere agar unhone current affairs ke baare mein puch lia toh
Jogi (absentmindely) - toh bol dunga SOTY party mein shuru hua tha
Jassi (with a confused look) - WHAT ? veere r u alright n whose affair
Jogi (came back to his senses) - oye mere ko kya hoga main sahi hoon aur tujhe badi affair shaffair ki padi hai...tu na khud toh genius hai aur mujhe distract kar rahi hai...chal now lemme study
Jassi - ohh toh now m distracting u...I know ki tu aajkal kahaan distracted rehta hai
Jogi - tune phir mujhe taunt maara
Jassi - nhi nhi veere main toh bas
(then they heard suri's voice)
Suri - jogi jassi chalo abhi dinner ke liye a jao
Jassi - let's go veere
Jogi - lemme complete this solved paper...only 3 questions r left then I'll come...tu ja
Jassi - r u sure veere
Jogi - haan haan 100% sure
Jassi - chal jaldi ana
Jogi - hmm
(jassi went from there m he starts reading the questions suddenly his mobile phone starts ringing n he saw the caller ID)
Jogi - ria...yeh mujhe kyun call kar rahi hai
(he was about to pick up the call but he remembered something)
Flashback
(After lunch break , In library)
(Jogi was searching for some general knowledge's books when he heard adi's voice)
Adi - really ria do u think that u care for me
Ria - of course I do adi
Adi - ohh really I think I have proposed u in SOTY party n from that day I have been trying really hard to spent some quality time with u but see tum toh busy ho
Ria - it's not like that adi u know na SOTY ka pressure n all upar se momzie has some doubts on me n u know what's the worst part
Adi - what
Ria - dad is also behaving like a typical dad...momzie ne unko bhi apni side par kar lia hai ab main kya karoon
Adi - okk listen I have a plan...let's go on a date (romantically) our first official date
(jogi was burning in anger n jealousy...he was clenching his fists just to calm down his anger)
Jogi (monologue) - Ria say no...tell him that u r busy with preparations...ria plzz mana kar
Ria - I don't think it possible adi
Jogi (monologue)- chalo thodi toh akal baaki hai isme
Adi - I knew it(with anger)
Ria - its not like that tum hi bolo na main ghar par kya bolungi
Adi - bol dena that u r going for group studies
Ria - then momzie will say ki go n study with jassi n jogi phir
Adi - look ria I don't know anything...just tell me clearly r u coming or not
Ria (with a confused look) - okk I'll come
Adi -pakka
Ria - pakka...vaisey hum ja kaha rahe hain
Adi - lakshminagar mein ek naya italian restaurant khula hai wahin chalenge
Ria - okk
(adi hugged her n went from there jogi was fuming in anger so he came to her n asked)
Jogi - tu paagal ho gyi hai
Ria - what happened jogi...why the hell r u screaming
Jogi - ria suna mainey...competition sar par hai n u r wasting ur time wo bhi us adi ke upar
Ria - jogi can u plzz stop ur newfound habbit
Jogi - new found habbit...what do u mean
Ria - I mean ur habbit of eavesdropping
Jogi - listen ria
Ria - u listen to me I know u saved me but plzz this is my life n I can handle it so plzz stay away
(she went from there)
Flashback ends
Present
Jogi - u can handle ur life na toh fine...I don't care tumhe jo karna hai karo
(n he left his phone there n went to have dinner)
(After 3 hours)
11:00 PM
Suri - accha ab tum dono doodh pi lo aur phir padhna
Jogi - ji mummy ji
(they heard a knock on door)
Kulwinder - is waqt kaun kai
Jogi - oh papaji dekhenge tabhi toh pata chalega
Kulwinder - haan toh jaake dekh na
Jassi - main dekhti hoon
(she opened the door...raj n simran entered)
Jassi - mummy ji...nikki aunty aur raj uncle ji hain
Suri - nikki raj bhaisahab inni raat ko...sab thik hai
Nikki - jogi do u know where is ria
Jogi - ji aunty ji(with a shocking look) she isn't at home
Raj - nhi hai wo...if u know anything toh plzz tell us
Nikki - tumne wo party wali raat ke liye bhi jhooth bola tha na
Suri - jhooth kaisa jhoot...jogi nikki ki keh rahi hai
Jogi - nhi who
Nikki - jassi tum bolo he lied na...ria wasn't with u na
Jassi - aunty ji wo...wo...wo
Kulwinder - arey ho kya raha hai...jogi tujhe kuch pta hai...arey koi mujhe kuch batayega
Nikki - who ria ne kaha tha usey dolly se kuch kaam hai toh who ussey milney gayi thi par abhi tak nhi ayi
Jogi (with a horrified look)- iss adi ne phir se kuch ghatiya harkat toh nhi ki
Nikki - adi...jogi what r u saying
Jogi - aunty ji aap ruko
Jassi - veere tu kya kar raha hai
Jogi - adi ko phone
Adi - hllo jogi...r u all right I mean u r calling me toh
Jogi - where is ria
Adi - what...how do I know...r u mad or what
Jogi - dekh jada excuses na maar bol warna mainey tujhe jaan se maar daalna hai
Adi (in stammering voice)-look I don't know anything I have to study so bye
(n he disconnects the call)
Jogi - oye sun
Raj - kya hua jogi
Jogi - he disconnected the call n now his mobile is switched off
Nikki - tumne isse kyun call kiya tha...jogi what's going on
Jogi - aunty wo (suddenly he remembered something) lakshminagar
Raj - lakshminagar
Jogi - yeah uncle ji let's go
Suri - arey par lakshminagar kyun
Jogi - aap chalo toh
(they all goes to lakshminagar)
Raj - we have reached lakshmi nagar...now what tumne poore raaste kuch nhi bola jogi
Jogi(he goes outside n ask to a strangee)- ohh ji yahaan koi naya italian restaurant khula hai
Stranger - ji who peechey ki taraf
Jogi - thanks bro
Raj - italian restaurant but why
Jogi - uncle ji please aap chaliye toh
Suri - haan pehle chalein
Nikki - hope meri beti thik ho warna
Suri - nikki tu shaant ho ja
(they have reached the restaurant)
Kulwinder - yahaan itni bheed kyun hai
Suri - kya pta
(they all went inside n saw ria...she was unconscious n her head was on table)
Raj - ria
Nikki - ria beta open ur eyes
Jogi (to manager)-isey kya hua
Manager - we don't know anything...when she came she was all right suddenly she starts felling dizzy actually kisi ko call kar rahi thi then she fell unconscious
(jogi remembered that she was calling him)
Jogi - gadha hoon main
Raj - aur aapne iski ID wagarah kuch dekha bhi nhi
Manager - she doen't have any ID toh hum police ko call karne wale the but ab aap a gyye hain toh le jaiye apni beti ko
Raj - tum aise kaise
Nikki - raj leave him n plzz shall we leave from here...plzz chalo yahaan se ria ki haalat dekho
(they all came back to their house)
Raj - lemme chk her
Nikki - hmm
(nikki was crying badly)
Suri - nikki tu plzz chup ho ja
Nikki - kaisey ho jau yeh sab meri galti hai
Jogi- nhi aunty ji yeh sab us adi ki wajah se ho rha hai
(raj came there)
Kulwinder - ria thik hai na
Raj - nahi if m not wrong toh kisi ne usey bohot strong drugs di hai aisi drugs jo aapko 24 hours ke liye sula deti hai n its banned too because its injurious to health...agar police a jaati toh
Nikki - toh
Raj - toh wo log ussey rehabilition centre bhej dete because its illegal to consume these drugs
Nikki - what...this is so inhuman I mean how can someone do this to our ria n why
Suri - jogi tujhe pta hai ki yeh sab kya hai
(everybody looked at him)
Jogi (with a sad face)- ji
(To Be Continued)
So here is the first part
Tell me how is it n sorry for not including any jogi ria scenes but next chapter will be full of jogi ria n their cute scenes😃
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