EK KAHAANI MERI ZUBAANI- intezaar - Pg.14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Beautiful!

"Aitbaar"

I really like the words you use!Mere toh dimaag me hi nhi aate 😆

Your poems are so symbolic and engaging.

❤️

Originally posted by: avalonhigh1234

Loved both the poems Janhavi.

The SiRa one could be for both the separations-the first sudden and the second a planned one. both of them was full of pain ,weren't they?

Savita

Originally posted by: FAMS

DD again an excellent work. . .

Originally posted by: daydreamers

A BETTER PLACE

Why is it so strange?

I question always

In the fight of mind and heart

There is always a grave loss...

They say mind over matter

And matter over mind

None of them help

When dice is with time...

They say heart rules logic

They say logic rules emotions

And here we are adding and deleting constantly

To reach a conclusion desired...

Attraction becomes crush

Lust becomes love

Crush happens love happens

Fight happens shit happens

We learn and we let go...

Only if they could tell us

What love was, what war was

What life was and what shit was

If they did, we would have been

At better places

Errr. No.

This would have been a better place

Originally posted by: attubaby

Heyyy hie DD...where was this thread han!! guess i missed it big time 😲...i was just goin through forum pages and stumbled upon here...after ur first poem on frst page, this is the second one m reading...and m so happy i got to read this😃

this is so meaningful...the tiff of mind and heart, art of learning and letting go. questions of love, war, and life are something that even an entire life feels short to reach the answer.

is this for the siutatn of Ram's feeling after Siya goes to second exile? (really no idea, but the first stanza indicated the same)

Originally posted by: attubaby

Just let me know how should I keep updated with your poems. I really dont want to miss anything.