EK KAHAANI MERI ZUBAANI- intezaar - Pg.14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@DD I loved it, especially the last lines and the significance of char kadam. We say when we walk 4 steps a relation is born and isn't it true. 4pillars each step, each pillar , 4 steps, addressing all pillars and a new journey.

24/02/16- DIL KA DIYA

Originally posted by: avalonhigh1234

Beautiful poem.I know you wrote it for Bharat and Mandavi, but while reading it I felt that it would have suited Ram during his separation from sita both the times. It had the same feeling of sadness which he would have felt when Sita was away from him.

Savita

i dont have words ⭐️

It's beautiful. Yes I felt it for Bharat-Mandavi but the lines below made me think of Urmila when Lakshman is hit with Brahmastra

@DD: Beautiful yet again. Same as Savita, for me it suits SiRa and Laxmila too.
Your last 6 lines brings the scene in front.👏
Your word imtihaan reminded me of a good old DD show.

Thank u ramya, shruthi, zubi 😳

hey jaan
lo padh li meinae
short and sweet poem😳
very emotional😭👏
Depicts Mandavi love for Bharat😃