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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The above poetry is from sita's POV...

First she tells her sisters of how a woman is a reason of a family.. U'll get that in first four lines...

The next deals with janaka and sunaina's scene... I have imagined sita telling them...

So the lines are from sita's pov ..

"Tum" refers to the sisters... And then to her parents...

Last two lines are written as a projection into the future of how they'll get accustomed to this change in their lives...

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

its beautiful

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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: attubaby
mast siggy- u a KP fan

No 😆

I came across this line on aditi gupta's Instagram photo for the first time...

And after that I heard kp saying it many times...

So no clue whose copyright it is 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Navya,charvi,aayushi, zubi,krish- thank u guys 😳

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey jaan this is far better than your symbolism😉
You have covered one of the beautiful scenes from yesterday's episode😃
keep writing more poems you are a⭐️ in writing poems

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avalonhigh1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hi DD loved the flow of the poems .Reading poetry is one of my favorite pass times. Pls keep updating regularly.

Savita

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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@manas isliye toh symbolism ka aadhe se jyada bhaar shruthi par diya hai 😉 😆

@savita thank you dear... Yes I'll update them daily 😛

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

@DD I loved it, especially the last lines and the significance of char kadam. We say when we walk 4 steps a relation is born and isn't it true. 4pillars each step, each pillar , 4 steps, addressing all pillars and a new journey.

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Ramyalaxmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@DD: Its so beautiful. From ur explanation these lines
"Kal ko na jaanu mein

Honge kaha tum aur main

Saath rahu ya na rahu

Mashaal jalaate rehna tum"
seems to be for Janak-suinana to sita but when I read I thought Ram to Sita.
Excellent👏

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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ramyalaxmi
@DD: Its so beautiful. From ur explanation these lines
"Kal ko na jaanu mein
Honge kaha tum aur main
Saath rahu ya na rahu
Mashaal jalaate rehna tum"
seems to be for Janak-suinana to sita but when I read I thought Ram to Sita.
Excellent👏

Its sita to her parents...

The poetry is from sita's POV...

But again one can have many interpretations and that's the beauty of words 😉

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