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Naam Main Kya Rakha Hai

@darkchocolates

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

WOW!!!!

So happy that you are writing poems for SKR as well.

It's beautiful...very nice.

And...Congratulations for becoming an IF Dazzler.

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radianteyes.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Hi Janvi di
Lovely poem
I write poems too , and have already written two
Will post them shortly
And yes will wait for these beautiful updates .

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attubaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

wow...I loved your poem...plz keep writing..wonderful..👏

will u be posting here poems related to sequences and the feels specific to life situations for siya-ram, Lakshmila or random bful poems😊

Wats ur name?

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attubaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

And you found your singer ...guess who ?
Our very own manas 👏😆 go for it Manas !

@manas: u a singer too!!

ladki talent ki dukan h😆😃

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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: attubaby
wow...I loved your poem...plz keep writing..wonderful..👏
will u be posting here poems related to sequences and the feels specific to life situations for siya-ram, Lakshmila or random bful poems😊

Wats ur name?

Thank you!!!!

As this is SKR the poems will be related to what is shown... The one I wrote is for the scene of mithila sisters in the tent...

It will be date wise... The best scene will earn a poetry 😉

Am janhavi...

U may call me janhavi/Jan/janu/DD.

Many call me DD...

Choose as per ur preference...

May I know ur name?

Edited by daydreamers - 8 years ago

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attubaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Okay..thanks DD for telling the scene related to the poem..😊

I lyk myself to be called here on IF as Attu..😃

eagerly waiting for your next creation😊

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: daydreamers

😛

🤣

VM corner tera hi h na? Ab bhugat.. 😆

hey jaan not fair ya😆
mein tumhari pm padhne ja rahi hu😃

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: attubaby

@manas: u a singer too!!

ladki talent ki dukan h😆😃

@bold attu tu bhi chidarahi ho mujhae😆😆
singer hu music composer nahi tum log bhi na🤣

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zubi_23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

its too good yar😊

beautiful👏

keep writing😆

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daydreamers

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

23/02- ROSHNI

Milkar ek diya jalaye

Andhere ko durr bhagaye

Reh lo chahe bhavan ya van

Ghar bana lo usko tum

Tum se shuru tum pe Khatam

Karlo ek nischay tum

Jalte raho baati jaise

Roshan karo sansaar tum

Kal ko na jaanu mein

Honge kaha tum aur main

Saath rahu ya na rahu

Mashaal jalaate rehna tum

Wajood mera ehsaas hai

Usse na mitao tum

Soch soch ki baat hai

Andar jhaank ke dekh lo tum

Hum saath hai tumhare

Akela na samjho tum

Chaar betiyaan,chaar deeware,

Chaar stambh , chaar kadam

Chaar ghadi aur chaar varsha

Beet jaenge do pal mein...

Edited by daydreamers - 8 years ago

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