Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Wow, Jhanvi di...all of these poems are amazing 👍🏼🤗
Being a LakshMila fan, my spl favs are Aahatein & last few lines of AitbaarCompile all these into a book di, i will be one among millions to buy it 😉 😊
Originally posted by: daydreamers
22/02/16- BAAT KAL KIKal ki baat kuch aise sochte raheKal ko Kuch aise dekhte raheBaar baar mudte raheAage bhi kal haiPeeche bhi Kal haiAage dekhne ki wajah na samjhePeeche na mudne se dil dareyDoobey the uss sagar meinBeech majdhaar me phanse raheKoi kashti paar lagaayeHimmat na thi hamariKi yaadon ko bhul jayeIss kashmakash mein raheKi dard sirf humein kyun haiBaat kal ki thiBaat kal ki haiKoi aaj ka waqt toh samjhaye humein...
Originally posted by: attubaby
Arey, it's not just khas, but boht khas👍🏼...Sita Remembering her Ram...it's so beautiful.
Originally posted by: daydreamers
I find it lame 😆. I ges there's a traffic jam and choke up of vocabulary in my mind. 😆 struggled too much to write this but am nowhere satisfied. 😆
Originally posted by: attubaby
A poet does not get satisfied by his or her work considering that he or she has done lots of great works till now and wishes on making the work that excels the previous one.hota h hota h...sometimes u can get jammed😆. Bt dat does nt take away the feel, the intent or the beauty of the poem😳.It is not lame for sure. Kya DD, matlab seriously tumko koi aur word nai mila kya jo lame hi lik diya😆The feel of the goes does not fade away at any time and it's beautiful.
Originally posted by: daydreamers
INTEZAARTu hi basaNazro mein sanamTujhe pau mein saaton janamTu hi samaTu hi dilon meinTu dhadkanTu sara jahanTu hi rahaAshkon mein sajanTeri raah dekhu aathon paharTu hi taranhaTu hi aazad panchi ki puhaarTu baadshahAawam ke sapno kaTu rakhwalaSab ki zindagi kaTeri puja karu aadi anant
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