EK KAHAANI MERI ZUBAANI- intezaar - Pg.14

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Once again I had a writing session @shruthiravi's thread.

She has suggested me open a thread for the same.

Analysis isn't my forte. On the contrary I love to play with words in poetry.

I take this opportunity to thank shruthi once again for encouraging me.

I hope you enjoy this journey with me. πŸ˜ƒ

Browse as per the pg. no.s

22/02/16- baat kal ki- P.1
23/02/16- roshni- P.4
24/02/16- dil ka diya- P.6
27/02/16- Usi raah - P.7
12/03/16- Vaada- P.8
21/03/16- tere sang- P.9
14/04/16- Aahatein- P.9
17/04/16- Aitbaar- P.10
A better place- P.11
Intezaar- P.14



A note to silent readers - feel free to appreciate and criticize. πŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
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22/02/16- BAAT KAL KI


Kal ki baat kuch aise sochte rahe

Kal ko Kuch aise dekhte rahe

Baar baar mudte rahe

Aage bhi kal hai

Peeche bhi Kal hai

Aage dekhne ki wajah na samjhe

Peeche na mudne se dil darey

Doobey the uss sagar mein

Beech majdhaar me phanse rahe

Koi kashti paar lagaaye

Himmat na thi hamari

Ki yaadon ko bhul jaye

Iss kashmakash mein rahe

Ki dard sirf humein kyun hai

Baat kal ki thi

Baat kal ki hai

Koi aaj ka waqt toh samjhaye humein...
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@DD I will comment on this thread. But you will have to manage it as poetry is not at all my forte. πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@DD I will comment on this thread. But you will have to manage it as poetry is not at all my forte. πŸ˜ƒ


Yes shruthi πŸ˜›

I'll try my best...

This is my third show to write poetries... πŸ˜ƒ
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@DD: Its awesome. I can be an appreciator but not a participator
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i am in JaanuπŸ˜ƒ
wow you are a poet too
nice poem yaπŸ‘πŸ‘
come with more poems πŸ˜ƒ
ek kahaani meri zubaani😳
tum toh Shayari bhi likti ho kyaπŸ˜ƒ
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Hey Jaanu ...Beautiful workπŸ‘

@Ramya ...#Mutualfeelings ...All I can do is appreciate πŸ˜‰

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@Manas: So lyrics will be here and r u ready with the composition and singing. Upload as VM and pm meπŸ˜‰
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@ramya, @sruthi- thank you guys πŸ˜ƒ. Agar accha na lage toh criticize bhi karo πŸ˜†
@manas- yes, poetry is my forte.. Analysis comes secondary to me. Have been writing poetries for 3 yrs now... And yes have reserved the best ones in the hope of a song...πŸ˜‰ am hunting for composers and singers for about an year now... πŸ˜†

There are many in my kitty which I reserve for the future... πŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: daydreamers

@ramya, @sruthi- thank you guys πŸ˜ƒ. Agar accha na lage toh criticize bhi karo πŸ˜†

@manas- yes, poetry is my forte.. Analysis comes secondary to me. Have been writing poetries for 3 yrs now... And yes have reserved the best ones in the hope of a song...πŸ˜‰ am hunting for composers and singers for about an year now... πŸ˜†

There are many in my kitty which I reserve for the future... πŸ˜‰


And you found your singer ...guess who ?
Our very own manas πŸ‘πŸ˜† go for it Manas !
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