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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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again riya 😑
but this time kunj is in love with twinkle not like that dhruv right na
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Posted: 8 years ago
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owww tnx for PM again i lov u a lot di!!! aha comin to the update it ws fabbb πŸ‘ bt plz 1 request don't make tht riya 😑 destroy my TwiNj plz
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Thanks to all
will be updating tomorrow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

again riya 😑

but this time kunj is in love with twinkle not like that dhruv right na



heheπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ keep your fingers crossed πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ arent kunj and twinkle meant for each otherπŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phycho

owww tnx for PM again i lov u a lot di!!! aha comin to the update it ws fabbb πŸ‘ bt plz 1 request don't make tht riya 😑 destroy my TwiNj plz


awww love you more dear 😳😳 thank u sooo much !!! hehe yes yes I wont let riya destro anything 😳
thanks
Griffy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6


I stood there and somewhere I knew a tear was finding its way...I didn't want to cry
that's expected from Kunj Sarna. He had a new girl every 2nd week...this wasn't new...no it wasn't..
And still somehow I stood rooted to the spot...
Staring wishing it was a dream wishing that this wasn't the end
End to what?? My mind questioned..but my heart giggled...
"oh u so have a crush on him!??"
" No I don't I wanna go!!"
" well then go'"
I gt angry ..at myself for having stupid feelings..but the thing that baffled me was Riya...
I had hated that girl well now all hatered was gone and all I was left with deep pain and embarrassment after all I had proposed her then boyfriend..

I m sure I looked like a fool when my Chinki shook me
" what are u doing here and why is yr mouth open??? Come on you are late for class god knows where u are now a days u hardly attend any class''

And she went on and on...
She finally caught my hand...and started pulling me right towards Kunj as he was standing near the stairs ...My hearbeats started racing even more...and everything started becoming blurry...I could see him and only him and I kept wondering why I felt so hurt ..what had he done ?
Had he started to affect me so much?
But I heard a scream " Twinkleee!!!!"
My heart knew it was Kunj...and I remember his strong arms holding me
And then ...it all blacked out

...


" is she gonna be fine doctor?? "
" Kunj u are a student yourself...u know it's a simple case of hypoglycemia...she hasn't been eating well I think and her sugar level was low thus making her really weak "
" oh k thanx doctor"

I heard this I had gained consciousness ..but didn't open my eyes.
Still my heart told me that he was staring at me..I imagined his jet black eyes his lovely black eyes ..staring at me...
And then I felt him sit near me...
And then he took hold of my hand... and my heartbeats started racing like never before...

...

I wanted to say
I love you...more than anything ...but something stopped me...
It wasn't the time...
She was peacefully asleep...
I took hold of her hand...
I didn't ever wanna let her go
Why wasn't she eating properly ?
Was it because of me had I mentally disturbed her so much,,,,???
didn't she love me back and yet why every time when she secretly glanced at me
'All her eyes spoke were love for me'.
Why did I feel she belonged to me??
Why in such few weeks silently I had submitted to her why??

We didn't share words but it was as if our heart beats played on the same rhythm and understood every beat of each others
...

He made me feel loved and cared again...
Or maybe I wanted to feel that way..
Somewhere I did want this moment to last forever...
My head was still dizzy but his touch made me feel better...
Was I letting the door open ??... I was falling asleep as if finally my mind finding its peace...he was peace...-----

(3 days later)

I heard whispers around
"what does Kunj see in her'"

"gosh such a behenji"
" is it right he carried her to the hospital?"

So everyone knew
This is so embarrassing
But I had to sit in the class I had missed enough attendance
But they got more worse
" oh she thinks she can get Kunj huh...he is so not falling for her"
" maybe it is just a game he bet with some one "
More and more snickering..laughs.. continued
A tear fell from my eyes
As the class got over I immediately ran out.
Wishing I could close the door again...
...

I saw her run out of the class.
How can my own friends do this to me? Why did they have to mock her like that ?
I felt extremely bad ..

She hadn't talked to me in the hospital .
I thought maybe later she would but now I knew she would never
As if she had closed the door on me
My cell rang again
20 miss calls from Riya
And then a message came on my cell...
" I am sorry for bailing on you 'but I had to go to see my mum and she hasn't been well from the past few days so I haven't been getting out ...but I have to talk about Twinkle and its important"
...



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Cheers
Griffy

Edited by griffy.fz - 8 years ago
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wow it's awesomeπŸ‘ bt tht riya and her classmates 😑 i jst hate them!!! btw tnx for PM n lov ya πŸ€—
Edited by Phycho - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phycho

wow it's awesomeπŸ‘ bt tht riya and her classmates 😑 i jst hate them!!! btw tnx for PM n lov ya πŸ€—


Aww love ya too 😳😳 thankss soo much... sooo sweet of u πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update dear
i think riya might say abt the proposal thing that twink proposed dhruv
and it is so beautiful dear
without speaking but understanding through the eyes
loved it
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