FF. Ariya - The love saga part 11 on page 41 30/11

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Ariya - the love saga
Prologue 

 Pyar ,ishq love ye sab bas shabd hi to the mere liye jinka mai aksar majak banaya karta tha.. Par tumse mila to maine in shabdo ko jana hi nahi balki jiya bhi hai. Har jasbat jiya maine tumhari wajah se bhatak hi to raha tha bematlab bemaksad sa is duniya ki bheed mai tumne mujhe rasta diya.tum or mai alag kaha hai.ek hi to hai hum..wada karo mai rahu na rahu.tum rahogi mere liye humare liye.tum muskuraogi par hasi humari hogi. Saanse tum logi par jiyenge hum dono. Ab arjun or riya alag kaha ab hum ariya hai.or humesha rahenge.hai na. Promise me riya tum meri jaan ka khayal rakhogi. 
 I promise you arjun..hum jiyenge.ek dusre k liye ek dusre k sath.ha hum arjun or riya nahi ariya hai .or mai is nam mai hi nahi is duniya mai bhi arjun or riya ko alag nhi hone dungi. Hum sath jiyenge sath mai hasenge. Na hum harenge na hi humara pyar. Hum akhiri saans tak sath honge. Tum isse aage na kuch bologe na sochoge.
Bus hum or hum na mai na tum.na arjun na riya bas 
          ARIYA



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Here is character sketch
Arjun Rawte - same as show but after riya's  death he close last gate of his heart .he don't believe in love any more..he think love only give pain .n whom he love always leave him. but inside his heart he is craving for riya always..recently he meet a girl who is Riya's lookalike 
Sameer ayesha shree chotu Lisa sakshi  riya same as show
Riya singhaniya - A mysterious girl .look alike of riya. Always wear black dress. Never smile . smart daring n fearless girl. She herself choose lonely and smileless life..
Viren singhaniya - riya's father n new business man in Mumbai. He possessed mysterious eyes..very calm ..love riya a lot .he want her to be happy .
Kanika singhaniy KANU - she is Riya's mother n a house wife. Love her husband n riya alot.want her to get her happiness. 

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Oye hoye! Kya baat he! Wah wah! Jaldi update karo, nyc start.. Interestinggg..
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Interesting prologue and nice CS
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interesting. continue soon.
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Amzng cs nd prolouge mini didu
ab aap jaldi updt kijiyeh
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Part 1 




location a deserted jungle
Ek ladka Jo bahut ghayal hai ek ladki ki god mai sir rakh kar leta hai. Aisa lag raha hai shayad jinda bhi na bache. Ladki use pakad ke baithi hui hai.or khub jor se roye ja rahi hai.usne black lehnga pehna hai.
Gi - ye sab meri wajah se hua hai.mai aayi hi q tumhari jindgi mai .na mai aati na hi ye sab hota.mujhe unki baat nahi maanni chahiye thi.
Uske ansu ladke k gal par girte hai .Ladka hosh mai aata hai.
Boy - shh..aisa mat bolo. Tumse hi to meri jindgi jindgi thi.tumhi to is tute dil ka sukun thi.ek tum hi to ho jise mujhe kabhi nahi choda.
Uski ankhe fir kamjori se band hone lagti hai or WO past mai kho jata hai.
Past
Ak admi khali sunsan sadak par yuhi chala ja raha hai.use kuch nhi pata kaha ja raha hai.kaha Jana hai.
Boy - akhir meri hi jindgi q aisi hai.q itna sab mere hi sath hua.jise bhi chaha wo mujhse dur chala gaya.or mai har baar is duniya mai apne akelepan or tute dil ke sath reh gaya. Ek Sapna kya dekha aayi baba ne mujhe thukara diya.u paraya kar diya jaise mai kabhi unka kuch tha hi nahi. Fir bhi mai sambhla apna Sapna pura kiya is desh ki sewa ka majburon ki madad ka unhe nyay dilwane ka. Isi raah par mujhe bhai se badkar dost mila.laga jindgi fir muskurane lagi.fir mujhe mera pehla pyar roshni mili laga jindgi puri ho gayi.ek pariwar tha mera bhi mai sam or roshni. Fir ek burai se ladne ka kya faisla liya .meri duniya hi ujad di us rakshas ne.us din sirf patni ka rishta hi nahi khoya dost bhi kho diya.ek bar fir mera pariwar
Mujhse chin gaya. Mai bas badla lene ko hi to jee raha tha..jo meri jindgi mai pyar khushiyan nahi thi to maine in sab se nata tod hi to diya tha .fir q aayi wo ek nayi ummed nayi jindgi bankar.q mujhe hasaya.q mere bajan dil ko jan di.q kaha ke meri jeet hogi. Is duniya mai kai logo ko jitane wala ye arjun apni hi jindgi ki har jung hara hai. Use bhi kho diya.q ayi wo jab mujhe chodkar jana hi tha.wo bhi sabki tarah jhuti or selfish thi..sabka socha ek mera hi nahi kaise jiyunga uske bina .kaise kategi ye jindgi bin uske. Kuch nahi hai ye pyar .bas ek shabd hai.jo sirf dard deta hai.kam se kam sik se nafrat mujhe jinda to rakhti hai.par unse pyar mujhe har pal marta hai.looking at sky
Bahut manti thi na dono tumhe.kaha ho tum bolo aisa kya bura kiya jo mujhe humesha ye dard or tanhaiyan mili.agar tum such mai ho to kya Laura sakte ho mera pyar.nahi na qki tum ho hi nahi.ha ha ha 
Itne mai ek Badi haweli se ek ladki nikalti hai.usne black lehnga chili pehna hai.neck touch dupatta hai.hathon mai black chudiyan.kano mai silver denglers or uski slim waist mai silver waist chain hai.or pairon mai payal.uski ankho mai ansu hai or chehre par udasi.par galo par dekho to lagta hai uski smile bahut pyari hogi dimple smile. Wo jungle ki taraf jati hai ek gana gate hue.arjun ka dhyan uski taraf jata hai
WO gaaa rahi hai

hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar
Arjun bhi uska picha karta hai
suna gam judayi ka, uthate hai log
jane zindagi kaise, bitate hai log
din bhi yaha to lage, baras ke smman
hume intzar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar
Arjun ko rosh or riya ki death had aati hai or uske bad unki yad mai bitaya ek ek pal

tumhe koi aur dekhe to jalta hai dil
badi mushkilo se phir sambhlata hai dil
Arjun ko hostage case or groom murder case mai unlogo ka riya par flat hona yad ata hai
kya kya jatan karte hai, tumhe kya pata
ye dil beqarar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
Arjun ko riya ko goli lagna yad aata hai

magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse .

Arjun apne khayalon or riya ki yad se bahar aata hai to use waha koi nahi dikhta.par use aisa lagta hai jaise riya uske bahut pas thi..

Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago
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Amazing updt didu
so emotional
aapne toh mujhe rula diya
can easily feel arjun's pain
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Awesome, Amazing! Next part super jaldi..
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emotional one
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon