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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: firefliesstar

Yaaar
U r very bad
U kno me kal se ye story padh rhi boon
Poore do din laga kr i read all the parts
I wsnt able to move away frm it
Itni daat khani padi

But this story yaar
Itsss sooo good
Pyaar ka imtehaan seriusly
It proves ki love me kitni bhi mushkile ho bt atlast u get a happily ever after

Nyo k saath mast hua hahahahha
That marbles vala scene hehehehhe

I loved all the images and animated gif u atatachd
Padhte padhte feel aa rhi thi pics dekh kr
Jese koi movie chl rhi ho

Maddy manik ka cousin hahahha
Mukti and maddy hahahahhaha
Name sochna padhega dono ka hena
Mmm
Mukyam
Hahahha
Sorry
Or kuch smjh nhi aya

That o2 manager huh idiot
Bt uski mast dhulai ki

Dad malhotra is such a tease sooo good to see him
Kaash nandu nd dad k beech daugthr-father vala realtion ho

Worth watch hoga unka encouter n cute convo

Cabir nd his teases hahahahha
I love him a lot

That toast vala surp woww
Nd manik to humesha sb kuch itni ache se plan krta h
I loved the secret room
Mujhe bhi chahiye esa room

Loved those letters vala idea

Such a good story
Continue soon



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This is for you... welcome to this Page.

Thank You So Much Smiley Face, Emoticon for your Appreciation and this
for that Daant jo is story ki wajha se tumhe pari... I hope os daant ka effect kuch kum hogya hoga ab tak
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its a beautiful update...
Manik's cute si jealousy...
Nandini's cute way to pacify manik...

Sorry for late comment actually i was out of station
Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly



Flowers For You Smiley Face, Emoticon

This is for you... welcome to this Page.

Thank You So Much Smiley Face, Emoticon for your Appreciation and this
for that Daant jo is story ki wajha se tumhe pari... I hope os daant ka effect kuch kum hogya hoga ab tak


heheh
nahi yaar❤️
story itti achi h daant ka asar pehle hi chala gaya
nd dis hug
awww
thnkuuu
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey
Awsmstic chapter...

MANAN romance was so cute...
Manik's dad is no less than cabir... Hehehehe...
He knows everything ofcz senior malhotra...
MANAN teasing sessions were bliss...
So cute and the best part was when manik kissed on her finger...
Loved it...

Update soon

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute chapter...
Loved the father son duo bonding and joking ...

Manan and their cute si noK jhok ❤️

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...
manan r soo cute...
thanks for pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Hehehe manik's dad teasing him
Oops nandu ne bhi nhi choda... Bechare ko itna jealous kr diya
Manik taking badla lol
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago



How are you all my buddies.Big Hug Please Smiley Face, EmoticonExamz walooo kaisa chal raha hai sub kuch... mera to kafi bura haal hai ajjkal... and baqi sub... howz life chaling?😆

so kis kis ko update chayeye...

Sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 56 (a)



When Manan were busy in their romance ,,,, they heard some fake coughing voice. And after some time someone placed a hand on Manik's shoulder who was covering Nandini's body like a 2nd skin.


Manik with bad face tuned his head and saw Mukti there.


She was trying very hard to control her laugh.

Manik with a lil shy expression: Hmmm Mukti... tu yahan is waqt.


Mukti replied with smile: Haan Manik... Main yahan is waqt...Jaise tu yahan iss waqt.

Manik: haan tou main to yahan... ( at same time Nandini with wide eyes hold his hand to stop him).


Mukti with her naughty expression: Tu to yahan kya Manik...?


Manik lost his words but then again after getting his senses back: Haan wo main yahan Nandini ko dekhna aya tha... WO Dad se baat karne k baad,,,,,,,,,,,, isey yahan dekha to socha poch loon k yahan akeli kya kar rahe hai.


Mukti again with mocking smile: Ya right Manik... Like uncle ne tujhe subha kisi kam se bheja tha with your sweartheart Nandini... hai na? ( she teased them)

Manik: Arey kya yaar mukti tu aur Cabir har time mere peeche hi kyo pare rahte ho... ( now Manik with fake anger) Haan Dad ne hum dono ko ajj bheja so what's your problem in this?

Mukti 1st looked at Nandini's face and then dragged Manik a lil away by holding his hand and said: Kal raat (new year eve pe ) jab tum dono performance k baad gaib hoe they na to os time main ne tum dono ko dekh liya tha... raat mein bhi tum yahan nahi they main ne check kiya tha... To subha... Uncle ne ...tumhain Bheja ... Kaise?

Now Mukti folded her 1 arm on her chest and with other she makes a question sign : Bol na Manik?

Manik got a shock on this info he with wide eyes asked: Tujh... tujhe pata tha?

Mukti: Yuppp... But wo kya hai na mujhe Cabir ki tarahn har time kabab mein haddi banna pasand nahi hai.( she at the end winked at him)

Manik immediately hugged her and said : Thank you in her ear

After breaking this hug they saw Nandini coming towards them.

Nandini: Kya hoa aisi kya secret batein ho rahe haan.

Manik: kuch nahi wo bus

Mukti cut his sentence in mid and said: Arey yaar Nandini tu tension kyo leti hai... Main Manik ko sirf Kal ka aik incident yaad karwa rahe thi... aur waise bhi Manik friend haan mera to is se to main kabhi bhi kuch bhi baat kar sakti hoon... Hai na( she at end asked from Nandini).

Nandini immediately hold Mukti's hand and said: Sirf Manik se kyo tum mujh se bhi kabhi bhi aur kuch bhi baat kar sakti ho.

Then they noticed that Mukti was wearing a swim suite with a gown.

Nandini in surprise: Mukti yeh sub...is time

Mukti: Arey yaar swimming karne ka dil kar raha tha so...

Manik with a smile patted on Mukti's head friendly: Tu nahi sudhre gi.

Mukti replied with her geneuine smile: No.

Mukti: Ok tum log niklo ab yahan se is se pahle k cabir phir se koi idiot question le k a jae yahan.

Manik: Ya we are leaving... lykin tu bhi jaldi a jana nahi to kal terey liye kisi doc ka intezam karna pare ga.

Mukti: Don't worry doc ki zarorat mujhe nahi pare gi.

Manan with a smiling face came back in hall.

Cabir when saw them again together ,,,,,,,itching on his tongue again starts.

He slapped his forehead like frustrated person . Others when heard this slap voice they looked at cabir.

Manik came to them and after watching cabir's epression he said at once in warning tone: Cabir agar phir se tu koi drama start karne laga hai to yaad rakhna is dafa main tujhe nahi choron ga.

Cabir: Yaar acha chal aur kuch nahi kahta mujhe sirf yeh bata... tum dono ka...( he pointed towards Manan) ye Jorh fevicol ka hai kya ?... jo har time ,,,,, har jagha ,,,,, aik sath,,,,, chipke hoe nazar ate ho...



Manik showed him his angry eyes and said: CABIRRR...

Cabir while looking at others asked: kya yaar tum log batao... kitna time hoa tum me se kisi ne Manik ko Nandini k bina dekha... Bolo? ... (others hide their smile on his teasing session.)

Now Cabir asked in loud voice: Arey Bolooo ...

Aliya then stands from her seat and came towards Nandini and said: Actually we don't want to see them separately. They look so cute together.

Navya also came towards them while holding abeer in her arm: Haan aur waise bhi hamein koi shouk nahi hai apni Nandu ko udas dekhne ka.

Now Aryaman also add to light the atmosphere while coming towads them: Haan tumhe nahi pata na Nandini na udas ho k kitni dangerous ho jati hai... Bilkul Bhooki serni ki tarhan( he also enact with his hands and roar like a lion)

Sub hi kuch na kuch kah rahe they to Maddy kaise peeche rahta so he also adds: Ya I remember 2,,,,,3,,, times to main bhi is k hathon se marte marte bacha hoon.

Dhruv with a smile came towards Manik and said: Don't worry guys Buddy ka haal to is se bhi zyada hai... so in dono ko sath sath hi rahne do ... Agar tum ne in k hathon se marna nahi hai to(dhruv warned Cabir)

Cabir now with a smile: Arey to main kab in ko separate karne ka kah raha tha... main to bus yeh janana chah raha tha k yeh jorh fevicol ka hi hai na.

Manik now moved towards Cabir and while placing his arm on his shoulder said while eyeing Nandu: Tujhe savhi mein Janana hai.

Cabir: Hmmm ( he also noticed the naughtyness in Manik's eyes)

Manik: Nahi yeh jorh kisi fevicol ka nahi... merey pyaar ka hai( and he winked at Nandini) You know LOVEEE ka.

Nandini when look that wink she in surprise and shy started looking down while Navya's and aliya side hugged her in affection.

Now Cabir asked: Arey yaar wo tum logon ka koi faida nahi wo meri crime partner kahan gayi.

Manik: wo yahan nahi hai . bahir pool side pe hai...

Cabir: haan tabhi main kahon is discussion me maza kyo nahi aya.Huhhh Muktiii tujhe hamesha ghalat time pe hi jana hota hai.( he said this while looking up).U know os k hote mujhe tum jaisey( he pointed his finger towards his friend) doston ki zarorat hi nahi... Meri sachi Friend,,,,, Meri crime Partner sirf wohi hai...

Others passed a smile to him on remembering all duo's crime/ Masti.



Edited by cute-aly - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
friends 2nd update coz next update me kafi time lag sakta hai... sorry for that... but kya karon examz haaan😕

Part 56 B


Maddy after sometime came towards pool side having a drink in his hand.


He saw her (Mukti)taking laps in water.


Maddy was completely bowled after seeing her beauty. She was looking too hot and sexy in her swim suit .



Mukti when saw him there she asked: Tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ?


Maddy after controlling his senses gave answer to her in his famous tone while pointing towards air: Fresh air U know ( and take a sip from his glass).


Mukti with confusion: Fresh air? Iss time...?


Maddy with smirk: Yaa ... iss time... waise tum yahan is time... aur yeh swimming? Chakar kya hai... Mirchi zyada kha li kya ? jo aisey hotness ko cool karne a gayi ? ( he gave a mocking smile to her)


Mukti now gave an angry glare to him .


Maddy again in his teasing style: ah ah lagta hai hotness kuch zyada ho gayi hai( while pointing at her angry face) bechara pani bhi control nahi kar pa raha and laughed on her.


Mukti started feeling irritated after listening his teaseand laugh so she in with anger filled voice shouted: Lagta hai tum aise nahi mano gey tumhe na sabaq sikhana pare ga... with this she started moving in water towards pool side.


Maddy when saw this he again said mockingly: Areyyy Areeyyy Areyyy kahan a rahi ho...


Mukti with Winning smile : kyo Dar gaye kya? Abhi to main ne kuch kiya bhi nahi ... Tum pahle hi... So Sad Mr Madhyam.


Maddy on this replied back with his famous smirk: Miss Jugli Billi... Maddy kisi se nahi darta ... aur main to tumhare liye kah raha tha... Ab itney chote chote kapron mein tum bahir merey samne ao gi to hotness ka level bht barh jae ga u know... ( and he started laughing on her).


Mukti: Ahhh Maddy ajj tum merey hatho se nahi bacho gey... and she came out of that swimming pool and moved towards Maddy.


Maddy placed his glass on one side and gazed at mukti's wet body.She was looking stunning with those water drops on her beautiful body and her angry face was adding fuel in fire.


Mukti in her anger forgot to wear her gown after coming out and directly marched towards Maddy.


She came near Maddy and in anger grabs his collar and pulled him with a jerk.


Due to this lil jerk Maddy's face came very near to hers . Maddy with intense eyes gazed at her face and then he looked in her eyes which was full of anger at that time.But this closeness started affecting Maddy's senses... there hot breath started mingling with eachother.Even her angry eyes seems to be passionate to Maddy in this proximity.


And this closeness brought a wide smile on Maddy's face.His eyes were continuously moving on her sexy body and with each time it added fuel in his intense state. Mukti with confusion gazed at his smile and then in his eyes and noticed the intensity of his eyes.That was the time when it clicked in her mind that she forgot to wear her gown.She immediately left his collar and moved a lil away from him.


But now Maddy want her near him for some more time so he held his hand and drag her behind a wall.


Mukti with surprise asked: What... what are you doing Maddy...? Yahan kyo laye mujhe...Pagal ho gaye ho kya... Choro... Choro Mujhe...


Maddy thought to enjoy his time with a lil bit teasing so he said while placing his finger on her lips: shhh Wo kya hai na ... Main uncle...I mean Manik k Dad ko koi heartattack nahi dena chahta... ?


Mukti again like a confused kid asked: Meaning?


Maddy now playfully slapped her forehead and said: U Jugli billi ... Apni halat dekho... I know k yahan baqi sub tumhare friends haan... aur un ne tumhe aise( he pointed towards her state) dekha hoga... but Uncle...


On listening this Mukti got his point and again tried to leave from there but Maddy again stopped her.


He placed his hand on her bare waist and pulled her near to his face and then said while looking in her eyes: Waiseee I don't mind ... Tum merey samne aisey rah sakti ho( and he traced a line from her face to her shoulder).


Mukti heard this while looking at him and their eyes locked .


Maddy's finger was continuoualsy tracing lines on mukti's body and due to his warm touch Mukti's Body started melting in his hands.


Unknowingly her body started responding to his warm touch.Her face color changes to pink.Maddy also forgot his surroundings in his emotions.


His face very slowly tilted towards her lips.Mukti closed her eyes in anticipation and her heartbeat started raising. When his lips was just a few cm away from her ... he last time gazed at her face and notice her condition which reflect the same condition as his... He captured her lips very softly... and after placing a small tender kiss on her lips moved his face back and again gazed on her face.


Mukti who was under the spell of emotions wants more... And her facial expression told the whole story to Maddy... He again placed his lips over hers and changed his sweet and tender kiss into a passionate one...


In the overflow of their passion Maddy moved the straps of her bikni down from her shoulder to her arms to gain more area for his passion. After the long passionate kiss on her lips his face tilted a lil more and moved towards her neck and Shoulder...he showered that area with his feather like kisses... and then gave a love bite on her collarbone.


Mukti who got carried away with the flow cameback to the world on receiving this bite... and Abhi's smiling face came infront of her eyes...She smiled on him and thought that she was with Abhi... But when she saw Maddy... she got a shock...After remembering Abhi face... All these things looks like unwanted and unnecessary to her...She unknowingly started feeling guilty ...her eyes got teary... she pushed him back at once... and with teary face blabbered: Nooo Main aisa nahi kar sakti...



Maddy heard her blabber and then saw her teary face... He looked confused after seeing Mukti's condition...


Mukti in hurry picked her gown and left from there while removing her tears.


Next


Tu meri... Main tera ... Update


Edited by cute-aly - 8 years ago
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