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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Guys I am very dissapointed with u all...i am taking so much of time to think and type chapters but u all are not giving two minutes to like and comments...if u wish me not to continue plz text me...I shall stop writing immediately...I can only suggest u to have a happy reading...

CHAPTER 22

Manik reaches nandini village...

Manik: acha yeah dadi sa kaha rehete hai...

At first the people became scared...

Person: kya hua beta...

Manik: unke beti ki dost huin mein...

People started looking one another face...

Person: to tum unke beti ki dost ho...think hai ...who haveli hai unke...

Manik: thanku...

After manik left...

People: pata nahi kya hoga iska...

Manik reaches haveli...

Dadi was sitting at the garden ...

Manik: Bhai mujhe ander Jana hai...

Gunday: tu kon hai...

Dadi: are and do...yeah nandu ke dost hai...

Ai...ganeya issue uska kamra dikha de...

Usse bhi aja rat ko nandini ki sagayi hai...(engagement)

Manik: nandini ki engagement ...kiske sath...

Suddenly a sound came from manik's back...

Arayman: mein...

Manik turns back...

Arayman: hi I am aryaman...mein huin nandini ki mangetar...

Manik is very sad ...his eyes have became teary...suddenly when he looked up...nandini was looking from the window...suddenly a eye lock between them...dadi screams...

Dadi: nandu andar ja...

Nandini scaringly closed the window...

Ganiya: oh bhai ...cholo...

Ganiya takes manik to his room...

After some time...in manik room manik is thinking...

Manik: mujhe kuch bhi karke nandini se batt karni hogi...mujhe janana hoga ki woh mere liya kya feel karte hai...abhi lagta hai Sab thik hai...abhi jata huin...

Manik slowly slowly walks towards nandini's room...

While he has just opened nandini's room...suddenly...someone...pushed manik back holding his color...and took him to dadi...

D gunday: dadi sa yeah ladka...nandu me kamre mein ghus raja that...

Dadi coming towards manik...

Dadi: kuin be...bola tha na nandini she dur rehena...ab galti ki hai toh saja toh milegi...maro re sale ko...

While nandini came inside...and gunday started beating manik and slowly made him bloodly...

Nandini: plz dadi Usse chod do plz...and started crying...she wanted to go to manik but dadi has stopped her...

After sometime...manik has became seriously injured...

Dadi: Bas rukh jao...nandu bol de usse ki agar there aas pas bhi dikha to usse wahi khatam kar denge...nandini ran towards manik an took his head and put it on her lap...

Nandini: plz manik mujhse dur raho...I can't see u hurt...plz

Dadi: nandu chal...aur issue me jao...air thik kar do...aga sagayi bhi dekhni hai use...

At the night...the house is decorated and manik is also ready...but very sad

...aryaman and his family members have arrived...nandu with dadi was coming...she was looking just as a princess...but was likely unhappy...

Dadi: cholo...chaolo...suru karo...suddenly arayman mama ...

A mama: ek minute ...mujhe pata chala hai ki meri hone wali bahu bahut acha gati hai...aja ek gana toh banta hai...kuin dadi ji...

Dadi: ha ha ...hamari nandu toh bahut acha gati hai...nandu gana gaa...

Nandu: par dadi...

Dadi looked at nandu at a very scaring manner...

Dadi: meine bola suru kar...

Nandini nodded her head and worked down the stage...

And started the song...

Mere yaara tera gum hum agar payenge...

Hume Teri hai kasam him sawar jayenge...(looking at manik...and manik looking at nandini..)

Ho...mere yaara tera gum hum agar payenge ...

Hume Teri hai kasam him sawar jayenge...(moving towards manik)

Tu yeah shogat tum...to gamane ki hum ...

Har khushi se mukar jayenge...

Hum mar jayenge...(making a sweet face)

Ho...hum mar jayenge...

And suddenly manik continues...

Chahe dukh ho...chahe sukh ho...

Dil me tujhko pukhara...( moving towards nandini)

Tune humko hai banaya ...( at the back of nandini)

Tune hum ko hai sawara...

Janha ko to rab ka hai mera tuhi hai sahara...(pointing in directly towards nandini)

Bas tera saath hao...(tears rolling from both their eyes...)

Chahe Jo baat ho...

There kehene se kar gayenge ...

Hum mar jayenge...

Haa...hum mar jayenge...

Nandini continues...

Hum mar jayenge...

Ho...hum mar jayenge...and the song over...

Coming soon: nandini and arayman's marriage...

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Guys i am very sorry for so late update... I was in my village and literally busy playing with my small bros and sis... I think u all will forgive me... Waiting for ur affectionate comments... Happy reading...

CHAPTER 23

Nandini was sitting alone in the room when dadi enters...

Dadi: nandini beta...

Nandini: ji dadi ji...

Dadi:dekh beta ... Mein tujhe samjhane aya huin...kal teri saddi hai... Mein chahati huin ki yeh saddi ache se ho gaye...

Nandini:par dadi mujhe time chahiye... Itni jaldi saddi...

Dadi: dekha nandu ... Agar tu chahati hai ki woh... Kya naam hai uska... Manik woh yahan se sahi salamat wapas jaye toh tumhe yeh saadi toh karni padegi...agar tumne saddi ke liye naa kiya toh ussi time uss ladke ki cheeta jalegi... Samjhi... Ab isse tu chetawani samjhe yah dhamki... Teri marzi...

Nandini was literally very scared...

Chal mein teen tak ginungi ... Tu mujhe apna phesla jaldi se suna... Ek ... do... teen...

Nandini(in a hurry and in a scared voice) mein yeh saddi karungi... Mujhe koi problem nahi hai... Par plz manik sir ko kuch matt karna...

Dadi: hosiyaar hai... Sahi jawab...

Chal phir raat mein milte hai... Teri mehendi mein...

Now the scene is in the night... Nandini haveli is decorated with lights ... As a wonder land...

Nandini was sitting when manik came...

Manik:nandini tum kuin kar rahi ho aisa...

Nandini got up neglecting him...

Manik hold her hand when she was trying to go...

Manik:maine kuch pucha tumse... Mujhe tumsse baat karni hai

Nandini: par mujhe ap se koi batt nahi karni hai...

Nandini left the palce ... Manik is upset...

Now in the function ... Nandini's mahendi function has already started ...

Manik is standing quitely ... While dadi arrive to manik

Dadi: ganne ka bahut shauk hai na tujhe... Chall aja tu ganna gayegi... Aur tera satth degi yeh ladki... Yeh bahut badi kya kehete hai usse singer hai...

Chalchal aya...

Suno suno ... Nandini looked at dadi... Aj hamare liye manik ji ek gana gaenge... Manik ji suru karo...

Suddenly manik's eyes was filled with teary... As they so that he loves nandini so much...

And manik started singing

Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor(pointing towards nandini)
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki(standing at back of nandini)
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor(tears rolled down both their eyes)
Kheenche teri dor...

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore(dadi is looking at manik)
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor(it seemed like manik is calling nandini)
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen(at the girl continues but it seemed like nandini was dedicating this for manik)
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein

Ho.. tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage hain(manik trying to tell nandu how much he loved her)
Himmat ke tukde bator
Ho bhaage zamaane se(manik looking at dadi)
Chhup ke dabe paanv jaise koi chor
Jaise koi chor...

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore(aryaman looking at nandini's teary eyes had a doubt)
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore.. (repeats)(manik angrly left the fuction... )

Precap: aryaman to know about nandini and manik's love...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

plz cont...hope aryaman in dono ki shadi ke liye man jaaye

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zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Amazing part.
Hope they vlbe together.
Song part was very emotional

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

guys i m very happy that u all liked my plot... here is ur next update... enjoy the chappy😉😃... waiting for ur precious comments...

CHAPTER 24

the next the... on the day of marriage... nandini was standing on her balcony while manik entered her room very angrily and hold her hand and forcefully took her to the garden...

manik: nandini cholo...

nandini:ap mujhe kahale kar ja rahe hain...

and they reached the garden...

manik: nandini wht hppened to u... kuin kar rahi ho aisa tum...

nandini: kya kar rahi huin sir

manik: yeh saddi... tum kya sacch mein chahati ho ki yeh saddi ho gaye...

nandini: yes sir... or ap kuin nahi chahate hain ki meri saadi kisi aur se ho gaye...

manik: kuin ki mein tumse...

nandini:ap mujhse...

manik: kuch nahi... mujhe bas tumhari chinta hai...

nandini looked at manik and instantly she started ignoring manik and wanted to left the place so shestarted walking...

manik: nandini listen to me... nandini...

but nandini kept walking without paying attention...

manik:nandini plz ruko... nandini plz... nandini.. i love u... and the music in thebackground

Chhuteya na chhoote mosey ( and suddenly fowers fall on both of them... )
Rang tera dolna
Ik tere baajo duja(nandini stopped walking)(all are still)
Mera koi molna
Bolna mahi bol na(manik walked to nandini and turned her)
(eyelock)Bolna mahi bol na

Mm.. Mmm..

manik: tell me nandini... do u love me...

Tere liye aaya main toh tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere nal jindadi bitavaan( nandini is silent)
Kadi naiyo chodna
Ishq di dor na(both are looking at each other)
Saare chadh jaayein mahi
Tu na chodna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

when both are looking at each other... it is seen that behind the bushes aryaman was listening to her

and suddenly nNdini reminds what dadi has told her

manik:bolo nandini... kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho...

nandini: no... mein apse pyaar nahi karti... apne soch bhi kaise liya ki mein apse pyaar kar sakti huin... its impossible... bhul jayeye mujhe... or plz jitni jaldi ho sak yeahan se chlae jayeyeh...

telling this nandini ran to her room...

aryman is shocked to listen nandini answer at he left to the preparations...

manik is heart broken and is very depressed...

manik walked to his room and started packing his bags...

aryaman enters manik room

aryaman: excuse me... ap kaha ja rahe hain... plz aj saddi tak rukh jaiye...

manik: nahi yaar kam hai...

aryaman: nandini bhi yahi chahati hai...

manik looked up...

manik: thik hai par shrif saddi tak... jaise hi tum dono mandap pe baithe mein chala jaunga...

aryaman: ok bro...

aryaman walked down... his mother took him aside...

a mom: beta kya hua sab thik hai na... tu yeh saadi karna toh chahata hai na...

aryaman: yes mom... of course... nandini jaise beautiful ladki se kaun saadi nahi karna chaata...

a mom: thik hai beta... chal pandit ji aya gaye hain...

precap: nandini and aryaman's marriage... manik to leave the place...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

plz cont and try to make dadi realize that she was wrong

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Mamiza

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

The update was very nice
Wow finally manik confessed
Am sure nandu will also confess and Aryaman will make her confess
Nandu's dadi is a dangerous woman
But ur prolongue was really confusing
Tc
Update soon
With lots of love and hugs

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

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hey keep reading my story... soon u will know about my prologue

and thanku guys for ur comments and i am sure i will put all the things that u all have suggested me... keep reading

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Posted: 8 years ago

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guys here is ur next updates... enjoy the chappy... waiting for ur precious comments...

CHAPTER 25

AT the night in nandini's marriage...

nandini was beautifully dressed as a bride... and was the most beautiful bride from all...

but on her marriage there was not a single smile on her face... her eyes was searching for manik... and suddenly he got to see manik with his bag...

manik was looking at him and same as nandini... and suddenly aryaman. came...

aryaman: hey nandini looking gorgeous... cholo pandit ji bula rahe hain...

aryaman took nandini to the mandap... and both of them sits...

manik seeing them both sitting together decided to leave... he took up his bag... and left the place...

nandini's eyes behind the ghughat rolled down tears...

and suddenly pandit...

pandit: bar badhu ko barmala pehenaye...

and aryaman puts the barmala to nandini...

pandit: ab badhu bar ko pehenaye...

nandini was standing still she cannot take her hands up...

aryaman: nandini... and he put off his ghunghat... and saw the tears...

nandini kuin kar rahi ho tum yeh sab... u know meine aj tak tumhare ankhon mein woh pyaar dekhna chahi hai jo meri ankhon mein bachpan se hai... and aj meine woh pyaar dekha hai... phark shrif itna hai ki woh pyaar mere liye nahi hai... woh pyaar manik ke liye hai... phir kuin kar rahi ho yeh saddi... kuin barbad kar rahi ho tin tin jindigiyon ko... kuin nahi bol deti tum manik se...

dadi is shocked... and suddenly aryaman turned towards dadi...

aryaman: dadi ap ko kya lagta hai ki nandini sach mein mujhse saddi karna chhati hai... nahi woh shirf ap se darti hai aur kuch nahi... kya ap nahi chahate ki nandini khush rahe... i am sorry dadi mein yeh saddi nahi kar sakta... sayad apko nandini ki khushi nahi chahiye par mujhe chahiye...

nandini (while nandini was shocked) tum meri nahi ho... tum kisi aur ki ho... gayo nandini gayo... rokh lo manik ko...

and hearing this nandini got very happy and ran from the mandap... (let me remind u all about their first meet same scene)... and nandini is running and running and running... suddenly he got to see manik walking with his bag...

nandini: (shouted) sir... akele jaoge yah mujhe bhi le gaoge...

manik turned back...

nandini: sir... i love u... manik becaming very happy... give a pose as saharukh khan does in ddlj... opening his arms for nandini...

again nandini ran to manik gave him a tight hug... and both shouted...

we love each other...

precap: dadi to reach the place...