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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

GUYS I AM OUT OF COLD NOW...AND ALSO I CANT WAIT FOR THIS UPDATE...DO READ AND COMMENT WEATHER U LIKE IT OR NOT...

CHAPTER 16

Nandini met a severe accident with the car and fainted down with lots of blood...

Man: koi ambulance ko bulao...

Another man pick up his phone and called hospital...

A man: hello city hospital send a ambulance immediately...

Msnik in his office...in a meeting with cabir multi aliya soha

Manik: so guys i very happy ki kappor and sons ka tender Hume mila hai ...this is just because of nandini...

Cabir: bhsi yeah nandini abhi kaha hai kab she office nahi ayi...

Manik:won yahi hai...

Cabir: nandini bhoot ban gayi...

Manik: oh shut up cabir...yaha MATLAB mere ghar pe hai...

Cabir: ohho him tum ek bunglao mein band ho...

Suddenly manik phone ring...

Manik: hello manik malhotra here...

Receptionist: sir do u know nandini murty..

Manik: yes any problem...

Receptionist: sir she has gone through a severe accident...plz come urgently...

Manik: kya nandini ka accident ...I m coming immediately...

Harshad and soha found talking...

Harshad: sis muje ASA kuin lahta hai ki is accident ke piche tera hath hai...

Soha: ur right bhsi...ye San meine kiya hai...accident itna severe hai ki nandini me bachne ka no chance...an manik shrif mera hai ...shirf mera...

Manik reached the hospital ...

Manik: mam manik malhotra ...

Receptionist: room no 25 sir...

Manik: thanks...

Manik rushes towards the room and waited for the doctor to come out...

After five minutes ...doctor is out..

Manik: what happened doctor every thing OK...won thin toh hai...

Doctor: dekhiye Sir ...inkacondition bahut critical hai ...bachne me chances bahut kam hai...

Manik: much bhi kijeye mere nandini ko Bach ligiye plz...

Doctor: I will try my best...but now I need 2 bottles of blood because she lost at least 1.5liters of blood in the accident...

Manik: mein dunga blood...

Doctor: apka blood group ..

Manik: AB+...

Doctor: but she needs AB -

As u know AB- is rarely available ...yeah abhi hamare hospital mein nahi hai...humane safe pas me hospital she puch liya hai...kisi me pas bhi blood available nahi hai...we have to bring it from our main centre...but it is very far who will go there????

Manik: I will go and bring there blood

Doctor: but jaldi...we don't have much time to save her...

WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO NANDINI...

WILL MANIK SAVE HER...

SEE IN MY NEXT UPDATE...

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Cooki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Wonderful update dear...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

CHAPTER 17

Manik start his car...and drove at the full speed...

Manik: muje kuch bhi karke emergency blood center se blood lana hoga..

I have to save nandini...

And a beautiful song flows in the background...

Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye
Tujhpe kitna mujhe pyaar aaye
Aansuon se likh doon main tujhko
Koi mere bin padh hi naa paaye

Yoon rahun chup, kuch bhi na bolun
Barson lambi neendein so loon
Jin aankhon mein tu rehta hain
Sadiyon tak wo aankhen na kholun

Mere ander khudko bhar de
Mujhko mujhse khaali kar de (x2)...

And suddenly the car stops down...

Manik: abhi yeh car ko kya hua...

Manik gets out of the car...and checks out yhe engini...

Manik: oh set yeh engine toh pura kharap ho gya hai...kya karron mein ab...

Manik starts calling taxi...

Manik: taxi taxi...

No one stops ... Manik: ab mein kya karrun ...

No muje kuch toh karna hoga...

And manik turns and starts running speedely...

Soha was coming from that side..

Soha : mainik...what happened ...why are u running...

Manik: muje emergency blood centre mein jana hoga...for saving nandini...

Soha in her mind : kuch bhi ho gaye...mein tumhe kabhi bhi blood centet mein pahuchne nahi dungi...

Amm..manik tum mere sath auo ...mein tumhe chod deti huin...

Manik: thanks...

Manik sits inside the car..

Manik: chalo...

Soha drives..

After some time...

Manik: soha hum kaha ja rahe hai...yeh kaun sa rasta hai..

Soha: yeh shortchort hai...

Manik: ok...

Afer half an hour s...

Soha stops the car in a very slient place...

Manik: hum kaha hai soha...

Suddenly some goons attack on manik..

Soha: sorry manik muje tumhe blood lane se rokna tha...

Manik: let me go ..soha...kuin kar rahi ho tum asiya..

Soha: because I love u...air muje USS nandini ko hamesha me liya tumhari life se nikalna hoga...

Manik: tum nandini ki much nahi bigad sakti..

Soha: dry baby kuinki...nandini ko Marne she koi nahi bacha sakta...boys le jau manik ko aur aj ki raat se pehele isse mat chodna...nandini should die today...

HOW WILL MANIK GET OUT FROM HERE...

WILL MANIK BE ABLE TO SAVE NANDINI...

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Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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Nidhibansod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

😔 haiii ab kya hoga, plzzz next update fatafat dedo yar.. N ya its nice part, but plz next part jaldi...as soon as possible

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

CHAPTER 18

Manik in the building...

Manik: muje kuch bhi karke yahan we Jana hoga...

Manik remembers the nailcutter nandini has given to him in the mrng...

In the mrng...

Nandini: sir ap yeh apne pocket mein rakhiye...

Manik: ab mein iss nail cutter ka kya karon...

Nandini: sir ap ke horrorscope mein aj likha hai ki koi metal ki chig apne pas rakhiye..

Manik: nandini mein ye sab mein nahi manta...

Nandini: plz sir...mere liye...

Manik: ok...

Back to the present...

Manik very difficulties trues to take out the cutter frm his pocket...

Manik: common nikal jai...

And however manik successfully take out the nail cutter...

And tried to open his hands with the help of the blade...

And he was successful...

Manik: thank god nikal gaya...

Muje jaldi se yahan se nikalna hoga...

He slowly slowly went out ...he saw that the gunda logs are bisy in cosumption of alcohol and are not paying any attention towards him...

Seeing a chance manik runs away...

Soha arrives and sees manik' s absense...

Soha: oh god yeh manik kaise bahg agya...tum sab log kya kar rahe the...idiots of the first order...

Soha calls to harshad...

Soha: bhai ap ko mere ek kam karna hoga...

Harshad: wht...

Soha narrates the plan ...

Next plot os in the hospital...

In nandini's room...no body is there...it is seen that somebody entered the room from the window...and it is harshad...he comes slowly and just take out the oxygen mask of nandini...

After 5-10min a nurse came inside...she immidiately called the doctor

Doctor: oh no yeh kaise hua ...inka oxygen pipe nikal kaise gaya...

Nurse: pata nahi sir..

Doc: achi nind wali injection jaldi doo...

Nurse gives the injection and the doctor inject it to nandini...

Doc: oh god ...yeh manik ji kaha raha gaye...aur dare karenge toh nandini ji ko koi nahi bacha sakta...

It is seen that manik has got the blood and is coming frm the corridor running...

Manik: sir blood...

Doctor: sir i dont think ki woh ab bachegi...

Manik: wht happened doctor..os every thing ok..

Doctor: kisine unke oxygen pipe nikal diya tha...

Manik: soha..main tumhe chodunga nahi...

Doctor: we will do the surgery...but see need prayers...pray to god...only he has the power to save her...

WILL GOD HELP MANIK...

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Amazing part.
Thnks for the link

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Nidhibansod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Superb... Haaa finally manik bhag nikla vaha se... Ab nandu ko bhi jaldi jaldi thik kar do...

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

CHAPTER: 19

Manik in front of the idol in hospital...

Manik: u know...mein kabhi nahi manta tha ki bhagwan hote hai...

Nandini hamesha keheti thi ki uske sath hamesha uske bhagwan hai jo usse kuch nahi hone denge...aj wahi nandini life or death ke bich mein hai...doctor ne kaha ki nandini shrif ap ke ashriwad se thik ho payegi...u know jab mein chota tha toh mere mom muje pariyon ki kahani sunati thi...muje bhi lagta tha ki mera life mein bhi kabhi ase pari ayegi ...i got her...woh nandini hai...ap toh kuch bhi kar skate hai na toh please nandini ko bach ligeye...please god please...

Operation is over doctor is out...

Manik: kya hua doctor...is everything fine...nandini thik toh hai na...

Doctor is looking serious...

Manik: tell something doctor...i am getting nervous...

Doc: now she is out of danger...unhe hoss ane ke bad hi hum unhe discharge denge...but yaad rakhiye ek coti si chot bhi unke liye dangereoua ho sakti hai...take utmost care of her...

Manik: may i meet her...

Doc: yah sure...

Manik:(inside the room...sitting near nandini) dekha nandini aj tumhare bhagwan ne tumhe bach liye ...ab tum jaldi se thik ho gayo...i will take u home...

And after sometime it is seen that there is some movement in nandini...

Manik: doctor doctor...

Doc: yes why happened...

Manik: there is some movement...

Doctor started checking nandini

Doc: good news Mr manik she has regained her sense...itne jaldi sense ana is truely a miracle...sayad apke pyaar je liye yeh maut se bhi ladh kelar wapas ayi hai...

STORY WILL BE CINTINUED SOON...

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