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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER 35

After one year...
Scene starts with a young man of nearly in 30s was jogging wearing a white tee-shirt , blue track pant and sports shoes... He has his earphones attached to his ears... Sweating all over after a intense workout he reached a house...
The house looked as if a newly built one... With a glaze... Covered with glass... With a swimming pool in the forefront...


This was his house...as he stood in front of the house taking a upward vision


Ok... So now he enters into the house..the house was decorated with flowers beautiful furnitures small glasses... And dragged his towel outside moving on his face and cleaning all the sweat and dirt...
He moved his eyes to the nearby table... And he was little bit shocked...
Man: shivani... Shivani... Shi...
Before he could complete a girl of almost 25 was standing in front of him leaning on the wall side wise... Her hands crossing each other... Dressed in bluejeans with blue sleeveless top... Curly hair... Hazel eyes filled with deep black kajal...


And as we see the expression in tha man's face we can surely get that she was shivani whom he was calling...
But to out utter surprise shivani is someone whom we know... Yes we know her...she is non other than...


Yes... Our nandini... And she is alive... But what she is doing here... Ok so now shivani is continuously starring at the man...
Shivani: kuin gaala phad rahe ho...
Man: where is my coffee
Shivani: oh hello... Mein koi tumhari servant nahi huin... Honge tum kunj sarna... Mein bhi shivani huin... Apna kam khud karo...
And giving a striff answer shivani walks out of her rooms pushing all her hair back with her hands...
Kunj: iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta...
After a few minutes shivani screams to kunj who was getting ready for his office... Yes he was a big business man who is back to Mumbai for some of his official work... He has his bungalow at kolkata and all propety also... And shivani is with him since a year...
Shivani: kunj meim mandir ja rahi huin...
Kunj: jaldi jao... Phir pata chal ki bhagwan tumse milne se pehle hi bhag gaye...
Kunj burst in to laughter...giving shivani a unsatisfying look...

At the temple...
A man of about 30s facing backwards is standing in front of the temple with four of his bodyguards surrounding him... He has kept his eyes covered with deep black goggles so that no one could read his eyes and deep down his feelings... Some of the best builders are standing in front of him... And all are scared too..
Man: i need this place vacant...
Builder: but sir yeh mandir...
Man: mujhe kya phir se samjana padega... Tod do oss mandir ko... Bhagwan jaisa kuch nahi hota... Toh hum yeh land waste kuin kare...
The man took out his goggles and he was non other than manik malhotra..
Manik : infact why don'twe start our work now... Immediately iss mandir ko todo aur hamara building suru kardo...
Immediately a big crowd gathered around Manik and his officials... As they couldn't protest they remained silent at the same time shivani got in to the mandir and saw the crowd she walked there and asked...
Shivani: aunty yeh kya ho raha hai...
Aunt: beti... Yeh saab mandir todne wale hain...
Shivani was shocked...
Shivani :kya... Kuin... Mandir koi todta hai kya...
Aunt:unhe kuch building banani hai...
Shivani looked at manik...
Shivani : iski itni himat... Abhi dikhati huin...
Shivani looked here and there and her eyes stucked to a wooden container containing cow dung...she just dragged the container and she hold it in her hands...
Shivani: yeh lo ...
She threw the container in air and the cow dung splits in at last sticking to manik's face and attire... Yuck... So yuck... Cow dung on Manik 's face... This shocked everyone standing there... Because abhi bahut bura hone wala hai...
Manik: what the f**k... Who the hell did that... Khud samne aa jaye... Agar mujhe mila toh i will not spare him...
Shivani provo: shivani... Character mein aa kar phenk toh diya... Ab kya karegi... Yeh chodega nahi tujhe.. ..
Kat le... Idhar se...
Shivani decided to run... She turned back and while she was moving Manik caught her...
Manik: oh hello...
Shivani stammered...
Shivani: kya woh mujhe bula raha hai... Shivani jaldi chal...
Manik: hey you... Stop...

Apne naseebon mein yaa
Hausle ki baaton mein
Sukhon aur dukhon wali
Saari saugaton mein
Sang tujhe rakhna hai..
Sang tujhe rakhna hai, Tune sang rehna

Meri duniya mein bhi
Mere jazbaaton mein
Teri milti nishani kahin
Jo hai sabko dikhani kahin
Tu toh jaanti hai marke bhi
Mujhe aati hai nibhani kahi
Woh hi karna jo hai kehna

Jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi (x4)

Shivani stops there... Manik makes his way out of the crowd...he felt the same as if he is coming towards his forbidden love... Nandini... But he has already made his way towards hatred and now he couldn't recognize the feeling inside him... The seed of love which has nandini bowed inside manik's heart has died due to hatred and pain...

Manik: kaha ja rahi ho...
Shivani : woh... Woh... Mujhe kuch kam yaad aa gaya hai... Mujhe jana hai...
Shivani tries to move...
Manik: stop... Mujhe aisa kuin lagta hai... Ki yeh sab tumne kiya hai...
Shivani provo: pakdi gayi... Ja shivani... Bhag... Jaldi...
Without takinga breath also shivani ran out taking his deadly life together...
Manik shouts for his main bodyguard ...
Manik: jao uss ladki ko le kar aayo...
The Goon ran behind shivani...
Shivani while running : heh bhagwan... Ek ladki ke picche itna bada gunda pade hain... Hai bhagwan... Kai ho gaya hai inn insano ko... Par mein bhag kuin rahi huin... Mujhe aise hi black belt nahi bulate...
Shivani stoped and also the goon...
Goon: kya hua... Dar gayi kya...
Shivani : tuu... Tuu..tuu... Ab tera kya hoga kaliya...
As the fight started shivani invaded his mouth, he heaved with nausea...
He fell backwards onto the floorboard with her on top of him. She weighed more than he did.


Shivani : ab uth ke dikha...
Goon: arre meri maa... Uth... Uth ke fighting kar...
Shivani : ok if u insist...
shivani instantly got up from the goon and is ready to give him a nice thrash...
The goon moved, damned fast. So fast that shivani nearly missed seeing it. Shivani's body seemed to react on its own, without conscious thought. She slid to her right, opposite to the direction she had been circling as the goon rushed her. Shivani's vision blurred as she felt little bit uneasy...


The man threw a block with his left hand, tried to hook shivani's left leg with his own. Shivani turned forward and to his right, slapping his left hand against the middle of his opponent's back as she slid past. The blow caught her opponent and he fell on the ground senseless...


Shivani: mujhse panga lene chala thq...
Suddenly kunj reached the place...
Kunj: shivani tu thik toh hai na... Aur isse kya hua...
Shivani : arre maine kiya hai yeh sab..
Kunj: tu bhi kya kya karti rahti hai...
Chod... Chal...
Kunj drags shivani away...
Manik reached the place where his goon was lying...
Manik : itna khilaya pilaya... Shrif yahi baki tha... Ek ladki mar ke gayi tujhe...
I will not spare her... Mil ja kabhi...

So how was the chappy
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Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Please post in title when you post
Itne updates ho gaye and patah bhi nahi chala
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
amazing update for long time u come in back and manik rude behaviour super and shivani naughty awsum
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
aw so finally Nandini is back let see now will manik na nandini aka Shivani will meet
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