Manan SS - Kitni mohaabat hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys i am
MANAN FF KITNI MOHAABAT HAI
new to this forum and this is my first fan fiction...if u want me to continue this story plz comment and let me know here is the
short summary...
Manik is going to put sindoor to her bride in his marriage ceremony but suddenly in the background it is seen that a girl is running and approching towards manik in a great speed at suddenly threw the sindoor from manik's hand...
Who was this girl????
Why she did so?????
To know all the answers of questions plz read my story and enjoy it...



CHAPTER 1
It is the time of manik's marriage ceremony... The scene is At mukti aliya and navay's house ... All are ready . Cabir an dhruv have also arrived but navya is not ready
Mukti: chalo sab aa gaye abhi hum chalte hai..
Aliya: nahi abhi tak navya nahi ayi hai
Mukti: oh god ye mata rani hamesha itna late kuin karte hai...aja toh cabir bhi time pe aa gaya hai..
Cabir: (sadly approaching towards mukti) mein toh hamesha hi time pe ata huin ...tum sab hi jaldi aa jate ho aur muje kutte ki tarah marte ho...
Aliya: guys abhi yeh dekho ki navya kuin nahi ayi hai...
Dhruv:aliya , tumkitne sahi ho...
Mukti: mein dekh ke ati huin..(goes towards navya's room)
In navya's room navya is busy in searching something
Navya: hey mata rani jaldi se muje mil jaye ..use hi late ho gayi huin aur mukti abhi ati hi hogi mere saar par guitar bajane...

Mukti enters...navya busy in searching
Mukti:hello madam jana nahi hai kya???
Navya ignoring mukti...
Mukti: yeh kya doond rahi ho tum??
Navya: are mere woh favourite wali ghagracholi nahi mil rahi hai...
Mukti: (laughing loudly) surely navya tum woha ghagra choli pahenkarjaogi..
Navya: kuin nahi pehen sakte...
Cabirs entry
cabir: kya hua mukti..mere bina hans rahi ho... Muje bhi batao..
Mukti:navya madam woha ghagracholi pehenkar jane wale hai..
Cabir:ane do na usse ghagra pehenkar...
Navya : dekha(smiling)
Mukti:cabir kya bol raha hai tu
Cabir:are sun woha to isse koi dekhne wala toh hai nahi toh ye jo bhi pahene kya pharak padta hai...
Mukti an cabir both start laughing loudly...
Aliya souts : arejaldi aao dar ho jaye ga..
Mukti brings a jeanes and tops for navya and told her to wear any of these and navya get dressed up soon...
Aliya(shocked):ye mein kya dekh rahi huin navya iss getup mein...i cant believe...
Navya: kuin hum kuin nahi pehen sakte ye saab...
Mukti:ab ye navya puran band karo aur chalo jaldi...
Cabir: are muje chod kar kahan ja rahe ho muje bhi lay jao...and runs out of the door...
And they all left for the marriage ceremony of manik and nandini...
Now our frnds are in the bus . They have already reached the palace...everyone is awake accept cabir...
Mukti:cabir uth na spot aa gaya hai
Cabir: (in a sleepy manner)sone do na...
Aliya:ab isse kaise utaye???
Dhruv:hamare pani ki bottle mein bhi pani nahi hai...
Mukti: mere pas ek aur idea hai...
Dhruv and aliya: kya???
Mukti: tum log dekhte jao...
And suddenly mukti bends down and take out cabir's shocks and placed it on his nose..dhruv and aliya were shocked...
Mukti: 1 2 3..
Cabir: yakkk... Chi chi kitna ganda smell hai...mukti tune apna shocks muje sunghaya...
Mukti:hamne to tumhe uthaya thaa par tu nahi utha... By the was ye tera shocks tha...
Dhruv and aliya: haha ha ha ha ha...
And all of them went inside the palace...


CHAPTER 2
Now it is seen that manik and nandini are sitting in the balcony and talking to each other...
Nandini: manik mein tumhe 2 question puchugni aur tum muje yes ya no me ans doge
Manik: ok pucho...
Nandini: ques no 1) do u like me???
Manik:no
Nandini:2)can u live for me???
Manik:no
Nandini gets angry from manik's answers and works inside the room.. Manik follows her.
Manik:nandini kaha ja rahi ho ruko...
Nandini:muje tumse bat hi nahi karni...
Manik: mera pura answer to sun lo...
I dont like u , i love u
i couldnot live for u , i would die without u ...
Hearing this nandini's sweet heart melts and she gives her a tight hug...
Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey..
welcum to IF.. :)
story seems Interestng..
Cntinue soon..
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Welcome to forum dear...
Interesting start...
Update soon...
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Welcome 2 forum yaar...
Interestin prologue...
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 d update..

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Sounds interesting...
Superb prologue...
Luved it...
Plz update soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Welcome to forum...
Interesting topic...
Meine toh title dekh ke khola tha... because i love that show arjun aarohi... hope something like show happen...
cont soon..
Plz pm me when u update...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 2 (CONTINUED)
Mukti aliya dhruv cabir and navya entered the palace and met manik and nandini there...
Mukti: nadini kya lag rahi hai tu!!!!
Aliya: yah looking very pretty...
Nandini:chalo guys mein tum logo ko tumhara room dikhate huin...
Cabir:nandini manik kaha hai...
Nandini : dekh lo yahi kahi hoga..
Cabir started searching manik... Suddenly he heard a sound from his back..
Waitor: hey hey... Ruko tum..
Cabir:kaun mein?
Waitor:ha tum...kitne kam chor ho tum tumhe subah bulaya tha jhadoo pocha marne ke liye aur tum abhi aa rahe ho...
Cabir: ek minute bhaisahab ap muje kya samajh rahe ho???
Waitor : ar e tum to wohi gadhe safai wala hao na...
Cabir: mein ap ko safai karne wala lagta huin ...etna handsome well dressed ladka safai bala kaise ho sakta hai ...mein guest huin..
Waitor: sry sir muje laga wo kambakt safai bala hai app...sry
Manik arrives
manik:kya hua yaha??
Cabir: bhai tere waitor ko mein safai karne wala lag raha huin..
Manik(laughing loudly) waitor bhai sahi ja rahe ho...
Cabir:kya bhai mere majak bana ke rakh dia tune...tum sale dost nahi ho ...vampire hi jo hans hans ke mera koone chus rahe ho...
Manik: chal yar tuje tumhara rum dikha deta huin..aur he huliya badal le...warna koi phir se tuje kuch aur samajh lega(started laughing)
cabir dissappointedly works with manik towards his room...
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CHAPTER 3
After sometime every body is back for a get together in the garden...
Mukti:chalo aj kuch interesting karte hey...
Cabir: chalo mein aj tum sab ko mera bachhpan ki kahani sunati huin...to hua uin tha...
All of them souted:shut up cabir!!!!
Dhruv: manik aur nandini tum dono ki shadi hone wali toh aj tum dono ki prem kahani sunte hai...
Cabir:ha yaar tu to hamesha mere sath reheta tha toh phir ye pyaar kaise hua ...aja toh janna hi hai..
Mukti and aliya : ha ha batao
Manik staring at nandini constantly..
Cabir:ho ho...tum log apna eye eye khelna band karo aur batao. .
Manik: ok toh hum dono ki story kuch is tarah se suru hui thi...
Muje aja bhi yaad hai ache se...Us din mera gadi kharap ho gayi thi to main pehli bar metro mein baitha tha kuinki mere office mein mera pehela din tha.us time yeh madam doodte doodte aa rahi thi ...
Black hills...neavy blue legins...sleeve less white kurti...open hair ...kajal filled eyes and a cute purse on her hand...
Nandini:us din as usual mera metro chut gaya tha aur mein platform pe bhaj rahi thi...
Mukti:to ye thi tumhari 1st meet..
Manik: kaha yaar inke chahare par toh bal uud rahe the...maine esse help karne ke liya hath badhaya ...
Cabir:2nd dilwale dulhania le jayenge...
Nandini:meine bohat muskil se manik ka hat pakda
Manik:aur meine nandini ko jor se kincha...aur accidently woh mere upar gir gaye ...par us wakht maine uska chahera nahi dekh paya tha kuinki turnel mein bahut andhera tha...
At that moment...in the background a song was played...
TUMKO CHHU KE BHI CHHUNE KO KARTA HAI
PAKE BHI PANE KO KARTA HAI DIL
AWARAGI AANE LAGI
SAANSON MEIN KHUSBU CHANE LAGI
DIL PE DIWANGI CHA GAYI ISS KADAR
BAND AANKHON SE BHI MUJE AYI NAZAR
KAISE KAHEIN HUME KITNI MOHABBAT HAI
HA MOHABBAT HAI
KITNI MOHABBAT HAI...


Nandini: or uske bad mera stop aa gaya aur muje utarna pada...
Manik: to aise thi hamare paheli andekhi meet

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 4
PAST STORY GOES ON LIKE THIS
Nandini: oh god aj plz mere job ho jaye T - series main plz
And wishing for a job nandini enters the office of manik.. And se mets soha and harshat there ...
Soha: security security...
Guard: yes madam
soha: kin aere gere ko office mein gusa dete ho
Nandini: mein yaha job ke liye aayi huin mam...plz mam muje yeh job ki bahut jarurat hai...
Soha:hamare company mein bahut singers hain hum aur kisi ko nahi rakh sakte...jao nikal jao yaha se
And soha insults nandini and send her back...
Nandini sat on a bench infront of maniks company and started crying ...
Nandini: mere sath hi ase kuin hota hai(crying)
thera a small child came
child : didi kuin ro rahi ho...
Nandini: muje yaha singing ka job nahi mila...
Child:ap gate ho??
Nandini:hmmm
child:to muje bhi sunao na...
At the same time when nandini started singing manik was just entering to his companys gate and suddenly stops by listening her voice
HUM TERE BIN AB RAHE NAHI SAKTE
TERE BINA KYA WAJOOD MERE
TUJHSE JUDA AGAR HO JAYENGE TO
KHUDSE HI HO JAYENGE JUDA
manik is still standing mesmorisingly ...
AB TUM HI HO AB TUM HI HO
JINDAGI AB TUM HI HO
CHEN BHI MERA DARD BHI MERE AASIQUE
AB TUM HI HO...
Child: didi apka kam ho gaya (runs away)
manik slowly approaching towards nandini
Manik:excuse me!!!
Nandini:yes
Manik:Im manik malhotra is company ke malik
tum mere company mein job karna chahoge??
Nandini: mein gayi thi ap ki company mein par madam ne muje insult karke nikal diya
Manik: (angrily) tum chalo mere sath
manik entered the office an started souting
Manik: soha soha soha
soha: ha manik i m here bolo
manik(very angrily) ye yahan aayi thi??
Soha is silent
manik:mein kuch puch raha huin
soha : ha
manik:kise puch kar tumne isse nikala..
soha: manik tum us doo koudi ki ladki ke liye muje dant rahi ho...
Manik: koi Aam ladki nahi hai ye..bahut acha gati hai..i think ye hamare company keprogress mein bahut help karegi..
Soha: but manik...
Manik:i dont want to listen any thing...my decision is final.
Nqndini is very happy and thanks god for this job...


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CHAPTER 5
The first day in the office ...nandini is very much excited ...she enters the office and neets navya and cabir there
Cabir: arre tum nandini ho na...jo bahut acha gati hai...
Nandini: ha sir
Cabir:thank god is company mein koi to mere barabar ka ayya hai...
Navya: nandini kya tumhe pata hai ki kuute kis tarah se gate hai..
Nadini(confusd) :nahi
navya:to cabirko bolo tumhe gaa kar sunaye tumhe pata chal jayega...
Cabir: kya mein kutte ki tarah gata huin...
Thik hai agar mein kuuta to tum kutti...navya ki bacchi
navya: mein kya tumhare girlfriend huin jo mein kutti huinge...
Navya started laughing... Manik's entry ...
Manik: kya chal raha he yaha...
Yey office hai koi laughter club nahi hai...
Soha entered..
Soha: manik , i think jo rules sabke liye hai wasse nandini ko manna hoga..hope so ki tume is ladki ke liye koi rules change nahi karoge...
Manik: what do u think soha...ye accha gati hai isiliye maine use job pe rakha..i dont have any other intension( taking a pause)... Usse bhi jo rules sab ke liye hai wow nandini par bhi lagu hoga..
Nandini:muje kya karna hai sir???
Manik: tumhe pehele assistant ban kar training lena padega or phir ja ke tum tayaar hoge puri tarah se gane ke liye .tumhe 2 log training denge...pehla main dunga aur dusra harshat dega...abhi tum wo pichle sal ki list layo
nandini: ok sir...
Maniks cabin...manik and soha are sitting...nandini entered
nandini: sir ye ligeye list ...
Nandini gives the list to manik...
Manik: what the hell is this...ye trainers itne irregular kaise ho sakte hai???ek bar inka salary nahi milega toh inhe samajh aaye ga
Nandini: i m sry sir lekin hum is tarah se unka salary cut nahi kar sakte...unke koi mujburi ho sakte hai unhe puchhe bager...
Soha: tum manik ke decision ko galat kaha rahe ho??
Manik(standing an coming near nandini) ab tum muje batao ge ki muje kya karna hai kya nahi karna hai...tum hote kun ho muje bolne wali...just get out frm here...muje jo karne hai main karunga...
Nandini became upset and went out of the room...
Navya: kya hua nandini itne upset kuin ho
cabir:manik ne kuch kaha kya...
Nandini: wo itne rude kuin hai...
Cabir: wo bas uprse rude hai par dil ka acha hai...useke maa ne use dhoka dene ke bad woh itna rude and arrogant ban gaya hai an d specially towards the girls..
Nandini: kya kiya unke maa ne..
Cabir: let it be tumhe janne ki zarurat nahi hai...uske maa ki bat usse kabhi mat puchna...
Nandini: thik hai...and works out
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